A/N: Hi :) nothing much to say for this chapter, just thank for all the support so far.
Enjoy
"I was randomly browsing through docs when I noticed "Ahri:Belonging... updated 33 minutes ago." So, I did what I had to and devoured the chapter (metaphorically)
Keep it up!"
Thank you!
"Awesome chapter as always. I like the fact that you're adding a bit more of a plot in the story, and changing up the setting a bit. I wouldn't mind seeing some sort of a League competition with Vatra. Also, I like the fact that Vatra is finally showing some weakness so I guess it won't be long now xD.
Keep up the great work and update quickly :D."
I will
"no verta is turning evil _
liked cute innocent little him better"
He is still innocent, but a little less :3
"Haha, good job again! Awesome! It'll be really cool if some other champions became her friends, i think Wukong or Zyra would be a very good friend, but the sad life of a Solo Mid maybe will keep her without some new friends... And please, don't make Vatra homosexual, nothing against homosexuals i just think that this character its just another Guy who is really Shy close to woman and isnt used to see this kind of things that Ahri do to him... After all, i think someone is kind of addict to Ninjas... Akali's skin, Shen helping..."
I am only using the ninjas because they have the medical skins. Nurse akali, Surgeon shen etc. I actually dislike akali and shen.
"So, I don't generally leave reviews. In fact, people who know me on this site know that I generally just PM people if I'm really interested, or just skip to the next story if a story doesn't intrigue me. Your story kinda fell in-between, so I decided to use Fanfiction's review service.
Sorry if that sounded arrogant.
Anyways, where to start?
I like Vatra as a character. He seems to be fairly realistic, although his actions really do make him seem homosexual at times. But it's your story. If you want to write him as homosexual, go ahead, although I probably will stop reading.
However, I dislike some of your more League related ideas. The "AP mid Zed", or the three minute Rabadon's Deathcap is, in my opinion, just stupid. It probably would have been better to have selected something like AD Katarina, or AP Varus. Something that isn't often played, but is still realistic. And in terms of items, a three minute Mejais, turned into 20 stacks by the end of the game would probably have been a better idea. But hey, do what you want. I'm just giving suggestions.
I don't know why you're hating on Lux. Lux seems like the most positive and optimistic person in the game based off of what she says in the game when you summon her. Yes, she can be annoying, but she's never bitchy or even remotely like a person that would bully Ahri. And if you're trying to be realistic, or follow the League lore, which I hope you are, then somebody like Katarina would be more likely to bully than Lux.
Ahri in general seems to be in character. Good job. I enjoyed that.
And seriously? Wood League? C'mon. Just call it bronze 5 or ELO hell. Either one works.
Again, these are my suggestions. The story was entertaining enough that I will probably continue reading what comes up, but I really hope that you take into consideration the above. And good luck with the rest of the story.
-RAfan2421"
All of the unrealistic shenanigans I added were for harmless fun. I always view lux as a stuck up high class kind of person.
"well least they got slightly closer"
They have :3
"Oh~" Ahri says, turning her head to him. "Really now?"
As she speaks Ahri climbs over Vatra, her hands pinning his shoulders to the bed, face to face.
"H-hey! I'm not saying you should continue." Vatra stutters under her.
"Come on, we both know you want it." Ahri replies in a seductive voice, her tails caressing Vatra's sides.
"But what about everyone else?" Vatra stutters out as the distance between Ahri and his face shortens "What about what you have been trying to achieve?"
A twinge of pain strikes Ahri inside, making her jerk backward a fraction, but she keeps her composure.
"If it is with you, I am fine with that." She giggles.
The door suddenly bursts open, at the door is Shen and Akali.
"You." Akali says coldly, pointing at the fox.
"I am not required here. Find me in the east wing if I am needed" Shen sighs before walking off.
"You didn't think I wouldn't notice? Foolish fox, return my belongings at once." Akali exclaims soon after.
Ahri pouts, but Akali keeps her stern facade.
"Fine" Ahri sighs. "Sorry Akali"
Ahri proceeds to get off the bed and stands in-between Akali and Vatra. She lifts up her left knee and takes off the shoe, then the other.
"Hey! What are you doing?" Vatra exclaims, his cheeks rosy red with embarrassment.
"Hmm?" Ahri turns, her skirt now half way down her legs, her behind facing Vatra. "I am returning the clothes."
Before Vatra could say anymore, she slips the skirt completely off and unbuttons the top and takes off the nurse hat. She slides her lithe body out of the top and returns them to Akali, who is as stunned as Vatra is.
"Sorry." Ahri says sincerely
"Um uh, no issue Ahri, just don't do it again" Akali coughs out before also leaving.
Ahri sighs, her tails splaying out and swishing through the air.
"Ahri."
"Yes?"
"Where's your bra?"
"Oh haha, I don't wear those things, they get uncomfortable."
"Don't turn around" Vatra stutters as she turns her head.
Ahri simply giggles.
"P-put something on Ahri!" Vatra exclaims, sitting up turning his head to the opposite direction.
"But I returned all the clothes at Akali. I have nothing else to wear." Ahri pouts, climbing onto the bed behind him.
Ahri drapes her arms around his shoulder and pulls him snugly toward her.
"You are warm~" She whispers, keeping her hold.
"Please get off me" Vatra says shakily.
"But it is cold, just for a minute okay?" She asks, her assets pressed against his back.
"Okay then, one minute." He agrees, almost too eagerly for his liking.
As Ahri held him, a warm feeling dwells within her, the same feeling that she had felt before. A feeling that made her heart pump and her cheeks flush.
"Ahri" Vatra asks, tapping her bare shoulder behind him. "I think it has been one minute now"
"Aw another minute please?" Ari replies
"Just one more, no more after that." He replies shakily.
"I don't think my crotch can take this any longer." He exhales quietly.
Ahri strolls down the antique halls of the institute. With Vatra still under care Ahri is left by herself to her own devices.
"What to do, what to do. Hmm." She ponders, her tails brushing against her calves. "Maybe I should pay Sona another visit, and see how things between her and blondie are going."
Ahri spies upon Sona in her usual attire seated in the gardens gently plucking the strings of her etwahl, her mind fixated on a thought. Ahri skips along the path and sneaks up behind the unaware Sona. Once she feels the time is right she springs upward and grabs hold of Sona's shoulders.
"Hey Sona! How's you and blondie going?" Ahri exclaims while laughing.
Sona's body jumps in surprise wobbling back and forth a bit. Ahri seats herself down next to Sona, Sona gives a polite wave as she does so.
"So, how's you and blondie?" Ahri asks once more.
Sona looks at her clasped hands for a few moments before look up at Ahri. She gives her a timid thumbs up.
"Oh no, I am not satisfied with just that." Ahri exclaims "I want details Sona."
"Ah! I know, just tell me yes or no, no lying now." She laughs.
Sona agrees reluctantly and sits up straight.
"You like blondie don't you? Does he like you back?" She asks with curiosity.
Sona blushes and nods, her blue fringe shielding her eyes as she nods.
"I always wondered how you managed to get blue hair like this." Ahri says almost enviously as she strokes at her own hair. "Is it natural?"
Sona nods with certainty.
"Even the yellow tips?"
She shakes her head.
"So, if your hair is blue, then what hair colour will your baby be? Blue as well?" She asks with a smirk.
Sona looks down at the ground in embarrassment.
"Anyway back to what I was asking before. Are you guys dating now?"
She makes an ever so slight nod.
"Oh~ really now? Have you guys don that yet?" Ahri asks coyly making a ring with her right hand and sticking her left index finger through it.
Sona shakes her head violently, waving her arms.
"A kiss at least."
She looks away and puts her hands together trying to avoid answering.
"How was it? Wait hold on I will go grab a pen and paper for you."
Ahri quickly dashes off, leaving Sona there.
Minutes later she returns to find Sona sitting at the same bench however sitting next to her is Xin Zhao. Ahri's cheerfulness suddenly shrinks away, she stays hidden within the garden foliage. With a frown on her face, she occasionally hears Xin's laughs. Eventually Xin leaves, leaving Sona alone again. Ahri puts on her playful façade and springs up behind Sona again.
"I got the notebook and pen!"
Sona smiles innocently, taking them off Ahri's hands.
She begins writing on the first page of the notebook. She then shows it to Ahri.
"It was amazing, best moment of my life." She reads.
"How so?" Ahri asks back "A kiss is just a kiss to me, it gets much better past that."
"Because I love him." She writes. "It was a special moment."
"Don't you have someone like that? Someone who makes you blush and your chest tighten?" She continues to write.
"I guess I do, I think." Ahri replies
"Someone who you want to be with constantly?"
"Yeah he is."
"That is love."