Ch. 13
AN: Raven, thanks again for helping me with my story. I'm sorry I took your poster of Gerard Way, but that guy is such a ****ing sexbomb! Preps stop flaming!
Edited Out: Unnecessary caps lock
Vampire and I ran up the stairs. We were looking for Dumbledore because we were so scared.
"Dumbledore! Dumblydore!" we yelled. Dumbledore came over.
"What do you want, you despicable snobs!" he yelled angrily.
I would be pissed if someone called me like that.
"Voldemort has Draco!" we shouted in unison.
Wow, they must have practised that before calling Dumbledore, that's hard to do! As for Draco being captured, he's dead so that really doesn't matter. We have better things to do than chase grave robbers, right?
Dumbledore gave an evil laugh.
"No! Don't! We need to save Draco!" we begged.
Right?
"No," he said in a mean voice. "I don't give a darn about what Voldemort does to Draco. He misbehaved a lot with the other students, especially with you Ebony." He looked at me and frowned. "Besides, I never liked him that much."
Then he walked away. Vampire started crying.
"My Draco!" he moaned. (AN: Don't you think that gay guys are, like, so hot!)
Erm, there's really no point in considering that, as gay guys wouldn't be interested in you. Besides, Draco is bisexual in this story, so your authors note makes no sense. It doesn't really apply to the story…
"It's ok!" I told him, but he kept crying. His tears were made of blood.
Edited Out: Ebony trying to speak and maybe not succeeding.
Just imagine how much blood he's getting on his clothes. Good luck getting that stain out!
Draco started to brainstorm.
"I have an idea!" he exclaimed.
As long as it doesn't involve going over to Voldemort's lair, I don't care what you do.
"What?" I asked.
"You'll see."
Draco took out his wand. He cast a spell.
Guys?
Suddenly, we were in Voldemort's lair.
Erm, guys?
We took our wands out. We heard a voice croon, "Abra kedavra!"
It was Voldemort!
Edited Out: nine ellipses between 'was' and 'Voldemort'.