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Chapter 2
When I saw beast boy fighting the way he was I was shocked, he had never shown any kind of fighting technique or anything. Everybody figured that all his skills with fighting we're only paired with his animal powers. But I saw him rip apart a robot with only his hands. I mean like he was dodging and moving underneath and to the side and jumping to avoid getting hit, and when he had the chance he would start delivering quick hits to the head and body, legs what ever he could touch, you could tell that their wasn't much power in them but he would hit them so fast that it didn't really matter. Also I noticed that when he was done dodging, he would change parts of his body into different things like when he was throwing his punches at them his arms changed into giant, muscular, hairy gorilla arms, and when he was going to kick at them his legs would change into kangaroo or raptor legs or if he couldn't use his legs he'd grow a tail. I don't think anybody else knew that Beast Boy could do this. As I got closer I started feeling Beast Boy's emotions rolling out like the waves on the ocean, I mean like his happy and jolly self, with that big grin and those big pearly jokes, and his lame jokes that still made me laugh when I thought about them when I was by my self was gone completely. It felt like there was a completely different person inside of BB's body. Half of the time I could feel the anger in him and sometimes it was anger at himself for something to anger at someone, and other times it was sorrow. A sorrow so great and deep, that it felt like a great snake was wrapped around me, and was pulling me down. His emotions were so great that I started to see part of his memories, I saw two people on top a roof fall caught in a flood go over a waterfall, I saw a green monkey lunging in to bite me, and I felt rather than saw the incredible amount if pain that he had gone through when he was bitten. I heard him yell out
"Computer pause program"
When he was more than 1/3 of the way through, he walked over to the bag that he must have had on him and pulled out a bottle of water from it. He rested for about a good 10 minutes then reached into a pocket on his pants and pulled out a little green mp3 player and put it on something loud, fast and angry.
"Computer continue program" he shouted as he took his place at the center of the grounds. As they all rushed him he grew elongated and turned into a stegosaurus and swiped in a big half circle that scraped the snow off the ground and crushed more than a dozen robots into piles of tin and scrap metal. He changed into a wolf and ran in circles using his teeth and claws to rip through robotic hands and legs. As I was watching I heard anger start speaking in her little corner of my mind "damn this guy has so much pent up anger and frustration that it's delicious, and who knew that he was so powerful, not even your precious robin can do what he's doing " shush I whispered trying not to miss the fight or what remained of it as he turned into an eagle and flew straight up about 400 ft or so and changed into a T-Rex and came smashing straight down when he saw that he had won he arched his head to the sky and let loose a roar so loud and powerful that I truly felt the terror build up behind my eyes and I could taste the a sour taste of something in the back of my throat. I felt timid almost have a heart attack, I also felt myself give in and teleported myself to my room where I turned on the light and tried to calm my heart which was beating faster than anything I was used to. I felt and heard my emotions getting all riled up but for the moment I thought about all the power that I had never noticed BB had and I was focusing on the one emotion that had stood out from BB and even the person that he was thinking about when he felt them truly startled me. The emotion was Love and Longing and the face I saw was my own.