Hey guys, in a rush, but making time, and finished the chapter *dodges tomatoes and runs from a mass of pitchforks and torches*
So *huff* after runngin a lot, I present you with the review replies and the chapter...
I ran back to my tent, crying. Tears were running down my face. My feet pounded the dirt and I rushed into the thick trees, sobbing quietly.
Why? What had happened?
I didn't know!
When I was talking to Calder, I thought I was doing great, but then he suddenly grew defensive over the topic where he came from, and guess what he said? Guess what he said?
"Calder…. Wow…. Is it like that where you come from?"
Silence.
"Calder?"
"What?" Calder replied crudely.
"Where are you from?"
"I don't need to tell you."
"Why not?"
"You aren't one that needs to know."
"I don't care."
"I guess the Ice Queen doesn't realize that there are things she shouldn't know. What a shame, but I didn't expect any better from a frozen heart." And then he walks back to Chet, talking to Aednat.
I choked on a sob, and sitting down, I rolled my head back, leaning on the tree.
The comment hurt. I'd had dreams plaguing me, of my Father and Mother accusing me of my frozen heart. It made me so sad, and my love saying it was worse.
Did I really?
I'd messed up so badly, during this year, this trip, this day, NOW, and I had no Idea what to do of think.
I'd never really felt this way before.
I felt vulnerable.
And I hated it.
I wanted to be closed up, contained, perfect, nice, a good ruler, and everything else to be a good leader and model to Arendale, but just then I noticed, I'd never thought about myself, exactly, I'd thought about other things, like what others would like if I did, and stuff, but the topic never closed onto me.
I realized, that maybe, maybe that's what kept me from being true, or to stop blaming myself, or to make myself happier.
I'd found one answer, but had a lot to go.
*Dodges tomatos again*
I know, I know, it's short, but life get sin the way , and I wanted the next chapter to be Aednat's. We'll have a surprise for you with that..
Review Replies:
GeekyGirl0629: You're welcome, and sorry, we edited some of it out...
ElsaAnnaSnowQueen: Really? Is it like daydreaming while staring?
EJ: We'll try...
SunSetdh (chapter 7): Thanks for all the compliments, but don't forget about your HW!:D Do I know this fanfiction friend?
Sunsetdh (chapter 10): Thanks! We could tell you about us, if you'd like, or look at our profile. We've seen the lego movie. You didn't spell our names wrong, and thank you for writing a song about us. :D
Sunsetdh (11): He rode on Winter's, and thanks.
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Sunsetdh (15): We continued... and- It's okay, I like being rushed a bit. We promise! I do lag because or school.. :( and- well, if you check everyday, you should know, but if you get an account, then there's a way to be notified. Otherwise, I am not aware of a way, sorry. :( but thanks! :D
AND GUYS, I HAVE STARTED DEDICATING CHAPTERS TO PEOPLE, PLEASE DO NOT BE HURT IF I DO NOT DEDICATE A CHAPTER TO YOU, IF YOU GET TOO UPSET, PM OR REVIEW AND YOU WILL BE DEDICATED TO... TODAY:
I dedicate this chapter to Kelly Riker, who was the first one to review this story and gave me feedback that helped me develop and make the story flourish.
THANKS KELLY RIKER!
Bye Guys!
~Jessamyn
