Hey guys I'm back with the second chapter. I tried my best to make it a little more descriptive but what can i do \(.3.)/. I would also like to thank blackchaosaria2501 for the review she gave me a lot of pointers (: It would mean so much if you can tell me how you liked the story!
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Rin's POV
Man this earth demon was hard to beat. I'm so tired, why can't he just die! Plus where did Yukio go he was suppose to be helping me. As i was fighting the earth demon something or somebody pushed me so i hard that I exactly fell. I was pissed. When I turned around to see what bumped into me I didn't expect to find my brother on the ground with a pool of blood surrounding him. I started to call his name and shake him but he didn't respond. I started to panic. I looked up to see the demon who done it with a smirk on his face and a sword that was covered in blood. Yukio's blood. I felt so angry, he hurt my little brother, MY Yukio! I felt the power in me sky rocket, it started to over take my body. And to be honest I liked that feeling. I wanted him dead, I wanted blood on my sword. I heard people calling mines and Yukio's name but I zoned out all my focus on the demon who was just standing there looking at me. I charged towards him so fast that he didn't see it coming, I swung my sword, cutting off his head. Blood scattering all over my face and body and on my sword. I killed him but that wasn't enough, i wanted more blood. They killed Yukio and I want to kill all of them. I didn't care about anything, the only thing i could think of was Kill! Die! Kill! Blood! Kill! Blood! I took off killing the other demons around but there still wasn't enough, I was getting angrier by the second my flames growing bigger. Before a blink of an eye, I killed all the demons. I still felt rage, and a rush of power went through me again. I looked around, the whole battlefield was covered in blood. I roared so loud that i felt the ground shake and crack. I heard people calling my name, I turned to see people looking at me with shock and fear on there faces. I loved it, I craved to see it and my skin was crawling with so much excitement to have there blood on my sword. I still wanted to kill and they looked liked the perfect people to take care of that problem. I started to walk towards them hungry for blood. I seen them backing away but at the same time trying to get me there attention. I felt another rush go through me because they looked liked trapped prey. I was so close to them that i could feel the fear radiating off of them. I loved every second of it that I started to drool. But the next minute I knew I was falling to the ground and was surrounded by darkness.
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Soooo how did you like it, come on be honest. I know this chapter was a lot shorter than the other chapter but it was just Rin's POV on what happened after Yukio. I promise that the next chapter will be much longer. I'm kinda sad that I only got 1 review thanks blackchaosaria2501 nobody else gave me any reviews i so i don't know if you like it or not. So until I get some reviews I won't post the next chapter because Why post if nobody likes it?
So until Next Time Bye!