So, I think I have been doing well, and I'd just like to thank the creator of Unova Mansion, who gave me the idea of how to make a good murder mystery. Thanks.
Chapter 8: Tiny boom
They were about to talk about suspects. "I'll put the babies in their room." Luigi said. "Luigi can't get all the-a babies." Mario interjected. "I'll help him" Rosalina said, "besides I'm great with babies." "OK, you two can put the babies up." Mario said
In the hallway, right in front of the babies room, after dropping the babies off
"I think the killer's Yoshi." Luigi said "What, ME TOO!" Rosalina replied. Luigi said, "Rosalina, I'm scared. I don't want to die." Rosalina started hugging him, and said "Neither do I, but we'll protect each other, right?" "That's-a right." Their faces got closer and closer. They were about to kiss. "Uh…" They both looked towards the voice. It was Yoshi. "I was just passing by to go to the bathroom. Soooooooooo… I'll just be going." He then walked off.
A few minutes later, in the air
"HAHAHA! I will kill all of them at once! Now I just have to "drop the bomb on them". LITERALLY! HAHAHAHA!" then the most surprising thing happened to the killer. The roof split in have, showing the babies, ROSALINA AND LUIGI! "HA, we knew you would come for them!" Rosalina yelled at the cloaked murderer. "BOWSER, NOW!" she yelled. Baby Bowser spat fire at the killer, completely missed, and hit THE ROPE CONNECTING THE BOMB! Rosalina and Luigi tried to save the babies, but couldn't, so they had to save themselves.
In the Living/family room
Everyone heard an explosion after noticing how long it had been. They also heard Rosalina and Luigi scream. They ran up to see what had happened. What they saw shocked them. Rosalina and Luigi were laying on each other on the floor, knocked out. It took awhile to wake them up. When they woke up and realized what it looked like they quickly got up and turned away from each other, blushing. Mario smirked at this, though no one noticed. "WHAT HAPPENED?!" Donkey Kong asked. They quickly explained everything that happened in unison and looked away from each other, blushing once more. They then went to check on Yoshi. They knocked on the door. No answer. They walked in. Nobody. They went to his door. Rosalina grabbed the doorknob, …AND GOT TRAPPED IN A NET ON THE ROOF! "AH!" Yoshi came out screaming "ROSALINA'S THE MURDERER! ROSALINA'S THE Murrrr…derrrr…errrr." "SHE WAS CHECKING ON YOU!" Luigi screamed. "Oh. Then, who's the murderer?" "HOW-A SHOULD WE KNOW!?" Luigi yelled back.
In the kitchen, late that night
Sitting alone was the murderer wondering to himself, 'how will I kill I kill the rest of them?'
I MADE THE ROMANCE SCENE AND I THINK I DID AWESOME!
Babies: dead
Birdo: dead
Bowser: dead
Koopa Troopa: dead
Funky Kong: dead
Dry Bones: dead
Daisy: dead
Dry Bowser: dead
Peach: dead
Diddy Kong: dead
