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Chapter 10: Heart full of lead
It was bright in the morning and everyone was up, except Rosalina, and sitting in the kitchen. Rosalina walked in. "Sorry, I'm late everybody-" Luigi gave her a look, clearly saying 'Don't say it' "I just couldn't sleep." Yoshi (who was still suspicious of the two of them) saw the look Luigi gave her. "Hmmmm." He whispered to Yellow Yoshi "I think the killer OR KILLERS," he whispered a bit louder "Is/are those two." He said pointing at Rosalina and Luigi. "I'm going to the balcony Toad made." Luigi said. "I'm going to my room." Said Rosalina, thinking about going to the balcony, too. "Bathroom." Yoshi said, really going to climb on the roof and spy on them, seeing right through Rosalina's fake reasoning.
In ROSALINA'S room
She really had gone to her room. She looked around. She thought her room was beautiful. She looked at the beautiful sky every night, and often got visits from stars, so she kept her window open. Her room was painted many different colors, and they all seemed to mix together perfectly. She had a closet, where she kept all her dresses. She had one very shiny, and pretty purple dress that the stars had made for her once. She never wore it; she was keeping it for something special, like a date. She had a (also multicolored) dresser where she kept all her private stuff. Her bed was a beautiful turquoise color. 'Maybe I will go to the balcony.' She thought. She was about to go to the roof when the CLOAKED murderer came out of the window. "OH no you don't!" she said, kicking him in his cloaked face, and knocking him out of the window.
On the Roof
She appeared next to Luigi, who was making figures again. "Look, I'm a sky-a-writer." He says writing 'LUIGI' in thunder. "I can write my name into the sky, too." Rosalina says. She then summons some stars, and whispers something to them. They then came together to spell 'ROSALINA' in the sky. They laughed together. Luigi made a fire dragon, accidentally hitting the murderer, who had stolen one of Bowser's flying clown things. He was having so much fun, he didn't even notice. The murderer tried coming up from behind, but Yoshi (who was of course, spying on them) heard him. "I'm the only one spying on them!" He elbowed the killer, making him fall down, and slide off the roof, not even looking at him.
In the Living/Family room
Mario was (because of Toadette breaking 6 rules) finishing his repeated speech "-And the last rule-a Number 57: If you see or beat up the killer, inform everyone else, and that is why- wait where's Yoshi, Luigi, Rosalina, and Bowser Jr.?" Dixie Kong replied, "Yoshi, Luigi, and Rosalina are always leaving at the same time, I think they all have a part in the kills, and Bowser Jr. stayed in the kitchen." "OH COME ON, EVERYONE BREAKS RULE 27!" Said Mario running into the kitchen.
On the roof
The killer had gotten beat up a lot more on accident, but never said anything, afraid of giving away his identity. "AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" everyone on the roof heard everyone else scream.
In the kitchen
Rosalina walked in, followed by Luigi, followed by Yoshi. They saw Bowser Jr. sitting in his chair a bullet hole in his heart and blood dripping down to the floor. "Well, looks like he got a heart full of lead."
I think I did awesome on this LONG chapter.
Mario: alive
Luigi: suspected
Wario: alive
Waluigi: alive
Donkey Kong: alive
Dixie, Tiny, Lanky, and Chunky Kong: alive
Yoshi: suspected
Rosalina: suspected
King Boo: alive
EVERYONE ELSE IS DEAD!
