A/N: As of writing this, life-delays have suspended my writing until now, 10:30 P.M. on Wednesday night. I got hired, in case anyone was wondering, and I start work tomorrow night. From 10:00 P.M. to 7 A.M. I will be working. I plan to devote what time I can to this story. Broly must have his moments. Of course, so will the others, as you'll see….

But anyway, to answer the inevitable complaints of Broly being a Gary Stu; guys, he's BROLY. He is Gary Stu personified in the DBZ world. If I can convincingly write Broly losing a fight, I gladly will, however it will be very difficult, considering he's Broly, and all he does is dominate others in a fight. I will try though, you have my word. Also, for now, a theme song for Pirosuka would be Someone Who Cares by Three Days Grace. I had that song playing while writing all his scenes this chapter. It fit perfectly. I recommend you play it when you reach him this chapter, and while you read him.

Broly gets his first fight guys! Yay! Enjoy!

Mattix: I'm observing Broly's fight scenes so that I can know what not to do xD

Now that's not very nice at all…

Author: SSJGodBroly

Editor for this chapter: Mattix Ultimate, the Ultimate Mattix. :|

Also, I edited this from 2-4 am, so cut me a break if it's a piece of Shin.

Now we continue where we left off…

Chapter 5 – KAKAROT!

King Kai was in Otherworld, trying to find something to do to annoy West Kai, when his antennae twitched. "Oh no… This power…" Focusing, he tried to send a telepathic message to Goku. He already knew where to look, as the fighter was almost always training with his latest protégée Uub.

Goku was having another sparring match with Uub, for the million upon millionth time that day, when he heard a familiar voice in his head. "Goku! Can you hear me?" Signaling for Uub to stop and take a break, Goku looked up towards the heavens. "Oh, hey King Kai! It's been a while, huh? How are ya?!" "Goku we don't have time for that right now." "Why not, King Kai? What's so serious that it could kill even your sense of humor?" "I'll give you a hint Goku. Why don't you try sensing for any high power levels right now?" "High power levels? Well… alright, but I don't see why-Whoa! This power!"

Goku was momentarily stunned as he sensed the enormous power off in space. "This power… It feels like Broly! King Kai, is this, what you wanted me to feel?" "Yes. I don't know how, Goku, but somehow Broly has survived again! And he's terrorizing Frieza's home planet!" "Frieza's home, huh? Man, I really didn't like that guy… But the rest of his race hasn't done anything bad that I know of, yet, so technically they're still innocent lives… I'd better go stop Broly." "I don't think this should be any problem for you Goku. What are you…Ah, I see. You're going to let Uub fight him, aren't you?" "You bet!"

Uub, having heard the entire thing, since King Kai was generous enough to include him in his messages, furrowed his brow. "Do you think I'm ready Goku?" "Only one way to find out Uub!" Goku smiled his signature grin, and grabbed Uub's shoulder, putting two fingers to his forehead. They disappeared, with no more than the sound of wind being displaced.

Broly laughed as the broken child lay before him. "Look who's still alive? Isn't that wonderful, Icar? You can watch him die in person now!" Icar, having been awakened by the blinding flash of green light, saw the mangled and charred form of his best friend lying before him.

"Pirosuka, no!" Icar reached out to grab his closest friend, as Pirosuka outstretched his hand towards Icar. But before they could show one last act of friendship, Pirosuka was slowly enveloped by a massive dark green orb of light. Before his face was swallowed however, a single tear was shown falling down his face, demonstrating that even Frost Demons can care for one another, no matter differences in social status. Seeing this tear, Icar could recall happier times; times where they were actually happy.

Flashback

"Come ooooooon Suten! We're gonna be late!" Suten, ever the compliant, just rolled his eyes and chased off after the child frost demon. Icar, having gotten far ahead at this point, heard rather than saw what sounded like a fight. He ran to get a closer look, seeing a circle of more teenage-looking Arcosians, surrounding what looked like a child, just like him. To make matters worse, they were entering the circle one at a time and beating on the child!

"Hey! Stop that!" The whole group turned to look at the prodigal son of Arcos. "Hey guys, look, it's the king's brat." "Hey, what do you say we beat the respect into him his bum father refuses to?" One of the bigger ones, a brute by the name of Baan, walked toward Icar. His face held a strange mix of contempt and disgust.

Before Baan could do anything though, a very feminine voice called from the back: "Haha, boys will be boys, always needing to gang up on the weaker folk. Tell me, Baan, what will this accomplish? The child is the king's son after all. Do you really wish to incite his wrath?" Baan, who was currently in his species' first form, like the rest of the group he was with, just stood there, stoic, as she tried her typical mind-games. "Arya, what are you doing here?"

She was in their species fourth form, having been training to be a guard for the Royal Family, before hearing the scuffle going on, and rushed to see what, exactly? These 6 foolish boys, thinking that by ganging up on a child, they would be considered strong. She'd have seen no problem with it if it was someone their own age, but just a child? That was unacceptable.

"What I'm doing here? None of your business. What is your business, however, is that I'm far more powerful than you, children, so if you wish to throw your lives away by 'attempting' to gang up on me, I won't sto- Ah," Arya said as someone landed a few feet away. "It seems you've finally arrived, Head Guard Suten." She bowed, showing him the proper respect he earned by always being loyal to the Royal Family whenever needed.

"I am sorry I was late. This child is a very nimble one. Not quite unlike the young king, when he was a boy." Arya laughed at this remark, remembering just how old Suten really was. He was the first volunteer for the Royal Guard, formed shortly after Frieza's son Kuriza took the throne.

Like Arya, Suten was constantly in his fourth form, to provide an example for his troops to follow, and also give them something to aspire for, while making it 'child's play', so to speak, to defend the Royal Family. He could make it from one side of the planet to the other within a matter of seconds. Icar, however, was just extremely good at avoiding him, for whatever reason. She'd have to dwell on that later. He was speaking now:

"You boys have been giving us a lot of trouble lately. I also heard you threaten the prince. Do you know what that means for you?" The whole group, all of them, spread like a wildfire, going in all directions just to avoid Suten's wrath. He would have none of it. "Tend to the child there, Arya. I shall take care of them." Arya bowed as he vanished. She then straightened herself, and walked over to the bruised and bleeding child on the ground. She knelt near him, investigating his injuries. She sighed as she stood up.

"I'm afraid it would cost more resources than we can afford to lose, in order to save this child. Those foolish kids will face the consequences of this. But this child cannot survive. They broke too much, damaged too many internal organs. Our healing tanks are still full from the last attack…" She shuddered at the thought. "No, I will free this child from this prison of a life. Goodbye, young o-Ah!"

She was cut off, as a Death Beam pierced through the back of her skull from behind. Her brain was cooked like a turkey in an oven, except flash fried, at two million degrees. She dropped dead, no amount of healing tank time able to save her now, as Baan stood behind her grinning. "Stupid…Bitch…" He collapsed dead. Many holes littered his body, where Suten fired multiple Death Beams through him.

Suten appeared a moment later, to see Arya and Baan dead. "Damn! I thought I killed him! He was always a conniving bastard…" Suten turned as he saw Icar running towards the broken child. "No Icar, leave that child alone! Someone as high as you cannot be seen with an Earth-clan member! Think of the ridicule you'll suffer!"

Icar however wasn't listening. Completely ignoring his trainer and mentor all-together, he scooped up the child, who was no bigger than he was, and flew off as fast as he could towards the nearest medical center. A single tear was rolling down his face. I cannot let him die. No matter what it takes, I won't allow it!

"Pirosuka… M-My name... It's Pirosuka." Pirosuka and Icar were sitting, cross-legged across from each other, finally meeting, without anything crazy happening.

"Hi, Pirosuka. I'm Icar."

"Yes, I know. You're the prince. Why would you help me? You know how low-ranking I am…"

Icar leaned forward to look at Pirosuka closely. "Does it matter? A life is a life, no matter their ranking, or moral standards. A life should be saved, if it can be. But, don't concern yourself with why I saved you. Focus on how." Pirosuka rubbed the end of his tail absent-mindedly.

"Yeah, how did you manage that?"

"Well… It's a long story…"

"…and I had taken some almost healed warrior out of his healing tank and placed you there. It took a few days, but you're better now." Pirosuka looked calm for someone who just learned he almost died. "Are you alright Pirosuka?" The child smiled, looking at Icar.

"Yeah, I'm fine. I just realized; it's great to have a friend like you. I've never had a friend before."

"Then how do you know we're friends?"

Pirosuka's smile only got wider. "I just know."

Icar smiled back. "Then we're friends."

"Make that friends forever," said Pirosuka, his grin wider than the Cheshire Cat.

They grasped each other's wrist, a smile shared between them, before nice, upstanding Suten interrupted it. "My liege, your father has requested your presence. Oh and bring that thing with you, too."

Icar gritted his teeth, noting Pirosuka's look of resignation. "He is my frie-" He glanced at Pirosuka again. "-My BEST friend, captain. You will treat him with respect, before you test just how forgiving I am." Suten, of course complied, dropping to one knee with his head bowed. "At your request, sir. However, I recommend you hurry. Your father is quite impatient today." Icar grimaced, remembering how arrogant and proud his father could be. He despised that, in anyone. "Very well. Let's go Pirosuka."

A few minutes later they were situated in front of Icar's father, the great king Karchare, while he glared at Pirosuka as if he was a pile of dirt. "Why is this thing in my throne room? Guards! Remove it at once!"

"YES SIR!" Two Royal Guard members, each equal in strength to Frieza's first form max, went to grab Pirosuka; however an enraged Icar sent a beam of energy through them both.

"This thing is a living, breathing, Arcosian, father." Icar put as much venom as he could into that one word before continuing. "He is my best friend, and will be treated as such. Understood?" Karchare pondered his son's words silently. Icar felt something tingle across the back of his neck, and then Pirosuka was gone. Almost as fast, the king raised his finger, and shot a Death Beam at seemingly nothing. Whenever Icar looked, however, he noticed Karchare had killed Suten, who was trying to take Pirosuka away. Icar turned to his father dumbstruck. "Father? Why?"

Karchare stared at him. "I saw your Great Uncle in you, when you killed my two men. Your anger took control and you lost your morals and pride. I WILL use that one day, until then, consider this a favor." Icar was dumbfounded. He was right. Icar had just taken not one life, but two. He was speechless. Pirosuka attempted to comfort him.

"Its fine, Icar. Sometimes you can't help but take a life."

"No, Pirosuka! They didn't need to die!"

"You did what you did Icar, there's no changing that. You can accept it, or let it eat you alive, but you have to move forward one way or the other."

Icar nodded, calming down enough to listen to his only friend. "You're right. Sometimes though, the person just doesn't deserve to live. I hope I never have to face someone who'll make me choose whether they live or die."

Pirosuka looked at him. You're only my age Icar, yet you speak and act as if you're a hundred years old sometimes. I'll never understand it.

"Pirosuka," The child was snapped out of his thoughts by Icar's voice.

"Yeah Icar?"

"I'm going to leave this planet one day. I'm going to follow in my uncle Kuriza's footsteps and get far away from here. I don't know when, but maybe I'll find my answer out there one day…"

End Flashback

Pirosuka was finally enveloped completely in the blast. It faded away, leaving only the scorched floor where Pirosuka once was. Broly raised his fist, but hesitated when he saw something he should have never stopped for. Icar was crying. Broly felt a cold hand close around his heart. What? What is this feeling?

Then the perfect word to describe it came to him. Guilt. I feel guilty for this! How, can I, Broly, feel guilty? I've destroyed an entire galaxy, and felt nothing, yet this child crying is making me feel guilt! He could try as hard as he like, but Broly could not bring himself to slam his fist down on Icar. Frustrated, Broly grabbed the child's ankle, and to rid himself of Icar's incessant crying; he threw him out into the horizon. I'll kill him later.

Broly turned around, to be greeted by a wonderful and strange sight. There was a small dark-skinned child with an afro in front of him with his arms crossed. And behind him… Behind him… It was… "K-Kakarot?!"

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"Kakarot!" Broly charged Goku, flying into a berserker rage. Goku allowed his power to flow forth, his golden aura blazing forward. Sparks surrounding him, and his rigid hair standing straight up, Goku transformed into Super Saiyan 2. Broly let all his limitations fall back and maxed out his current power. Goku noted the occasional spark in his aura. He must be equal to a newly achieved Super Saiyan 2. Broly, you continue to surprise me. However, his recent zenkai wasn't enough; Goku still outclassed him in strength and speed as Super Saiyan 2 alone.

Without trying Goku dodged every punch, kick, and clothesline Broly threw his way. "Broly I'm way out of your league. Why don't you fight that guy over there?" Goku managed to point to Uub for a second before having to dodge another kick.

"I'll kill him after you, Kakarot!" Goku's eyebrows knit together, thinking hard.

He could've killed that kid earlier, but I stopped Uub from helping, seeing Broly's inner battle. He could've killed that kid easily, but he didn't. Could there be hope for even Broly? Goku, distracted in his, thoughts took a fist straight to the side of the head, sending him back a few feet.

Goku smiled. "Hey, not bad Broly! Maybe you'll even pose a challenge for Uub here!" Goku patted his disciple on the back. "He'll never fight you with me here. I'll use instant transmission and go somewhere else, but I'll keep my senses trained on the battle. If you need me, I'll be here. You'll do great!" Goku disappeared before Uub could protest.

Broly looked around searching for him, trying to sense him; the bane of his existence. "You run like a coward Kakarot!" Uub walked toward Broly, summoning up his courage, and his power. Uub maxed out his strength, and Broly looked at the kid approaching him. "I know where Goku is, but you'll have to beat me to get that info."

"So Kakarot sends a child to the slaughter first then? Fine, you'll die anyway." Broly, allowing his power to max out once again, charged Uub at full speed. Uub countered Broly's first strike, using his momentum to plant a kick in Broly's chest. Uub then appeared behind Broly, hitting him into the ground with a double axe handle. Broly stood, relatively unharmed, and glared at Uub.

Uub was slowly gaining confidence realizing Broly had no official training. He couldn't fight. Well, he could, but the way he did showed he had no martial arts training. He relied on power and speed alone, without any skill being used. He was a brawler. Uub relaxed his mind as Broly rushed him once again.

To Uub, Broly was moving as fast as Uub could, which made this a dead even conflict. The good news for Uub was that this meant he could use his superior skill to gain the advantage.

To Broly, this runt was dodging Broly's every attack, and continuously getting hits in on him. It was frustrating. The good news for Broly was that his power could not be depleted. He could fight forever, while this weakling would eventually tire out.

The two warriors traded blows, with Uub mostly hitting Broly, and the legendary warrior getting the occasional hit on Uub. Though these blows were occasional, the strength behind them hurt, despite how even they were.

Karchare, who was watching all of this transpire, realized his opening was right in front of him. He climbed to his feet to run, only to be swallowed by a green sphere of energy, and obliterated by a massive explosion.

"No one will escape from me!" Uub stared dumbfounded at Broly. He was just taking all those hits from Uub, then out of nowhere formed an energy sphere and threw it downward. Now he knew what he was aiming for. Damn I should've known! Goku would've saved that guy! Uub, now angry, flared his aura. He rushed Broly, yelling his frustration. He was losing energy, and Broly was still at the same power as they started. He might've even gotten stronger since then!

Broly, seeing Uub's speed had slowed down, grinned and punched him across the sky. Chasing after him, Broly saw an occasional spark on the edge of his vision. Paying it no mind, he caught up to Uub and grabbed his wrist. Broly flew toward the ground at max speed, then using their momentum, once he hit the ground; he slammed Uub through the ground. Uub coughed up blood and tried to stand up, but before he could, Broly jumped onto him and used his body as a trampoline, stomping with both feet repeatedly. Uub felt each of his ribs break and cried out in pain, when a golden streak knocked Broly off of him.

"I'm sorry, Uub. I thought you could've handled it. Once I felt you and Broly's powers were even, I thought maybe. I can see I was wrong." Uub glanced up to see Goku standing above him. He smiled, his mouth full of blood, and then spit it out. "I'm sorry Goku, I tried." Goku smiled. "You did your best. I'll take care of it from here."

Once Broly's power passed his, it was hopeless for him. I'll have to take him to Korin for a senzu bean. Goku was interrupted in his thoughts as he felt Broly's power approach. Damn, even instant transmitting him to the other side of the planet didn't buy enough time.

Broly was furious. Kakarot had slammed into him, and then he was alone on some barren wasteland. He could still feel Kakarot's power, so that was the first thing he took off after.

"KAKAROOT!" Goku swore he heard that across the entire planet. He raised his guard and blocked as he felt more than saw Broly's fist connect with his wrist. Broly's eyes held pure hatred, and Goku noted the amount of sparks had increased. His power has grown from when he started fighting Uub… But it hasn't grown any other time. I wonder if his power only grows while in a battle he can't just win without trying.

Broly kept his assault, attacking Goku with his full power, putting everything he had into each punch and kick. Goku just kept blocking everything, which ticked Broly off to no end. He grabbed Goku's wrist, then slammed him into the ground. He proceeded to bring Goku over his head, and then slam him on the other side, doing this over and over again.

On one of these overhead passes Goku flared out his power, breaking free of Broly's grip, and flew back a few feet. Goku grinned; a simple grin full of the thrill of battle. He knew he could end this if he wanted, but what Broly did earlier made him not want to. That is; until he saw Broly throw his head back and scream in frustration.

Broly was livid. His power was maximum. Kakarot shouldn't be able to be above him like this! Broly grabbed all the strength he could from inside himself, and kept pushing it outward. He didn't stop, ignoring the pain, the burning, and kept pushing. He knew this couldn't be the limit to his power, his power was unlimited!

Broly felt the pain. It was unbearable. This wasn't supposed to be happening and he knew it, but he didn't care. He would do anything in the world to beat Kakarot, anything. He felt a power within himself, suppressed by the green of his legendary strength. He grabbed this power, and tore it free from its prison with all his might.

He screamed with pain as the power clashed with his legendary one. He wouldn't let this power slip free from his grasp, and forced it into the same place as his legendary. That's when it happened. When the two powers finally sat together and mixed, he ascended once again.

Goku went wide-eyed as he felt Broly's power. He knew what was happening, but decided to wait before transforming. He wanted to experience Broly's new power, just for a little bit, and then he'd stop him for good.

Broly's yell died down, as his newly-transformed state was finished. Lightning cascaded around his body, which had grown slightly taller; from 9 feet to 9 feet 2 inches. His hair was now slightly longer, but still stuck straight out. Two of the four locks of hair above his forehead that originally were sideways, stood up with the rest of his hair while the other two fell down over his forehead. His eyes were still pure white. This was nothing compared to the power he felt. With this power he could have pounded that runt Kakarot sent after him easily. In fact, he knew he could beat Kakarot's current power, as well.

Broly lowered his head to look at Goku. "Kakarot, do you see now? I cannot be beaten!" Goku felt Broly's power, and transformed to Super Saiyan 3 without even questioning it. Years of training made the actual transformation far easier, and he could easily hold it for longer; however he knew he would run out of time eventually. "Come on then Broly. Show me your power."

Broly grinned and allowed all of his new power to come to the surface. Goku went wide-eyed. "This strength! He's clearly a Super Saiyan 2, and yet his power is beyond what I've ever felt from myself or Vegeta as a Super Saiyan 2. I'll have to finish this quickly then. There's no sense in letting him grow stronger than this." Goku yelled at the top of his lungs, as he struggled to release his max power from within. The planet they were on shook as he powered up.

In Otherworld, all the Kais turned to watch the battle, feeling Goku's power even in another dimension. Back home, Gohan was helping Videl refine her technique, when he felt it. "Dad?" Training his senses more sharply he felt another power there, nowhere near his dad's or his, or even Vegeta's at this point; but beyond a Super Saiyan 2, for sure. Wait… I know this power. Gohan's eyes widened as he shared his revelation. "T-That's Broly!" Videl stopped what she was doing, feeling fear.

"B-Broly?!"

"Yeah, my dad must be fighting him. I can tell my dad's strength is above Broly's; it seems to have surpassed even mine… Dad, you said you wanted to spar again one day. I can see why now…"

Vegeta was spending time with Trunks, training him, when they both turned to the sky. "Kakarot… What are you doing?" Trunks, however, was focused on the other power. One he'll never forget.

"D-Dad… That's Broly he's fighting!"

"Broly?!" Vegeta focused on the other power. "I see… Broly still isn't strong enough to beat me or Kakarot, or his son for that matter, but this power is unsettling… How is he even alive?"

In a beautiful wasteland, with some nice cacti, and peaceful animals; Piccolo was meditating, when he felt the power growing in the back of his mind. Honing his senses; his eyes snapped open. "Broly?!"

Tien was taking Chiaotzu to McDonald's when they both felt the powers battling each other. Chiaotzu trembled in fear as they stopped in mid-flight to focus on the fight. "Do you feel that Chiaotzu?"

"Yes, can we hurry up and get McDonald's before we see the fight Tien?"

"Yeah, alright little guy." Come on Goku; win.

Krillin and Eighteen were hanging out at Kame House with Master Roshi, Oolong, Yamcha, and Puar, when they all jumped up, feeling the massive power levels weighing on their minds. Krillin clenched his fist, remembering the lower one. "Guys... That second power level… It's Broly."

Yamcha felt it important to state the obvious at this point, "Yeah but Goku is far ahead of him. Piece of cake, haha. Right guys?"

"I'm afraid not Yamcha." Master Roshi said solemnly. "With Broccoli coming back twice now, we have to think the worst. He may just be un-killable." They all lowered their heads as the fight raged between the two warriors.

Goku was easily avoiding Broly's attacks. At Goku's current level, Broly seemed to be moving as if through pudding. Through Broly's eyes, Goku was moving too fast for him to see. Then Goku found an opening and drove his fist home into Broly's gut. He went to punch Broly, but it was only a feint, and Goku drove his knee into Broly's gut, hitting it once again. He wasn't done though; he cupped his hands together and slammed them into Broly's gut once, twice, three times, before kicking him away.

Goku backed up until he felt there was enough room between the two, then he put his hands out in front of him, the bottoms touching, fingers spread.

"KA-"

He brought his hands to his side, as Broly finally recovered from the earlier blows.

"ME-"

Broly took off at full speed toward Goku, flaring his aura as he did, sending lightning cascading everywhere.

"HA-"

A blue orb of energy appeared between Goku's hands, as he was finishing his signature attack.

"ME-"

Broly charged a light green ball of energy with lightning surrounding it in his hand as he reached Goku. Broly drove the ball of energy into his chest, causing a blinding explosion to encompass them both.

"HAAAAA!"

Goku appeared out of Instant Transmission about 10 feet behind Broly, firing his Super Kamehameha at him. Broly turned around to see Goku's blue beam approaching him. Not again! These words passed through Broly's mind as he caught the beam in the palms of his hands. He was trying his hardest to hold it back, and he was succeeding too.

Goku grimaced as Broly fought against his attack. Knowing how serious this was now, Goku poured more power into the Kamehameha, which made it finally overwhelm Broly.

Feeling the flesh burning on his palms, Broly lost his grip on the beam, and before it could swallow him whole, he let out one more guttural cry of anger and frustration.

"KAKAROOOOOOOOOOOT!"

CLIFFHANGER!

C'mon. You know I had to have one somewhere. Thanks to Captain Space for inspiring the pseudo-LSSJ2 of Broly's this chapter. To the guy I said there wouldn't be any extra forms; I'm sorry. I kinda changed my mind. Hope you'll forgive me.

Thank you to Roketto for the names, again. Terribly sorry guys, but me, and names for my OC's, just DO NOT get along.

Wow, this chapter was about 5,000 words long. I actually wrote two separate chapters, then merged them. So, onto Q&A.

Q: So Broly finally got serious, nice, nice, and LSSJ Broly is back and more psyco than ever, well, less really since he can at least speak conherently other then Kakarott, which is a good thing, makes him even scarier, and he's already crazy scary. So Broly's current LSSJ max could beat Super Perfect Cell, yep, Arocs is screwed, add that to the fact that in his Legendary form, Broly's power is constantly rising and well, it's no surprise DBM's Zen Buu wanted to absorb him.

A: I think Zen Buu would REALLY want Broly at this point… The coherent speaking thing? There's a reason for that. Plot points and such.

Q: Excellent! And it looks like the legendary sleeper has awakened once more. Loved how broly utterly crushed them. Gotta love him for his brutality. And the planet trade organization is still going on ? And here I was feeling sorry for the little maggots. But since they are continuing a legacy of mass genocide they are getting just what they deserve. Is broly going to duplicate a ki technique or two from the Arcosians ? You know like the eye beams or something ? I like the thought of him shooting green eye beams out of his eyes. Also what kind of ship is he going to use to get off the planet ? I hope its a large luxurious one not a small cramped space pod. Looking forward to your next update!

A: Uhm, yes he's awake, yes it's still going on, spoilers, and spoilers.

Q: So, 4th chapter. If you really use an editing team, its showing. Everything's right, but the length doesn't do the ambitions justice. It fits and all, but it strikes me as is in character, the OC's are believable, fights go pretty smoothly.-Perfect Carnage

A:Okay. Umm… uh… As far as I know, I'm the main editor, so I will thank you on behalf of the team. And fights? Those weren't fights. Those were curbcrushes.

The length has drastically improved as you can see.

By the way, length increased.

Q: Fantastic chapter, with lots of bone-crushing, bloody goodness. One thing I'm not sure I understand though...Karchare just transformed, but Icar already could. Does that mean he was stronger than his father before? Are you of the mind that Arcosian transformations are individual to the user, & can be stronger/weaker with age?Also, poor Pirosuka. I kinda hope he's not dead, because he didn't get nearly enough characterization to justify Icar's transforming to avenge him. We need backstory on those two.

A: It was there, he just had a mental block. Sort of a self-limitation, if you will. Icar was stronger; however Karchare has now surpassed him. Yes, Karchare had his transformation because he's practically Cooler/Kooler 2.0, while Icar is a child prodigy with extremely high potential. Well, he's dead now. Oh and I asked Shenron. He said your wish was granted.

See ya later!

Bye, Broches.