Author's Note..

Wow.. it's been a long time since I updated, huh? I didn't get much reviews as I hoped.. oh well..

I wish you waited patiently for this chapter cause it's gonna be worth it! I promise...

And when I promise I never break that promise... ever..

Anyway, sit tight and enjoy!


Chapter 11 : Unleash

(flashback, when Devion was in her human self)

"You stupid girl! You didn't sell anything! What are we going to eat now!? This is only good for one person!" the man slapped Devion on the face.

Devion remained silent, tears slowly running down her cheeks.

"Your weak! Pathetic! Stupid! No wonder your mother left you," the man dragged Devion on one corner.

"She didn't leave me. She promised.. she promised.. she'll come back for me," Devion said, her voice shivering in fear.

"Ha! Promise are meant to be broken you idiot! You stupid idiot!" the man shouted.

"She'll come back for me! She promised!... she promised," Devion yelled.

"Never shout back at me you pathetic girl!" the man took his belt and slashed it against Devion.

Devion screamed in pain.

(end of flash back)

Weak. Pathetic. Idiot. Stupid.. Words echoed around Devion's head. Tears are running down her cheeks.

"Nobody.. nobody would call me weak AGAIN!" Devion suddenly regained air then her eyes turned blood red.

The chains on her wrists and ankles melted. Her hair became live fire, flaming hot, and very unstable. Her skin obtained a rich and bright orange glow.

Then two large fire wings sprouted out of her back. "Nobody will ever underestimate me," Devion said before she took off.


"Mother, I have to go back, they.. they need me," Rapunzel pleaded once more.

The woman turned around with a stern look. Her brown eyebrows furrowed, her big green eyes leering on Rapunzel's.

"You want to go back?.. And why would you want that?" the woman crossed her arms.

"Something's not right," Rapunzel muttered to herself.

"Why would you want to do that?.. You think he loves you? Oh dear, look at you. You think he's impressed? He will forget about you sooner or later, honey. And I don't want you to feel devastated when he will," the woman circled around Rapunzel.

"No, he will never do that to me," Rapunzel protested.

"Believe me, honey. He will," the woman said.

"He's different," Rapunzel said, almost yelling.

"HE'S. A. GUY!" the woman stated.

"So what?" Rapunzel smirked, then entered the castle.

"I wouldn't d-d-d-do t-that if I-I were you," the woman glitched, like an corrupting computer.

"What?" Rapunzel tried to get out of the castle but it was too late. The doors shut close and the lights flickered off.

"Hello?" she walked forward, trying to see in the dark if she could. Then she saw a light and someone.

"Jack? Is.. Is that you?" she ran to the light.

She was right, it was Jack.

"Jack!" she shouted.

"Rapunzel? What are you doing here?" Jack turned around, his eyes blank.

"What?"

"My life was going on better without you. What are you doing here? I don't need you, in fact I don't love you," Jack smirked.

"What? Your just playing, this... This is nothing but a dream.. A very bad dream," Rapunzel clutched her head and breath heavily, tears ran down her cheeks. She sat down, sobbing.

The whole place faded and now there was nothing but white walls and white floors.

"Psst! Psst! Hey over here!" a girl's voice whispered.

"Who's there?" Rapunzel looked around, wiping her tears.

"Over here!" the voice said.

Rapunzel looked around then saw a red panda. She walked forward it.

"Are you the one who called me?" Rapunzel knelt and tried to smile at the small and cute creature.

The red panda nodded, then it crawled away, beckoning Rapunzel to follow it.

Rapunzel followed the creature," Where are you going?"

The red panda kept on running forward until they reached a golden door.

"Is that the way out?" Rapunzel gasped. The creature nodded, then something caught its attention.

"What is it?" Rapunzel looked where the red panda was looking. There was Nightmares surrounding them.

The red panda beckoned her to go and leave her.

"I won't leave you," Rapunzel readied herself for battle.

The red panda roared like a real tiger then it glowed and turned into a real one. Rapunzel gasped in both surprise and fright that she stumbled to the door and she got teleported to the real world.


Something glowed on top of the Globe and a door appeared, and Rapunzel came stumbling down. She yelped for help and Jack immediately flew to catch her.

"Rapunzel! You're back! But ho- I'm glad your back," Jack smiled widely, then he pressed his lips to Rapunzel's.

When they parted Rapunzel's eyes were filled whit tears of joy, "I knew it was just a bad dream," she said then she hugged him tightly.

"Rapunzel!" Rainielle, Valentine, Luke, Tooth, North and Bunny exclaimed with wide smiles on their faces.

Jack landed gently on the floor the a crowd of spirits hugged Rapunzel tightly.

"Crikey! What's that?" Bunny looked out of the window.

"What's what?!" Valentine regained her energetic self and flew to the window.

"AHHH! It's a flaming bird!" Valentine fluttered behind the globe.

A flaming creature-like thingy flew nearer and nearer to the Workshop and...

CRASH!

It was Devion. She was surrounded with smoke and fire. The floor where she landed (more like crashed) have a crater. She wasn't affected by the snow or the cold wind, when the snow touched her skin it just melted and evaporated.

"What are you doing here? Laughing when there's a big mess out there?" Devion said.


To be continued...