Hey, hey everybody new chapter for my imagination about the Christmas episode (I didn't take the episode this chapter is my own imagination)
But I wanted to say HELLO is everybody there?! Because I didn't have any review since I post chapter sixteen! What is going on? Don't you like my story? Really I don't know but I know that you don't sometimes really have the time to post review and if you don't say anything it's maybe that there is nothing to say ;) but anyway enough talking about my desperate need of review
For the anecdote ''Carmina'' which is the name of the criminal came to my mind when I was playing at ''Paper Mario The Thousand Year Door'' and Carmina is the french name for ''Ms Mowz''
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Chapter 19
Christmas arrived in Hawaii, all the shops were decorated with lighted Christmas garlands and they were Santa Claus everywhere but it was nevertheless still Hawaii, an island where the temperature was close all the time to 40 ° C, so the atmosphere was hardly conducive to the climate. Danny remembered many Christmases he spent in New Jersey, in the living room of his home near to the fire, and he even remembered the snow that sometimes had fallen but here there would be certainly no snow and even if he had already spent a Christmas on the island, it missed him a little. He and Steve had still decorated their house with a large tree (which Danny struggled to reach when it came to put the star on the top and to what Steve was once again mocking him to what he had worth a massive argument and a night without sex of course), they had filed garlands everywhere and sometimes Danny put on Christmas carols (which displeased Steve because the blonde's tastes in music were really bad according to him). The two lovers had a heart filled with love and joy to the sight of their well decorated home and the evening after returning from a rather testing case and the joy had amplify when Danny got a call, he went to get his phone and smiled when he saw who try to reach him, Grace:
D-Hey, Monkey
G-Hey Danno, I call to announce you very good news!
D-Oh really? Tell me
G-I'm going to spend Christmas with you!
Danny's heart jumped when he heard this news:
D-That's great honey, I'm very happy!
G-Me too, by cons I will not be here for Christmas Eve I'll be there for the 25th, Mom told me to do Christmas Eve with her, Step-Stan and his family and then I spend the Christmas day with you, Dad, and all the other one
D-You cannot imagine how it makes me happy that you'll be here with us for Christmas
G-Me too Danno plus it's me who insisted on coming on Christmas day because I know that everyone will be there and I'll can open my presents with you and Dad
D-It's very nice of you Monkey
G-Thanks Danno well I must go to bed see you in two days, I love you Danno and tell Dad that I love him too
D-Danno loves you too sweetheart, Good night sweetie
G-Good night
And she hung up, Danny waited until Steve had finished hanging the light who representing Santa Claus in front of their house to tell him the good news and when he had finished the brown one immediately noticed the smug smile and the light in the eyes of his lover that he said:
S-Ooh you, you have learned good news
D-Yep, my lovely daughter just called me and told me that she will spend Christmas Day with us
S-That's great, we're going to give her his gift and in addition there will be everybody, she will be happy to see them!
D-Yeah so that means that tomorrow for Christmas Eve there will be you, me, Chin, Kono and your mother right?
S- No Chin and Kono spends Christmas Eve with their families and my mother will only come on Christmas day because she wants to be there when there's everyone and she wants to leave us alone I tried to convince her to come, but you know how she is
D Oh yes I know very well how she is
Danny walked sensually to his lover and said:
D-So that means that we will be just the two us for Christmas Eve?
Steve circled his arms around his waist and he replied:
S-Yeah I guess so and you know I was wondering, you've kept your suit of Santa Claus? Because I have lots of ideas running through my head, especially one where you're naked with just Santa Claus' hat
D-Um, you're kinky McGarrett who would have thought
S-I've always been when it was you
D-So show me then Super SEAL
S-Yes, sir
Steve took his lover by the waist and led him into their bedroom to show how he was naughty and kinky and the two lovers fell asleep just after a shattering orgasm.
In the morning, the ex-Navy SEAL woke up with Danny in his arms like every morning, but this morning was special for him, there was something magical and not just because it was the day of Christmas, no but because it was today he would ask Danny to marry him. And yes, because he had cogitated for weeks in his head how to ask his lover to marry him without the detective be afraid of suffering again or without rejects and finally he found to do it, he will simply confess the feelings he felt for the detective who were so strong, he would say that he had never loved anyone like he loved him and that Danny had simply changed his life, his way of thinking, his behavior (even if Danny had to work very hard on this one) and then also and above all they will have a child together. Just things that the blond one needed to hear, and as they were alone tonight he could ask him at this moment after a romantic dinner he had in mind to prepare, the brown one stood on his elbows to look at the time, 6:15am? It was a little late for his morning run and swim but he nevertheless rose in silence not to wake Danny who was still asleep and he laid a kiss on his cheek before leaving for his morning workouts.
The least we can say is that even on Christmas Eve murderers don't do gifts, the 5-0 was on a case for a less sordid, a young woman was found dead and raped in the middle of an alley. The poor woman had been beaten and had multiple lesions on the face, Max had also found that she had a head trauma. While Chin and Kono tried to find information on the tactile table, Steve and Danny went to see Fong to see if he had found traces of DNA on the body. On their return the two partners/lovers went to see if the cousins had found something and actually it turned out that Jennifer Marshall, the victim had in her relationships a boyfriend who often beat her and his name was Ben Carmina, then the brown one told his team to prepare themself for a visit to this dear Ben, Danny then went into his office to put his vest on, just in case and so they left.
The team was then able to question Jennifer's ex-boyfriend but the man denied all the things he was accused of and even the fact that he had hitting her but Steve proved him wrong by showing him the surveillance video of the building of the young woman where we saw him hitting Jennifer, he had to admit that indeed he was violent with her, but he had not killed her, he gave them a version in which Jennifer had a lover named Trip Young and it was the reason why he had burst and hit her, Steve and Danny granted him the benefit of the doubt and went to see Trip and arrived there, Trip confessed to them that he was a close friend of Jennifer and that he often protected her against Ben and in any case he would have never killed her, he liked her too much.
On leaving Trip, Steve received a call from Chin who informed that Max had managed to identify the sperm found on Jennifer's body (oh I already heard this before), and it was Ben's one but there were also several traces of sperm and all not belong to Ben but belong also to other people, so the poor woman in addition to being humiliated had been raped by several men and Kono added that the men in question were friends of Ben, the ex-Navy SEAL then told the two cousins to find him and Danny at Ben's home to finally stopped that bastard and his acolytes.
Once there, they managed to bust Ben and his minions without much effort and the team then returned to the HQ to finish the late paperwork. Chin and Kono were the first to go, but Steve stopped them, saying:
S-Wait, you can drop me at my house?
C-You're not going with Danny?
S-No, I have to go before him because I have a thing planned
K-Oh, you're planning something for him? That is to say?
S-A romantic dinner for Christmas Eve
K-Ah okay, okay we will drop you no problem
S-Thanks I'll tell Danny wait a minute
The brown one went to Danny's office and was about to say something when Danny outpaced him:
D-No Steven I will not do your paperwork!
S-No, that's not what I was about to say it's just that I'll go home now
D-Now? But there still a lot of paperwork to do!
S-Yes, I know, but we have time
D-Okay well, see you at home Babe
S-See you later Danno
Steve then returned and Danny wondered why he wanted to go now for Chin and Kono he understood it was because they had to visit their families, but for Steve? He had half an answer when he received a message from his lover:
S-Let me surprise you tonight!
The blonde smiled, what his Neanderthal of a boyfriend was planned to do? He will of course have the other half of the response when he will return home so he hurried to finish his paperwork even though it was far from being finished.
Steve on the other hand was trying to make sure everything was perfect for the evening because it was now or never, he threw a last glance and then he heard the sound of a car hire in his driveway, he went to the door and waited for Danny to arrives and when he opened the door the blonde one fell on his lover:
S-Hey Danno
D-Hey Babe
Danny approached Steve and behind him he saw the table set on the lanai, a red tablecloth and a candlestick in the middle of the table and he also heard a Christmas song,'' Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas'' Frank Sinatra's version in plus, Danny couldn't help himself but to smile at his lover and said:
D-For Christmas Eve I could not ask for more Babe, you outdid yourself
S-Wait you don't have seen all
D-Really?
S-You smell the odor coming from the kitchen?
Danny then began to smell and he immediately recognized the smell of his childhood and also the one of his favorite dish:
D-That smell ... It is the lasagna!
S-Yep Danno
D-You spoil me tonight, Can I know what for?
S-It's Christmas Eve and I wanted it to be a little more romantic even if you know it is not really my kind of thing and I'm not good in this area
D-Babe I know it but thank you anyway
S-You're welcome
Steve kissed Danny with desire so they prolonged the kiss when the brown one said:
S-I will better go and put the lasagna out from the hover before it gets burns
D-Yes you should
Steve then went to the kitchen and Danny sat at the table waiting for his lover to come back with the dish, when he returned he cut lasagna and laid one piece in Danny's plate and one in his own and then he sat down. The brown one really hoped that Danny will find the lasagna on his taste:
S-So how you find them?
D-Wait I have not yet tasted them
Danny planted his fork on his plate and took a little bit, he put his fork to his mouth not without make Steve languishes and when the lasagna finally reached his mouth, he breathed a sigh of ecstasy:
D-Wow Babe they are very good!
S-Really? These are not your mother's one
D-No, it's true, but yours are very good too
S-Thank you
Danny stepped forward and kissed Steve and the two lovers continued to eat their food while discussing all and nothing and when they had arrived at dessert Steve got up and went for the raspberry cheesecake he had prepared in the kitchen and took advantage of this moment to calm himself down a bit because his heart was pounding and also to remove the sweat that was on his forehead, he reached into his pocket and pulled out the box containing the ring he took for Danny and his determination:
S-Let's do this!
He returned with the cheesecake and waited for Danny had finished eating when he began:
O- Danny, I have something to tell you
D-Oh? So tell me Babe, I'm listening
O-Ok hum, Danny you know you're the most important person for me right?
D-Yes honey, I know it
S-Good then I also wanted to tell you that when I met you in my garage the first time I immediately said to myself seeing you that sooner or later this meeting would change my life and it did and ...
Steve's phone rang and Danny said:
D-Leave it, they call you back
S-Ok so where was I? Oh yeah you changed my life, my way of thinking and...
The phone rang again and the brown one had no choice but to respond, it was Chin:
S- Yes Chin?
C-I'm sorry to disturb you but Carmina escaped, apparently we haven't busted all his cronies and one of them managed to make him out we have to find him!
S-Ok, we're on our way
He hung up, frustrated at having been interrupted at this important moment:
D-What's going on?
S-Carmina escaped
D-Oh fuck and I guess we'll have to go after him?
S-You got it
D-Then let's go
The two teammates / lovers so went in pursuit of the jerks (and when he say that Steve weighed his words) who had dared to spoil a crucial moment in the relationship between Steve and Danny but unfortunately the task was more difficult than expected because Carmina knew the 5-0 was on his heels and kept taunted them each time they managed to find clues to where he and his accomplices were. This investigation took them all night so that finally Chin and Kono had nearly seen their family and Steve couldn't make his proposal and it was quite enough to put him on his nerves but eventually a later in the morning he had managed to find Carmina but the man had still not admitted himself defeated and hired a gunshot in the middle of the street, Kono had managed to shoot one of the acolytes and Danny had shot two other acolytes. Steve, frustrated and angry at not having made his proposal took the bull by the horns and shouted in the direction of Danny:
S-Hey Danno!
D-What? What do you want Steve, what do you want to ask me in the middle of a gunshot!
S-Marry me!
Danny almost caught a bullet in his head, he was really, really shocked fortunately Steve managed to shot on Carmina and reached his arms and Chin took the opportunity to finish the last minion, Danny for his part tried to calm him and so he did breathing exercises for this and when Steve came to him, he nevertheless began to yell:
D-But you have lost your mind or what! You got a real problem you know that? You don't ask someone to marry you in the middle of a gunshot, there's another moment to do that you know!
S-I tried but the first time but I was interrupted!
Danny felt his anger down when he thought back to the night of Christmas Eve and what Steve had told him:
D-Oh, so this that what you wanted to say?
Steve just shook his head:
D-I'm sorry Babe
S-No, it's not your fault, but as we're talking about it, even if the time is not very well chosen I start
Danny did not understand right away, but he was speechless when Steve got down on one knee in front of Chin, Kono and some members of HPD:
S-You know I'm not good with words but I'll try anyway, Danny, you're my life, you're everything I'm not, but we complete each other, you are also my partner and the person who matters most to me with Grace and our baby. The first time we met it wasn't love at first sight it was quite the opposite but nevertheless I knew that this meeting would change my life forever and it did. You made me become a better man, you've changed my way of thinking, seeing things certainly you could not do anything to change the way I act, but I'm like that. You have broken all the barriers I had built and you came into my heart and you also relearned me to love me again and more importantly I know that you're the love of my life and you're the one who carry my child so I ask you, Daniel Evan Williams will you marry me?
Steve took out the ring from his pocket and handed it to Danny, the blonde one on the other hand didn't know what to say, for someone who was not strong with the words his lover knew how to use them, he turned to Chin who had a big smile on his face and Kono was almost in tears. The detective then said with sarcasm:
D-This is my life that, a marriage proposal in the middle of a gunshot and by the craziest guy I've ever met! And I'll be crazy too to say no because you have to have someone to stop you from blowing this whole island!
S-So you're saying...
D Yes Steven, I'm saying'' Yes!''
Steve stood up and kissed Danny with strength and love with the applause and cheers of all, Kono then took the opportunity to jump into the arms of her two teammates:
K-I'm really happy for you! You're getting married, oh but you'll need someone to prepare your wedding! Don't worry I'll take care of everything!
C-Oh, slow down Couz, let them breath, I'm very happy for you too it's about damn time you know
S-Thank you both of you
D-Yeah, thank you very much but I'm still saying Steve that you're completely insane!
S-This is not a way to talk to your future husband Danno
D-You're make fun of me while I carry your child and I say nothing me!
Chin and Kono looked the two soon to be married arguing as usual and the brunette whispered to his cousin:
K-This time when people ask for them for how long they are married they will finally able to give an answer
C-True
D-Hey! No whispering both of you!
K-Yes Mom
All laughed and then they embarked Carmina and his band in prison and they then went to the HQ and the cousins went to their house to change their outfit and on the way back home in the Camaro, Danny said:
D-We have to go and get Grace before returning home
S-Ok
D- And once she arrived I want to tell her we're getting married
S-She will be so excited I think
D-I think so too
Steve grabbed Danny's hand and kissed it and then they went to Rachel's house to pick up Grace, the little girl was so happy to spend Christmas with her two daddies and the whole Ohana. When they arrived Grace had brilliant eyes seeing the decoration of Steve and Danny's house and she noticed that the two lovers looked at her with a thinking face:
G-You seem to be thoughtful, what is happening to you?
Danny approached his daughter and said:
D-Well honey, Daddy and I, have something to tell you
G-Is it good news?
S-Yes it is very good news
G-So tell me I want to know!
D-Well, Steve and I are getting married
Grace had a huge smile and threw herself into the arms of her two daddies and said:
G-I am very happy and you saw Danno I told you that Dad was going to marry you and I was right! Now we'll be a real family together with the baby who going to arrive soon and Danno, could I launch flowers into the air?
D-Of course Monkey
They stayed for a moment in the arms all together and then the rest of their Ohana joined them, Chin and Kono accompanied with Adam to the chagrin of his cousin, Doris and then Kamekona but also Duke and his wife and all spent a good time then Steve and Danny stood up together and said:
S-Hey everybody a little attention, Danny and I have something to tell you!
Ka-You're expecting twins?
D-No Kame, we're getting married
Everyone was obviously happy with the good news and Doris asked Steve to follow her into the kitchen:
S-what's going on Mom? You're not happy that Danny and I are getting married?
His mother turned herself to her son with wet eyes and said:
Do-No it's the contrary Steven, I am extremely glad that you get married and I wanted to say that I am proud of the man you've become, you care so much about people around you and above all I am glad that you found someone you love and who loves you back, now I realized that Danny was the person who gave you this happiness and I'm happy for both of you
Doris took her son in her arms and Steve held back his tears because it's been a long time since he had not had the opportunity to take his mother in his arms. They then returned to the living room and everyone spent a good time, Steve held Danny's hand all evening, Doris began to connect with Grace and Kono and Adam looked each other lovingly.
The evening ended quite late and when everyone was gone and that Grace was put to bed, Steve and Danny were on the couch in the arms of each other when Steve stood and watched Danny right in the eye saying:
S-I have something for you
D-Oh Steve you just ask me to marry you what could you give in addition of that?
The brown one took from his pocket two plane tickets and handed them to the blonde one:
D-These are two plane tickets for...
S-New Jersey, this is for New Year-Eve for you to go see your parents and tell them that we're getting married and also for you to make me discover the place where you grew up and your so particular family too
Danny tapped Steve in the arm but still told him:
D-I'll remember this Christmas Babe thank you but I feel like I don't give you enough, it's true I gave you a dictionary as a gift!
Steve laughed at this remark, Danny actually offered him the dictionary of '' How to be civilized'' But Kono had added for her part the guide of '' How to become a dad?'':
S-Wait it can serve me you know!
D-Yeah but still, I have the feeling that I don't give you enough
S-Danno, the best gift you could give me you have already given it to me, your love I don't need anything else
D-It's the same for me, I love you Steven John McGarrett
S-I love you too Daniel Evan McGarrett-Williams
D-Hey we're not married yet!
S-Soon
Danny curled up on the chest of his fiancé and said he would nonetheless a gift to Steve and he knew exactly what to do.
Meanwhile, alone and angry Catherine spent Christmas alone rejected by everyone after what she had done, this time it was all lost and plus she always kept Doris' secret when she suddenly received a call:
Ca-Hello?
A-It's me, Rachel how the plan I told you is going?
Ca-In neutral, I fucked up
R-For God's Sake Catherine, I trusted you!
Ca-I know, but they are both so in love with each other that I don't get anywhere! In addition are you aware that Danny is pregnant?
R-Yeah Grace told me, ok well I think I have a plan, listen well, but this time it will be me who would act and you will go apologize for your behavior
Ca-Okay, so tell me everything
So what do ya think of that? Did you were expecting that Rachel was plotting with Catherine? And yes Steve's proposal is crazy but he is crazy too so… See ya soon ;)