Chapter Fifteen

Author: I'm not gonna apologize or make excuses for taking so long to make this chapter. it's not that I'm not sorry (I am) it's just that I've been apologizing at the beginning of EVERY CHAPTER, so not this time. and thank those of you who gave suggestions for unsub B's name, i might have been unclear that i meant a killer name. you know like how Nicky Manathy (unsub A) is the "angel taker". so i think i found a good name that will speed the story along :)

Disclaimer: I don't really understand why I must state the obvious but here you go; I don't own Criminal minds

"Olive Steghen?!" Rossi quickened his pace as he checked his cell. He scoffed, his cell was dead. When was the last time he'd fully charged it?
Rossi pulled out his room key as he walked the last few feet to his waiting door. Once inside he plugged his cell in and redialed the coroner.
"Olive Steghen?"
"Oh thank Goodness!" Olive gasped answering before the first ring ended "are you okay?"
"Battery just died. Now, what does it say?"
"'I am the White King'. I'm not a profiler but I think he's talking about chess"
Rossi groaned "the second Unsub thinks killing is a game"
"Really?! You get that from this?"
"Call me if you find anything else" he said before hanging up.
Sighing Rossi dialed his other team members to share what he had learned.


"Baby girl?" Morgan called as he knocked on her hotel room door. He had a key but it was common courtesy to knock "Garcia?" He called again after a minute or two of nothing "I'm coming in..." He pushed open the door and immediately felt that something was wrong.
"Penelope" he said as he drew his gun.
Morgan checked the whole room. No Garcia.
Panic closing in Morgan pulled out his cell but before he could dial it rang, he answered.
It was Rossi "Morgan, the second Unsub thinks killing is a game. He use to play with Andrew Hange but after he died the Unsub felt useless then he sees the angle taker on the news thinks he's found a new player so he starts up again"
"Garcia's gone" Morgan whispered not hearing a word Rossi had said.
"Are you sure?" Rossi asked second Unsub forgotten.
"I still need to try her cell"
"Do that then call me back"
Morgan hung up then quickly dial Garcia's cell. Nothing.
Redialing Rossi Morgan told him "she's not answering"


(Unsub A) Nicky Manathy the "Angel taker" walked causally in to McDonald's. No one looked twice at him, no one gasped and screamed "its the criminal from the news!", but no one would Nicky had disguised himself as a normal every day guy.
"Can I have a burger" Nicky asked in a fake southern drawl as he strolled up to the cashier "and can I speak to Richard?"
The cashier girl nodded absently "your total is 3.56 and Richard shift ends soon you can talk to him then"
"Thank you" he said paying.
Nicky went to wait in his car.
Richard Nicklson was the first on the list he had made from the information he had gotten out of the odd blonde(Garcia).

Richard Nicklson
Harry Bukk
Calvin kuck
Mart Jinger

One of these four men was the one who kill his star student. Apparently all of them were in the same foster home as some other killer that one of these men had partnered with.
A man walked out the back of McDonald's. That was Richard he looked just as dumb in real life as he did in the picture.
Taking out a gun Nicky lend out his car window amend fired.
Done.
One down three to go.


Hotch was sitting next to Jack in the hospital when his phone rang.

"Hotch" he answered

"Hotch Garcia gone" JJ said in rushed words.

"What?!" He asked in alarm as he walked out of jack hospital room.

"We think one of the Unsubs took her"

Just then Jack's aunt Jessica appeared next to him "go" she said sadly as she looked at Jack "but come back soon"

Author: even though this chapter is small i hope it was still as interesting as the previous ones:)