Hello! This is ShinyVappy01(the author)and I would like to the first chapter, of SIoaSM there were a lot of mistakes made.
EXAMPLES:
•Hello, I'm Maddie, and I' I decided to ask my mom for help
was supposed to say-
•Hello, I'm Maddie, and I'm I decided to ask my mom for help.
•His face looked like a.
Was supposed to say-
•His face looked like a tomato
There are more,but those are just sentences that don't start with a capital letter.
That was the author's note!Bye!