I realized that school is coming up and I have to go to college, so I'll still update Chapter 12 thursday, but for Chapter 13 I'll have to see when i'm free to update it. So you'll probably have to wait for awhile before chapter 13 can come up.
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Chapter 11
Rapunzel's P.O.V
I stir awake in my bed as someone lets the light in. "Rise and shine, sleepyhead."
"Mmmmh, turn off that light!" I turn my head away from the light and tried to sleep.
"Rai?" I felt someone shake me. "Rai, you have to get up. He's coming." I lift my head to the other direction and look at Julie.
"Who's coming?" She looked at me confused.
"Don't tell me you don't know him?" I stared at her blank.
I had no idea who she was talking about.
She sighed and opened her mouth to speak, but knocking, on the door, stopped her. "Is she ready, yet?" I could tell that was mother.
Julie turned her head to the door, "Not yet Mother." and called out to her.
I heard Mother sigh on the other side of the door. "Well, prepare her as you must, but it won't be my problem if she doesn't look her best."
"Yes Mother." Julie sighed as I.
She looked back at me. "Come on," She held out her hand. "Let's get you ready."
I nodded and took her hand.
She decided to braid my hair so that way it wouldn't be in my face. It is great and all, but it hurt like hell. She told me that pain is the price of beauty and I couldn't believe how right she was.
She also made me wear a corset and that hurt way worse than the braid. Not to mention, it was hard to breathe. When she put the dress on me, I didn't blame her taste, it looked gorgeous. It was red and flowy. She soon made me slip on some long white gloves which starts on my fingers and goes down my forearm, I didn't understand.
"What's with the gloves?" She smiled at me.
"It's to make you look royal and fancy." I looked at her confused.
Strange… I don't feel royal and fancy…
Then she grabbed some black shoes and got on her knees. "Hand me your foot." I stuck my foot out to her and she slipped the shoe on.
Likewise for my other foot.
I'm use to wearing no shoes, so it kind of felt uncomfortable.
How can a girl walk in these?
"Well, your all set." I looked at her and realized she wasn't dressed up like was.
She looked at herself and back at me. "Oh, don't worry about me. I'll meet you later."
"Oh, okay." I heard a knock on the door and Mother walked in.
"Is she…" She stopped in her tracks and smiled at me.
I noticed how beautiful she looked too. Her brown hair was up in a weird bun along with braids around her crown, but surprisingly her crown fit perfectly. She also wore a long sleeve white dress that is flowy on the bottom and her sleeves are transparent.
"You look beautiful." She walked over to me and put her hands on my cheeks. "He's going to love you." I still didn't understand who this 'He' was.
"Oh, I almost forgot." She put her hand in her dress and pulled out a tiara. "Your tiara that makes people know you are a princess." She placed it on my head. "There now you are ready."
She looked at Julie. "You need to prepare yourself as we head to front entrance."
"Yes, mother." Julie curtsied in her blue nightgown and walked out the door.
Mother turned back to me and smiled. "Now," she grabbed my hand. "Let us take a stroll to the front, to prepare ourselves for introductions." She walked as my feet followed.
"What about father?" She looked back at me.
"He's waiting for us in the entrance." I nodded back at her.
Once we got to the entrance, I saw Father waiting, like she said. He turned back to look at us and smiled.
"Hey, there's my girls. Both looking lovely as ever." Mother kissed his cheeks, likewise for father.
As for me I just hugged him as he hugged me back. Then I heard galloping.
He let go of me and turned around as I looked over his shoulder and we saw a carriage with two horses galloping they're way towards the entrance.
"Hey, guys what did I miss?" I turned and saw Julie have her brown hair up in a regular ponytail and wearing a green dress that is strap wise and flowy, kind of like my white dress.
Including the green earrings which is a nice touch. "You missed nothing." I smiled at her. "You are right on time."
It soon pulls up to the walk way and the driver jumps down from the carriage and opens the door for him. "Here he comes." I feel her breath brush against my ear. "I hope he's cute." Some part of me hoped so too, but the other half could care less.
When he stepped out, I saw a guy with brown hair and brown eyes. It's just… his face looked so familiar… so older.
"Ah, Prince Jack it's great to see you." My father said while smiling.
Jack?! That's Jack?!
"Likewise for your majesty." He smiled back at him.
"Please, call me George." Father patted his shoulder.
"As you wish, George." Jack looked at him for awhile then moved his gaze towards me.
His eyes locked with mine as he saw something in me. As for me I looked away. This is not going to be good.
"This is my wife Dianna." I turned to look back at him and Jack looked back her and smiled.
"It's nice to finally meet you." Jack took her hand and kissed it.
"It nice to meet you too, mademoiselle." My mother laughed nervously.
Great, he's nice and he knows how to attract the ladies. I think I'm going to die.
I feel my love is far more stronger for Kozmotis than for Jack.
I noticed father glaring at mom. She cleared her throat and took her hand back.
"I like you to introduce you to our daughters." She moved her hand towards us, but when he looked at us his eyes immediately fell to me. "This is my daughter Julie and my other daughter Raiponce."
"Raiponce…" he whispered my name like he was under a spell.
"Ooooh, you are so lucky." Julie whispered all giddy in my ear.
Yeah, lucky me.
We soon sat at the dinner table and apparently Jack had a lot of stories to tell us. He even told us about his little sister, Emma, but apparently she won't be able to be the next queen in line since it skips a generation so Jack is going to be king. But, why is he here?
"Jack since you are here would you like to say something?" Mother smiled at him.
"Ah," he clears his throat. "yes," He clears his throat again. "I asked my parents about your proposal and they said…" I noticed they were leaning over their chairs with eagerness. "Yes." They were so happy, but I didn't understand.
"Yes to what, exactly?" I looked at them confused.
"To your marriage." I heard Julie choke some water back up.
My heart was beating fast, from shock.
"Are you okay?" Mother asked her as father eyed her weird.
"I'm fine." She whispered as she set her drink down.
"What do you mean by marriage?" I asked to be sure if it was a dream or not.
"You and Jack are going to get married." It wasn't a dream and I just lost my appetite.
I set my napkin on the table. "If you excuse me." I got up from my chair and ran, ran for my life.
"Raiponce!" Mother called out to me, but I didn't look back.
I slammed the door to my bedroom and threw my shoes to the floor. I ran over to my bed and laid my body on it. I felt the tears seep through my eyes. I wanted nothing to do with him. I didn't even love him.
"Raiponce?" I look up and saw Kozmotis sitting on the other side of my bed with a rose in his hand.
"Kozmotis!" I get up, walk over to him, and sit next to him. "What are you doing here?"
"I came to tell them the truth." I looked at him shocked.
"What!? No, you can't if they find you they will kill you." I took the rose. "Thanks for the rose, but this is crazy."
"I don't care." He placed his hand on my cheek. "I love you and I don't want our love to be kept secret."
I loved him too, but my parents can't find him. "You have to go." I set the rose down as I got up and pushed him towards the window. "Trust me; they will kill me if they see you."
I heard the door open. "Raiponce, that's no way-" I turned my head and heard her gasp.
"Mother…" I moved my hands away from his back.
Kozmotis turned around and looked at her. "My name is Kozmotis Pitchiner and I would like you to know that me and your daughter have been having a secret relationship."
My mother just still stared at us not knowing what to say. "Mother…" I walked over to Kozmotis, "I love him." and held his hand.
Mother eyes widened in horror.
Great we are doomed.
Sorry for it just being her dream, but chapter 13 it will be a little more of her dream and some not her dream. For the next chapter you'll get to witness the big battle Jack and Pitch have. It's going to be exciting :). I also decided to call Jack's little sister Emma, because I heard from the fans, on rise of the guardians wiki, say Emma would be the appropriate name and they also said that some people on here are calling her that too, so I just went with it.
