I think there's going to be a surprise in this chapter for all you readers out there.
Chapter 9: Love Kills
Yoshi had told them all that he was trying to catch the killer. None of them believed him, but nobody said anything. They all went to the kitchen to eat, everyone looking at Yoshi. Then the weirdest thing happened. LUIGI asked TOAD to build him A BALCONY ON THE ROOF. "WHAT!?" everyone EXCEPT Toad and Luigi said. Toad just said "OK." He went to his room for his ladder. He grabbed the coffee he was drinking, went to his room, after setting up his ladder, got his tools and started building. "I'm going to my balcony." Luigi said "Why is that?" Yoshi said "UM… no reason." He then rushed off with his water. "Bathroom." Rosalina said, following him.
On the roof
"I think this is pretty good." Toad said to himself. "Might want to make some adjustments, though. I KNOW! I'll make it an 'elevator balcony'." He started working.
In Luigi's room
Rosalina walked in and was amazed. The room was painted a lovely shade of green, he had a lovely green bed, a green coat rack next to it, (where he hung his hat when he wasn't wearing it, which he wasn't) an open green closet where there were tons of green clothing and blue overalls, and the only thing that looked out of place in the room… a fiery red dresser that was devoted to all things involving Mario, Mario video games on top of it, pictures of Mario, discs with Mario words on them, even pictures of catchphrases that Mario used. Mario… his former idle. Rosalina saw Luigi (who hadn't noticed her walk in) making wonderful green fiery figures and yellow thundery ones, too. "Whoa." She said, obviously amazed. Luigi turned around "huh?" he was saying he saw Rosalina and blushed. His hair looked awesome, Rosalina thought. "Your room looks awesome. And your figures were amazing. I didn't know you could launch thunder, Luigi." Luigi nervously chuckled "Haven't you ever played 'Mario and Luigi Super Star Saga'?" he asked jokingly. "No, but those were like fireworks." She said, after laughing shortly at his joke. "Yeah, fireworks." He said staring into her light blue eyes. They were kissing in a few seconds. "huh!" Yoshi was spying on them. Rosalina hadn't shut the door completely. "AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHH!" followed by a loud thump.
Outside
Mario quickly (suspiciously quickly) found Toad. He was lying on the ground unconscious next to his (finished) elevator balcony. Toadette came shortly after Mario. "Wait, I'm a doctor." Mario says taking out his stethoscope, and putting it to Toad's heart. "He barely has a heartbeat. But he has one." Toadette started rocking him awake. "I (cough cough) slipped." Mario still had his stethoscope on his heart. "He's gone." "No, no no no, NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Toadette rushed to her room, followed by Mario, who was following her cause she broke rule 37, 24, and 18, followed by everyone else. (Except Luigi, Rosalina, and Yoshi) She had a gun in her hand. She pointed it at her head. "DON'T!" Mario yelled. BAM! Toadette fell to the floor, a bullet hole in her head. "I have one thing to say to that. Love Kills."
The killer was on the roof laughing to him/herself. He/She had just had to push Toad off the roof to kill two at once.
And it's over. I hope to get good comments.
Toadette: dead
Toad: dead
Babies: dead
Birdo: dead
Bowser: dead
Koopa Troopa: dead
Funky Kong: dead
Dry Bones: dead
Daisy: dead
Dry Bowser: dead
Peach: dead
Diddy Kong: dead
