A/N: Here we are again. I felt I should mix things up a bit this chapter... Also someone mentioned a theme song for my characters? I don't know. I'll do more next week, but if you really want one for Broly; his theme song right now would be 10's by Pantera. You can look it up on any site that lists music videos. Also, I only wrote this story on Sundays, because I really didn't think people would like it, but since you all do, I'll devote time every day to telling Broly's story, thus increasing the chapter length. Updates will still be every Sunday evening. Enjoy.
Author: SSJGodBroly
Editor for this chapter: Mattix Ultimate
Best Fanbase Ever: You Guys! ;D (Totally not kissing up or anything)
Mattix: Remind me to remove that part next time. Also, I'm sneaking my phone away to edit while grounded. Be grateful, or else. -.-
Now we continue where we left off…
Chapter 4 – Deranged Warrior
The most powerful warrior in the universe had just subdued the new leader of the race his people hated with a fiery passion. Was he in a good mood? You could say that, since thirsting for bloodshed is his only mood.
"Where is the nearest planet?" Broly turned to the king as the noise from his question died down in the dead quiet of the now-destroyed throne room. Karchare however refused to speak, instead signifying with his finger the closet dwarf planet he could remember.
Broly's grin could only be classified as that of a demon, when he thanked Karchare before launching an Eraser Cannon in the direction he specified. Karchare could only stare dumbfounded. What have I done? Those words bit into his conscience like a rabid wolf as the sky lit up a sickly green from the planet he pointed at being obliterated in an instant.
"Oops. Did I blow it up?" Broly laughed, his golden hair rippling with the motion. Karchare could only stare at him dumbfounded.
These Saiyans are monsters… Icar, I hope you're okay.
Broly's head snapped to his left. As he stared into the distance Karchare finally dared to speak. "What is it?" Broly grinned in response.
"I think we have a visitor, Your Majesty."
Karchare's head perked up at this. Who could it be? He didn't have to wonder long as a purple streak came and crashed to a landing in front of them both. When the energy faded, Icar was standing there, fully-powered and in his fifth form.
"Where is Pirosuka? Did you hurt him?!"
A sinister smile slowly spread across Broly's features as he looked at Icar. "Hurt him? Me? Never. No, I KILLED him!" Icar's red eyes seemed to narrow at his words, and his aura flared up.
"You…Killed him?! I'll kill you!" Icar went to throw his strongest punch at Broly. The Super Saiyan just sat there and let it hit him directly in the cheek. Caught off-guard by the punches power Broly was thrown back a few feet.
"So, the little runt has some fight left, does he?"
Karchare looked between the two fighters amazed at their power. Icar… That single punch had more power than any attack I've ever been able to use, yet he shrugged it off like it was nothing. What IS he?!
As the king was reflecting, Broly smiled; a genuine smile, unlike the malicious grins he normally displays. "I like you kid. You've got spunk. I'll kill you quickly." Icar's eyes spread wide.
"W-What?" Then his world went black as Broly's fist connected with his face mask.
Karchare stared as Broly smashed his son's face mask in on him. "No!" He could take no more, but as he rose to attack Broly, the brute nailed him in the stomach with a smoothly placed fist.
"Stay down, worm. You'll get your turn." Karchare looked up at Broly with pure hatred in his eyes. When he caught his breath he finally spoke:
"Don't speak to me like that, you Saiyan trash. I am Karchare, King of Arcos, and new head of the Planet Trade Organization. You WILL treat me with some semblance of respect."
Broly's eye twitched. He walked over to Karchare and drew his fist back. The king flinched under Broly's gaze and threatening pose. As he braced for the worst, he heard laughing up above him. What? Was the first word to cross Karchare's mind as he looked up at the god-like creature before him. He was laughing. Laughing at him, he realized. "Grrr stop mocking me!" Broly could only laugh harder. When his laughter died down, he looked at the frost demon.
"Congratulations, you're the king, but guess what? I am Broly, the Devil himself. My power is unlimited; I AM INVINCIBLE! You, however, are very limited, weakling." Broly proceeded to kick Karchare across the throne room into what was left of the wall. "As I said; stay down." Broly heard groaning behind him, and grinned. Ah, the prodigal son returns to the world of the living.
Icar groaned as he awoke, tasting blood. That demon, he punched my face mask in. Icar knew without trying to talk his jaw was definitely broken, He touched around his mouth with his tongue, finding out he was missing several teeth. He looked around not seeing them anywhere. I must've swallowed them. He managed to get to his feet, and then a shadow fell over him. Icar turned around slowly, seeing Broly towering above him.
"Why hello, little one. Care to die?"
Broly grinned as he saw the fear in the child's eyes, before hitting him with a massive clothesline and dragging him across the room, finally slamming him into the wall next to his father. He watched as the child fell onto the ground next to the king, then Broly placed his foot on Icar's head. Hitting Karchare awake with a ki blast, Broly watched, amused, as he looked around only to find his son close to death, with the Devil's foot placed squarely in the middle of the side of his head. "Icar, no!" Broly grinned as he heard those words.
"Tell me Karchare, how much do you love your son?"
Hearing Broly say that pushed Karchare over the edge. He screamed with rage as he jumped to his feet. I have to use everything I have left! I can't let my son die! Karchare was the spitting image of his father Cooler, and he knew it. If his father and son could stand up to the Saiyans, well why couldn't he? He could feel the power, sitting there. He just had to reach out and take it for himself, yet every time he tried, his father was there, sitting in his way, making fun of him for being so weak. "I'M NOT WEAK!" An explosion of energy rocked the landscape as Icar took that power for himself, casting his father aside, and becoming his own man.
To Broly, all this happened rather quickly. He watched dumbfounded as Karchare screamed out, and then as a purple orb of light surrounded him. "This power… He wasn't this strong before. It's growing, surpassing his son's already, and still rising! This is impossible. He's equal to my base state now, but it's still growing!" When the orb of light shattered, and Karchare stood there, in the fifth form of his species, face mask on, staring at Broly, his power topped off, being dead even with Broly's max Super Saiyan power. Broly glared at the frost demon.
"Seems your power isn't so limitless after all, Saiyan," Icar said, his eyes narrowing to almost slits. Broly just let a smile show.
"My power IS maximum, you fool." Broly let his head fall back as he screamed a guttural cry of pain, allowing his Legendary power to burst forth, quite literally from his body. Karchare stared at the orb of green light before him.
"Did he just explo-" He was cut off as he ducked to avoid an Eraser Cannon that was aimed for his head.
When Karchare looked back up, he saw how Broly had changed. For one, his pupils were gone, now replaced by nothing but pure white, his muscles had bulged out extraordinarily, making his height of 7 feet 9 inches go up to an astonishing 9 feet of nothing but muscle. His golden hair had all spiked out except for four locks, which cascaded across his forehead, and it had also taken on a sickly green color mixing in with the gold.
Looking down on the tall frost demon, Broly's true self grinned wide, as a shadow fell across his face. He pointed at Karchare before plainly stating; "You will die here, along with every member of your race. Welcome to the slaughterhouse! Ahahaha!" Broly's laugh could be heard echoing far off into the distance, as children across the planet cried out in fear.
Karchare realized just how hopeless it was to fight back. He dropped to his knees, where he noticed his son, reverted back to his fourth form, passed out behind the monster's feet. Seeing his son so helpless, allowed him to grasp his resolve again. "No matter how helpless this is. I will not let you harm my child!" Karchare flew at Broly full speed with his fist cocked back.
Broly simply backhanded him away before turning around to Icar. "Harm him? Why I couldn't harm a fly!" Broly held out his hand toward Icar with his fingers spread, and formed a massive Eraser Cannon, then fired it like a cannonball toward Icar. "Die little one, die!" Then, there was a green flash of light, a massive explosion, and Broly grinned at the broken body before him.
"Perfect."
Annnnd scene. So that's chapter 4. Poor Karchare, it's so hopeless for him. Or is it? Also I felt I should state I do not own the picture for this story. I got it off Goggle. The original credit goes to the artist. Oh, and I said Broly would get a fight, so he will. Be prepared. Meh, Q&A time.
Q: No Icar fight, but mass destruction of his home planet? Meh, I'll take it since I love carnage and all that jazz. I find it interesting you decided to have the closer blood relationship with Cooler for Icar rather than having one with Frieza, since it seems like everyone decides to make an Arcosian OC try to be from a direct bloodline with Frieza. In your review response, you said Icar is 14 years old. Is he 14 human years old or is he 14 Arcosian years old? Cheers for more carnage in the next chapter! :D
A: 14 human years, so he's younger I believe. And I like Cooler/Kooler more than Frieza, honestly. That's why.
Q: So Broly is roughly Cell strength, well, Arcos is screwed, the the late King Cold in his theoretical 4th form would have been able to stand up to him, and that's just maybe...
A: Cell Strength? Interesting theory, but don't forget, he got a zenkai from the Kamehameha, along with all the time that passed while he was frozen? If I could say without giving too much away, tapping into his LSSJ strength, then going full power? He could beat Super Perfect Cell.
Q: Great chapter! I always enjoy picturing broly dominate someone. So I wonder how things will go now ? And this karchare is supposed to be the new king of Arcos ? Hmm, interesting. And will we see any female Arcosians soon ? And I certainly do hope you have some really powerful foes for broly to fight and test himself against. And also learn from. Also don't forget saiyans possess the unique ability to duplicate ki techniques just from seeing them. Both goku and vegeta have shown this ability. Goku did when he saw Master roshi do the kamehameha only once as a child. And vegeta did it with the ki sensing technique. Knowing that should be very beneficial to broly's development as a fighter. Not only should he grow from his tough battles but he should also learn from them. And remember good fight scenes are always one of the most crucial parts in a good DBZ story. Looking forward to your next update.
A: Broly can sense ki, as you've seen from this chapter. However, it's not as refined as any of the z-fighters, he can only tell if their power is above a certain level and he can only tell their general direction.
Q: Yay! Now the story's starting to really get interesting, with more characters introduced. I like how you're utilizing all the names/personalities I suggested. My prediction is that either Pirosuka is dead, prompting a rage boost for Icar, or he's badly injured, so that'll give him a smaller burst of anger. Not enough to be equal to Broly, but maybe enough to catch him off guard?
A: And this is exactly why I waited for the Q&A to answer this. The story is picking up, finally! I love this prediction, but, you were close. I had something a little different in mind. I also love cliffhangers. It'd also be a waste if I didn't use those names. Again, thanks for them.
See ya later!
