Me- Thank you everyone for reading my story and as I was saying I've looked through all my reviews again and I'm gonna answer some with some special thanks and even for some advice on if there's anything I can improve and or change in the chapters like if my character was out of character at any time.
MsWildLuck: Thank you so much, your reviews mean a whole lot to me, and they give me a lot of encouragement. I do have a question of what you think of my oc character, and you've said most of my chapters were great except for 7 which was just ok, is there something that I should do to make it better than ok. Anyway thank you so much for your continued support and make sure to reread chapter 7 cause I recently edited some of it =)
Guest: I don't know you're name =( but you seem really nice and sweet, I kind of wonder which pairing you are leaning towards now since we are on chapter 8 now, but as long as you're still following the story I don't mind. I just wanted to say thank you for the support and I hope to get another review from you, it would mean a lot =)
foxchick1: Thank you for your reviews, and thank you for your support as well, I'm really glad you like it, and I hope I hope you like my oc character. Although last chapter I feel like I messed up her personality, and I might rewrite it before I post chapter 9, but I'll see once I'm done rereading my story so far to see if her personality falters at all. Anyway thank you for the review=)
kage kitsune 14: Thank you for the review, I haven't heard from ya in a while, but I hope the story is to your liking, and that Leif is likeable at least. I've been working hard on this project and this story will definitely be much longer than my other ones since I have to take Leif through every episode of one piece, and write it as if she were a part of one piece already, but with added storylines, and some I'm not gonna include. Anyway thank you so much =)
Hime-sama no Kaizoku
Chapter 8:Jango the Hypnotist!"
(Opening: We are! By the straw hats)
"Intruders!" voices called as a man stepped toward the group that at the moment were trying to escape.
"Well, what do we have here, a bunch of filthy pirates." The man spoke with a hint of hatred in his voice.
"What did you just say?" Leif questioned as Usopp pulled on her vest to try to get her to keep moving.
"Well, it's true isn't it; after all, his father is one, so that makes him just as bad." The man spoke as Usopp paused for a moment.
"Long nose?" Leif questioned in concern.
"Why the long face, your father is a filthy pirate, and deserves to die just like you." The man spoke, but before he could speak anymore Usopp punched him in the face in anger before leaving the mansion. Luffy of course wanted to do the same, but it took all of Nami and Zoro's strength to hold him back.
"I never thought I'd see someone like you traveling with pirates." The man spoke, remembering the Princesses face.
"Shut up, you have no right to speak." Leif scolded as the man laughed.
"He deserved it, he's just no good." The man laughed as Leif stepped over to him which Luffy smiled at. Nami and Zoro couldn't hold the brunette back too.
"Listen good, and listen well, I suggest you shut your mouth." Leif snapped as she hit him again in the face.
"What violence for a prin…" The man was about to finish before Leif hit him again, knocking him out.
"Why'd you hit him twice?" Nami questioned as Leif giggled nervously.
"No reason, let's go." Leif spoke as she ran away from the mansion. She was even more worried now, not only did her crew members not know she was a princess, but that guy knows about it. She was lucky that no one recognized her, at least up to this point. She really hoped no one would be mad at her if they found out. When they had gotten away from the mansion, she left someone grab her hand and lead her away from Zoro and Nami, when she looked up, it had been Luffy.
"Let's go find Usopp." Luffy said as Leif smiled agreeing to that notion.
When they found him, he had been seated on a cliff ledge, looking out to see.
"You're father was a great man." Luffy said as Usopp turned around to see him and Leif. He began to wonder why she was with him, but his other crew mates weren't.
"Usopp, you may not think it but I envy you, you're father is a pirate and he's still out there. I'm envious of that because I no longer have my parents, but you still have a father, and from what I've heard he isn't a filthy pirate, but a great man." Leif spoke as Usopp looked at the girl in surprise, why did she share that with him of all people.
"Why are you telling me this anyway?" Usopp questioned.
"You said I could trust you remember and you seem like a nice person." Leif smiled as Luffy sat down next to her.
"Usopp, want to join my crew?" Luffy questioned the boy as he looked at him.
"Can I at least think about it, I don't want to leave Kaya." Usopp said with a mild blush.
"Kaya, that's the girl from the mansion isn't it, do you like her?" Leif questioned as usopp shook his head in embarrassment. Leif then began to tease him even more till they saw the man from before in some weird looking man at the bottom.
"So you're aware of the plan, Jango?" The man questioned.
"Yup, assassinate lady Kaya so you can take the inheritance." Jango quoted as the man smirked.
"Kurahodol, why would he do that, he's supposed to be her butler." Usopp spoke as his eyes widened at what he was hearing.
"Captain Kuro, your pirates are ready, we are ready to mount an attack to make Kaya's death look like an accident." Jango spoke while laughing slightly.
"Captain Kuro, you mean that captain Kuro." Leif exclaimed as Usopp nodded.
"Yes the pirate that was thought to have been executed three years ago." Usopp spoke in fear.
"Don't kill Kaya, you bastards!" Luffy exclaimed as the two turned toward them, there cover blown.
"Luffy, you idiot." Leif cursed under her breath as Usopp brought his hand to her head to have her duck from Jango hypnotism which was now being used.
"Fall asleep." The man spoke as he too fell asleep along with straw hat.
"Luffy?" Leif questioned as he tumbled forward, hitting a rock in the process.
"Is he dead?" Usopp questioned as they looked down at Luffy's body to see him no making any movements.
"Luffy, don't die on me now, I thought you promised not to do anything reckless anymore, you liar!" Leif yelled as tears started to slide down her cheeks. Usopp then prepared himself to run to let Kaya know about this.
"I wouldn't bother, you're whole village thinks you're a liar, and no one in that town will believe you." Captain Kuro spoke as Usopp continued on.
"The ship is almost here to." Captain Kuro laughed as Leif glared at them.
"You bastard's!" She yelled as she ran down the cliff, swinging her fist at the captain while he dodged with intense speeds, making Leif's eyes widen.
"What!?" Leif let out as Captain Kuro knocked her out by hitting her in the back of the neck.
"No one will interfere." Were the last words Leif heard before drifting into unconsciousness.
(Ending: Life is like a boat by Rie fu)
Me- I hope the chapter was good, and please remember to review, and let me know what you think of Leif, and the story thus far. Thank you and enjoy!
