I recently noticed I got a hate review from Jackunzel lover1, I know you didn't expect it not to be a Jackunzel story, but seriously are you that stupid? If it says Rapunzel and Pitch on the story, it's not one.
I swear if there are more haters on here I will delete them. So, don't even try me.
Sorry guys, I needed to get all of the anger out of me. *Sigh*
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Guest: Yes, there is going to be some fluff in this one and a bit of... something else. You have to read to find out!
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Chapter 9
Rapunzel's P.O.V
I made an embarrassment of myself… MYSELF… I tried to kiss him, because I thought he felt the same what, but when my lips almost touched his, he didn't want to.
I'm such an idiot. He doesn't feel the same way for me and I tried to kiss him. He just wants to take me to see the lights and be on his way to scaring children.
I walked deeper into the woods and pick up a piece of wood from the grass. I stare at the wood.
Do I love him? Or is this thing called… love… all in my head?
I look up at the sun and see it setting on the horizon. Maybe I should just see the lights and leave him be, he doesn't love me and I don't love him.
But somehow my body knew that was a lie.
"There you are." My heart raced as I knew that voice.
I turned around and saw Mother smiling at me. "Mother…"
Then she walked up to me and hugged me. "Where have you been? I was so worried about you?" Then she placed her hands on my shoulders as she gave me some space.
"I-" I was going to speak, but she put her finger on my lips.
"I don't want to hear a word." Then she moved her finger away and the other hand grabbed my hand. "Come on. We need to get you home."
I pulled my hand out of her grip. "No mother. I'm going to see the lights." She looked at me as if I was crazy.
"On your own?" I stared at her for awhile and she walked close to me. "Don't you know the dangers out here?"
"You're wrong, mother. I have a horse and…." I didn't finish that sentence because I remembered that she can't see Pitch.
"A horse?" Apparently she didn't hear the last part. "How is a horse going to save you?"
"It helps me get away from bad guys?" She laughed.
"I'm sorry to hear that sweetie, but bad guys have horses too." She said sweetie like I was wrong.
I just stared at her with anger. "Oh, I see how it is." She smiles at me.
I stare at her confused.
Rapunzel knows best, Rapunzel's so mature now.
She walks up next to me and smiles.
Such a clever grown-up miss.
She then pats my head.
Rapunzel knows best.
She places her hand on my cheek and slides it down to my chin then skims her fingertips off while walking backwards and she has her back to me.
Fine, if you are so sure now, let's see if you can.
Her cape covers her, but when she turned back, her cape is out of the way and her finger pointing back at me.
"I will!" I yell back at her.
I know I will.
Trust me my dear…
Then she snaps.
That's how fast they'll take you; I won't say that I told you so.
She comes closer to me and spins me around. Then she faces me again.
No, Rapunzel will make it out, if you think you'll make it back, put it to the test.
She walks over and leans against my back then faces me again. She then soon walks off.
"Mother, wait!" I call back.
If it doesn't happen, don't come crying.
She turns back around and stares at me.
Mother knows best.
She holds 'best' out longer and then disappears.
I know mother is wrong. I will turn out fine. I can defend myself.
When I walked back I put a smile on my face. As he looks at me with a small smile.
He's smiling back at me. Does he like me?
He looks at the fire we made earlier. "Here some more wood." I toss them into the fire and he looks back up at me and smiles again.
"Thanks." I sit next to him and sigh from relief of the work I did.
"So…" I glance at him at the corner of my eye. "Why were you up in that tower?" I look at him, wondering if I should tell him.
I sigh again.
Maybe I should.
"Mother never let me leave that tower." He stared at me like he was confused. "She believed that if I left, that I would walk to a place where people would want to take my hair."
"Why would they take your hair?" He didn't understand.
If I can't explain it to him, I might as well show him. I grabbed a piece of my hair.
"Here," I stuck out my hand. "Let me show you."
He gives me his hand and I wrap my hair around it. "Promise me you won't freak out."
"Why would I freak out?" Again with the confused face.
I looked at him with my 'seriously' face. He'll see.
Then I close my eyes and sing.
Flower, gleam and glow. Let your power shine. Make the clock reverse, bring back what once was mine.
Heal what has been hurt. Change the Fates' design. Save what has been lost, bring back what once was mine.
What once was mine.
I open my eyes, unwrap my hair, and stare at him. He looked stunned.
"Your… your hair glows." I grab a piece of my hair and mess with it.
"Yeah, mother said I had that gift ever since I was born." Then I dropped it. "Enough about me…" I scooted closer to him. "So… What about you? Do you have a gift too?" His gold eyes stare at my green ones then he looks away.
"More like a curse." I gasp.
"Oh no. What happened?" He looked at me surprised.
I was so eager to know what happened.
He looked over my shoulder then back at me. "The man in the moon took my daughter away from me." I felt so sad. Who would take his daughter away from him? "So in revenge, I killed his parents just so I can get my daughter back, but instead he cursed me for eternity."
"That's awful! Why would he do that?" I didn't understand.
He shrugs."Maybe to get back at me, but all I wanted to do is to get my daughter back." I look up at the moon.
"That is such a sad story." My hand was running out of room.
So I moved it over to give it enough room, but I realized that my hand was over… his…
I look up at him and he stares back at me. I could feel the connection between us. "Pitch…" I decide to lean in as he did.
"Rapunzel…" I can feel his hot breath against my face.
Until, something bright shines in my face. I notice Pitch looks at it confused. I stared at it for awhile then a thought came to my head.
The lights!
I get up and run through the woods. "Rapunzel!" I heard him call out to me, but I kept running.
I ran all the way to where the water meets the shore. I looked up at the sky, filled with amazement. So many lights in the sky, blew me away.
I looked behind me and smiled at him while pointing at them. "Look at those lights. Are they beautiful?"
He looks at them and back at me. "Yes, they are magnificent." I stare back at them in wonder.
"Actually," I look at him still in wonder. "They are called lanterns."
"Really?" He walks next to me and nods. "How can we get close to them?" I look around to find something we can travel on.
Then I find a small boat. "Hey!" I run over to it.
I look back at him as he stares at me. "We can use this. That way we'll be able to see all of them." I smile at him.
I told him that I was going to paddle, but he insisted. So… I let him.
Once we reached the center, where all the lanterns were. I never felt so happy in my life.
I touched the bottom of one and tossed it up in the air with other ones. I looked back at Pitch and saw him looking at me.
Then I had a plan.
I grabbed two of them and sat down. "Here," I gave him one. "Let's send them into the air… together."
He smiled a bit and nodded. We soon send both of ours into the air and I looked up at them and watch them twirl around each other like the never wanted to leave there side.
Then I felt his hand grab mine. "Rapunzel?" I looked at him.
"Yes?" He seemed nervous. "What is it?" I scooted closer to him.
His other hand put one of my bangs behind my ear. Then I felt his fingertips touch my cheek, which sent shivers down my spine.
The good ones.
"Pitch…" I said as he leaned closer to me.
I closed my eyes and wrapped my arm around his neck to bring myself closer. I felt his thumb stroke my cheek. I never felt this way before.
I could almost feel his lips touch mine… then nothing.
I open my eyes and saw him nowhere. "Pitch?" I call out.
I look over in the water and noticed it was ice.
Jack. Jack has come back.
I get up from the boat and slowly make my way on the ice, pushing the lanterns out of my way.
Once I get to shore. I don't see him anywhere. I turn back around and still see the lanterns in the air.
"Pitch!" I yell out. "Pitch!" I call again.
"Rapunzel?" I turn around and see Jack.
"Jack. What are you doing here? Where's Pitch?"
He looks at me. "What's so special about him?"
I stare at him confused. "What are you talking about?"
His eyes are filled with rage. "Why were you with him?"
I sigh. "I was with him because he promised to take me to see the lights."
"Yeah, but he doesn't care about you like I do." He took a step forward.
"You're wrong. You don't know him-" Jack laughed.
"I do know him. He will just use you and toss you away like you mean nothing to him." I shake my head.
"That's not true." He takes another step forward.
"It is." I grab my pan and held it out like a weapon.
"Stay back." He looked at me confused.
"What are you going to do? Hit me with it." I stared at him.
"Yes." Then I twirled it. "Watch me."
He sighed. "Rapunzel, this is crazy."
He walks closer to me. "I said stay back."
When he gets close to me, he grabs my hand. "Rapunzel-"
"Let go of me." I pull my hand out of his and move back some.
"Rapunzel, I-" Then I see some other people hit the ground.
A guy with a white beard, a bunny, a gold small person, and a human/bird. "Guys are you okay?"
Jack moves over to the bird girl first. "He's too strong, Jack."
"Something has changed in him, mate." The bunny said.
Small gold person nodded.
"I wonder…how did he get this strong?" The guy with the white beard wondered.
Then a realization hit me. My hair. My hair had something to do with this.
"Rapunzel!" I looked over at the sound of the voice.
I saw Pitch on Jinx. I ran over to her.
"Take my hand." He held out his hand.
I grabbed his hand and we were off.
"Rapunzel!" I heard Jack yell back, but we were already far from him.
"Where are we going?" He looked back at me and smiled.
"You'll see."
Once we got to the castle, something about this place was familiar.
"Where are we?" I looked back at him and smiled.
"This is your home." I was confused.
"What are you talking about?" He pulled out the piece of paper I saw the Thugs have.
"You are the princess they are looking for." He opens it and I see a little girl with gold hair and green eyes.
That's me.
I'm the princess. "Thank you, Pitch." I hugged him as he hugged me back.
"There is more I have to show you." I moved back and watched black sand come out of his hand and he made a portal.
"Follow me." He held out his hand.
I smiled and took his hand into mine as we went through the portal. When we got out the other side I saw the same bedroom from my dream.
This is my bedroom. I look back at him and smiled. He looked at me and placed his hand over my cheek.
"I-I love you, Pitch." I blushed while saying it.
"I-I love you, too, but I don't know why." I didn't care.
I stood on my tippy toes and kissed him. It felt like the same kiss I felt in my dream. He carried me bridal style and set me on my bed. Then he kissed my neck. While I moaned.
Then I felt his breath tickle my ear. "I have to go." I sighed.
"Why?" I looked up at him.
He smiled back at me. "We made a deal." Then I felt some black sand touch my eyes. "And you need your sleep." I never felt so tired before.
"Goodnight, Pitch" He kissed my cheek.
"Goodnight Rapunzel."
I soon fell into a deep slumber.
I had to change the song 'Rapunzel knows best.' a bit so it would fit the story, since mother Gothel can't see Pitch. Also I promise I will explain better how Pitch knows she's a princess next chapter in his P.O.V. So right now No Flames please, the burn.
