Treepaw yawned as she looked for pray. She sniffed every bush, every rock, and every bale of grass. Nothing. Suddenly, she heard a rustle in the bushes, sounding mush larger then any pray. She turned around, hissing. Suddenly, a figure stepped out of the bushes. A gray cat with dark blue eyes and a white underbelly. Suddenly, Treepaw's fear was replaced with anger. This cat was on her territory! It was't a RiverClan cat, she was sure of that. "What do you want!" the stranger hissed. This cat was very un-well, Treepaw could tell, and would be weak. "Why are you here!" Treepaw hissed back, un-sheathing her claws. "I want to be part of RiverClan. You can't get in my way." the strager slinted his eyes, as if daring Treepaw to interfear. Then, Treepaw remembered what to do when someone wanted to be in her clan. Fight. "okay." she replied "but you'll have to fight me first." The stranger laughed aloud. "are you KIDDING!" he mewed "your an apprentice, by the looks of it!" "Yes, I am. And I follow my clans rules." Treepaw replied, jumping onto the strangers back. "GET OFF!" the stranger yelled, grabbing Treepaw's scruff and pulling her off his back. Treepaw recoiled, digging her claws into the strangers flank. The stranger kicked, scratched, and bit, but he couldn't get her off. "I GIVE UP!" he yelled, collapsing. "well, I atill accept you." treepaw replied, licking his wounds "but how are you going to get into camp?" "I don't know. And to tell you the truth, I'm still probobly your age. I'm just kinda big." The stranger yawned, shaking her off. "well then, we'll figure it out. Stay here. I gotta catch some pray." Treepaw replied, slinking away. The stranger sighed. "another long wait." he muttered, falling asleep.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~"Are you sure you fought him?" asked Mistystar, looking at the small figure of a cat from the other side of the river. "Yes, Mistystar; you can see his wounds if you go over there." Treepaw replied. "Okay, but Im bringing Reedwhisker with me just to be sure." Mistystar looked at her deputy who walked over. "Okay. Let Treepaw and Grasspelt come too." said Reedwhisker, licking his nose. The three cats croosed the river, Misystar and Reedwhisker in the front. Treepaw and grasspelt behind them. "You must be Mistystar." said the stranger, looking at the leader of the small group. "Yes, I am. What's your name?" Mistystar asked him. "My name is Bandit." The stranger replied, flicking his tail. Then, treepaw saw a black tail tip she hadn't seen before. "Banit, Treepaw says she fought you. Is this true?" Mistystar replied, glimpsing at the apprentice. "yes." Bandit mewed, flexing his claws. Grasspelt examined the wounds "you fought well, Treepaw. Good job." he purred, nuzzeling his apprentice. "Thank you." treepaw replied, still observing the black tip on Bandit's tail. "okay, Bandit, I name you Bandittail, welcome to RiverClan." Mistypaw purred. "Oh, Im only the age of an apprentice." Bandit replied. "Really? You're awfuly big." mewed Grasspelt. "well theen, I guess he's Banditpaw." yawned Reedwhisker, appaerently board. "No. Salmonpaw." hissed Mistystar "your mentor will be Minnowtail." "okay. can she come here and show me how to swim?" Salmonpaw asked. "Sure." Mistystar replied "Grasspelt, tell Minnowtail to come here. And treepaw, take a rest. A fight with such a big cat must be tireing." "yes, Mistystar." said Treepaw and Grasspelt in usion. Then they scampered off into camp.
Authors Note:If you think I miss named Salmonpaw, I need 14 people to agree, just PM me. I think it's a good name though. By the way, you can report any spelling errors, just don't say it like you'r being harsh. It will be fixed right away f you report it nicely.