Majo no ie 2
Mariku's Hikari-pretty: thank you guest who reviewed my story. I'm not sure if you want me to say your name, but you'll know who you are when I say this. Thank you for the very nice things you said about the story. It almost made me want to cry and you encourage me to write more and it helps me out a lot. It keeps me in good spirit and it helps me know that my writing isn't a waste of space. So thank you and everyone who reviews, favorites, likes, etc. my work. I really wouldn't be typing if it wasn't for your support. This one is Ellen's POV in Viola's body. The italics are Viola.
My parents never loved me
My father loved me
We were a family of three
We are a close family of two
I am sick, never getting better
I am in perfect health
Looking for a friends
Wanting to be a friend
Then one day a girl with golden braids appears in my house
I went to her house
I became her "Friend"
We became friends
We spent time together
We had fun
I was bedridden
I took care of her
I pleaded
I contemplated
Switch bodies with me
Switch bodies?
Just for today
Today?
It'll be fun I promise
Ok
She's a fool
I was a fool
I lied to her
She lied to me
Just for today
For an eternity
My dear friend
Give it back
Why should I? You gave it to me.
It was mine
You felt bad for me
You'll never leave this house alive
This is my house. It'll ensure my escape
Let me be me again
Don't leave my friend…
Mariku's Hikari-pretty: I guess in the end in this one Viola's father never killed Ellen's body. She was stuck in the house for all eternity. Review please.