Title: Danno`s journey chapter eleven Rachel Edwards

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She knew when she had met that man that he was going to change her life, he was special a loudmouthed American that never shut up, she found herself charmed by him, he was so different from the men she was used to deal with, he took life by its horns, he was a free spirit, he did his job because he really believed that he could make a difference, he didn´t do it for the money.

When she say yes to marry him she knew where she was getting herself into, he was a cop,, that define him, made him whole, his belief where important and she though that she could stay with him.

that she could get a happy ending.

things were rough, they were different people trying to blend their personalities, her mom told her as much, but she though that she could take it, make it happen, that he was going to see that there was more out there than being a cop, she tried but dee down there was a voice that told her that he was´t her happy ending.

Then Gracie came and she was strong again because her princess was a part of him, she was determined to not allow her mother´s prediction that her marriage will lead to nothing but pain to come true.

But everything changed when destiny reminded her that she was a cop´s wife, when she almost lost him, and knew that she didn´t have within her to love him the way he needed, she couldn´t love a cop, she couldn´t love a man with Danny´s ideals, she wasn´t capable.

A lawyer, and her daughter´s tears were her solutions.

Stan Edwards was nothing like Danny, he didn´t care about anyone but those who surround him and where important in way for him, Stan love Stan as simple as that he didn´t have Danny´s ideas so she said yes and without even knowing she changed their lives forever.

Rachel was an idiotic woman she could see that her baby didn´t care about Stan, not that he made much of an effort, yes he give her gifts but she was Danno´s girl and she didn´t care for them.

When her baby told her that her Danno was in the islands she felt jealous he had left everything he loved and cared for Gracie but not for her.

He loved his daughter and she could see that he hated her, his eyes always told her his moods she had made him hated her, she lost him.

She felt betrayed because he hurt her first by not leaving the force so she used Stan money to hurt him, she made him miserable because she could, because that was how she was feeling.

She was a trophy wife, a possession Stan didn´t cared for her, she was his because he was a winner in a looser game, he made her feel bad so she hurt Danny because she couldn´t hurt Stan.

Her baby saw everything, she saw that her mother wasn´t happy she saw the way Step-Stan treated her, she heard her crying but couldn´t do nothing because she knew that she brought this onto herself when she hurt Danny aand now he was blind to her pain because he hated her.

Rachel knew that Gracie was aware of things she shouldn´t but Rachel was trapped, he owned her and there was no way out.

She tried to undo the damaged by allowing Danny to spend more time with Gracie and maybe make him not hated her that much, maybe if things work out she could be free, maybe he could save her like when they met.

Danny was different, he was now a member of an élite force and was partnered with a man she only though existed in movies, and Lt. Commander Steven J. Garrett was a force of nature that took her life by his hands.

Suddenly Danny wasn´t alone, he wanted to fight back, he was stronger more completed, and she could tell that he had a lot in it.

Danny´s eyes lost his darkness the same darkness she had put it in there, it took her some time to see that they were in love.

but she knew Danny, she knew that he couldn´t see it yet, but they were getting closer, he was getting stronger.

She was a selfish woman and she didn´t wanted him away from her so fast so she meddle and became his mistress even knowing that he was going against everything he believed.

She was as close as happy as she had been in a long time, but she could tell that he was no longer hers, that the Neanderthal animal became a huge part of him.

When Charley came she knew she lost him for good, she never told him that Stan didn´t ask her to conceive a baby, he took her because she was his and she didn´t fight him, because she was his, he got her, she didn´t deserve the happy ending.

That day in her home she could see Danny´s future in this man that was making her baby so happy she saw them together but also saw the way his eyes followed her every move and she understood that Steven J. McGarrett knew what she was going through and was going to help her

When he left she could remember his words, he whispered them to her "you are not alone".

When the news of his death reached they cried because they understood that they had lost their savior and they were chained to Stan to do whatever he wish them to do.

He took them away from Danny because he felt the need to punish him further, she knew he was broken because he had realize too late that he loved that man.

He became a shadow and it pained her because he didn´t deserve that.

He deserved the happy ending, he had earned that.

She cry because she was given the opportunity to see what a great love was but never to experience one because she had thrown it all away.

When that lawyer found them and the papers came she smiled, he was alive and he was coming for them, he was going to save them after all.

She should have known all along that Steve J. McGarrett never made a promise to her baby that he couldn´t keep.

She smiled because her ex-husband new husband was coming and she had a feeling that Stan would never forget the phrase never mess with an angry S.E.A.L.

She smiled because she couldn´t wait.

He was coming…

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