Chapter 11 Athena's Confront's Discord (Don't own MLP but I own this story)
Melody's POV (guy's seriously please give this story a chance)
I was happy with discord I guess it's because he doesn't shun me from my chaos he excalty love's it embraced it to be quite honest I starting to love him now I forgotten The whole kidnapping altogether his really sweetheart so I decided to ask him the question that's been in my mind I said to him "Discord? Can I ask you something?" he looked at me said to me "Of course my dear fire away" I smiled at him I know I can ask him this what bad can happen if I do?
Author's Pov
Melody gather some courage turn to the Draconequus starting to admire for these couple of day's she asked him "Why did you take me?" he was shocked but he knew she would ask him some point so he said to her "Will my dear I did that because of I was lonely and I knew you would be mine" she felt pited for this soul must be so lonely she put her hoof in his lion paw she give him a smile said to him truthfully by saying this to him "Starting to be glad you did" he smiled at her said to her "Will you be mine? my melody" she thinked about it said to him "Well? I have to say- but melody was cutt off for her reponse when she saw her mother Athena looking at her yelling at her "Melody come here this instant young filly!" Melody went to her mother she know's if her mother was mad don't question it so she obeyed she went to her mother who hugged her said to her "Are you alright my baby foal?" Melody hugged her back happy to see her mother again said to her "Yes mother, Discord treated very well" that did it she looked at her said "Don't tell me you like this monster!" Melody defended him by saying "He not a monster mother he is a draconequus."
Athena heard that she looked at discord full of hate said to him "WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER!" Discord was confused said to her "What are you talking about?" she looked at him said "You made her defend you after what you did to her!" Discord was offended said to her "Now! listen here missy I am maybe alot of things but I have let you know I treated her very well!" Melody said to her mother "He's speaking the truth mother." Athena said to her daughter "Melody I want you to wait outside of the castle my dear I need to have a word with him!" she saying it like somepony told her she was ugly. Melody looked at discord he said to her "Go on my dear everything will be fine" she nodded went outside of the castle waiting for whatever going to happen.
Discord know's this is something he's not going to like so he said "So what do you want to talk about athena?" Athena glared at him said to him " My daughter melody" Discord yawned knowing this going be less fun conversation he's going to have with this older mare so he asked her "What about her?" Athena said to him "I want my daughter back I don't care if you disagree about it!" Discord growled at her said to her "Why should I? you and your family don't love her like I do you hate her because of her chaos while I encourage her chaos" she was furious said "How dare you say such thing's to me you freak!" she slammed her hoof to the ground she said to him "If you love her then let me have her with her family" Discord looked hurt said to her "I see. Will then I have one thing to say to you!"
Melody went so have no idea what's happening inside of the castle but she got captured throw in a carriage went waited for their queen. Discord yelled at queen athena "NOT GOING HAPPEN QUEENIE!" athena smiled said "Fine" she left from discord's sight that was weird he thought it was wil? to easy. He went outside of the castle to see melody is GONE! he realized what happened he was furious how dare she take his happiness from him now she's going to pay dearly for that if he can't get her back soon the whole equestria will get it! he snapped his fingers getting his melody back or else.