Hey there people of fanfic land I have updated and made some small changes to the first chapter of my story, there is a better explanation of my reasons at the end of the chapter.

As I have said in the A/N if you preferred the original let me know and I will put it back.

I also have to ask for your patience if I continue cause as I say I am not quite sure where this is going in the future, just that now that things have slowed down a bit the characters have started bugging me again. Let me know what you think and I will remove this once I have both the next chapter and public opinion.

Thank you

Evils xx

P.S I also realize that Edward is a bit of a wimp to start with, I will be fixing that.