Wow. I'm updating a little early. I'm eagar to get to the finale of this story because it's awesome! So I'll be updating more often. Plus I'm thinking about a sequal, but don't get your hopes up. Please R&R. I think you know by now how much your reviews mean to me.

Chapter 11


Andera POV

I thrashed through my closet looking for the prefect thing to wear. I was going to David's house. Squeeeeee! This is a record for me. I've been happy for more than 36 hours. When I met David at the stautue I told him that I really, really wanted to be in the talent show with him and that I had an undying desire for him.

I'm lying about the last part. If I had told him that, he probably would've ran away screaming and pretended not to know me for the rest of time.

But what he told me was so incredibly awesome that I thought I'd be the one to run away screaming.

He said that I could come over to his house so we could discuss stuff about the talent show. I'm going over tonight.

SQUEEEEE!OMG!OH MY GOD!HOLY CRAP!

Oh course David had to promise my Dad that he would bring me home safely, without anything missing, and in one piece.

I about died of embarassment. The good thing is my Dad didn't include anything about my virginity. I would've murdered him if he did.

I had borrowed a cotton candy pink abecrombie sweater with lace on the cuffs from Julie. I pulled it on. It was tight, which made me a little uncomfortable. I had only started my period four months ago and started wearing a bra only a year and a half ago, so I was still getting used to my womanly figure. I looked good. The pink shirt offset my hair prefectly.

When I got downstairs Mom and Dad were watching a movie.

''Remember be back by seven thirty.''Dad said.

''Dad that's the tenth time you've told me that.'' I complained.

''Have a good time sweetie.'' Mom said tosseling my hair.

''I trust you'll return a virgin?'' Dad called after me.

I knew he'd say that.


I arrived at David's house about twenty minutes later. He lived in the richer side of town. So I wasn't surprised when his house was twice the size of mine.

I rang the doorbell. I also knocked for good measure.

The door opened almost instantly. David was standing there in a faded t-shirt and blue jeans. This may seem strange but he looked strange without his shoes on. He only had white socks on. I guess I've only seen him in public.

''Well, you answered quick.'' I teased walking in.

''Yeah I just happened to be walking that I was waiting by the door or anything.'' David looked away, blushing.

''Where do you want to talk?'' I changed the subject quickly.

''How about in my room?''

''Sure.''

David's room looked like any tweleve year old boy's. Clothes peeking out from the closed dresser drawers, paper and books piled high on the desk, the bed sheets rumpled. I got the strange feeling that I was somewhere I wasn't suppose to be. Somewhere out of bounds. I tried to shake mysef of it, but no matter how hard I tried it kept creeping back up on me. I wonder if Mom got this feeling when she was in Dad's room for the first time.

''I'm kinda new to song writing so how do we start?'' I asked.

''Well, I always just start with a sentence-. Okay look at it this way. Think of each song as a paragraph. I think of the first line in the song like the topic sentence in the paragraph. Then the rest of the lines as details.''

I was silent for a few seconds, deep in thought. ''Ummm...no, no it's stupid, I won't say it.''I said.

''No tell me. It can't that bad.''

''Well I was thinking...Looking at the sky so blue, cant help but think of you...''I started.'' I know it's horrible-''

''No! No! It's actually very good.''

We kept spitballing ideas until we finally had the first verse:

Looking at the sky so blue, can't help but think of you

Long summer days

Filled with haze

All I can think of is you

When we ran through it the first time, it sounded out of tune and choppy, but David said it would sound better the more we practiced.

''Oh crap! It's seven thirty I have to go.''I said hopping up from my spot on the bed.

''Well see you tommorrow.'' David said quietly. I felt it too, I didn't want to leave.

I have no idea how it happened. All I know is that David was kissing me.

And I kissed back.


I know the song is corny, but I came up with it on the spot, so you've gotta give me some credit. Please R&R.

Off to do homework...:(