A/N: ¡Hola Amigos! ¿Cómo estas? Hey guys! How are you all doing? Good? Great! Because I'm here with another chapter! *Cheers from imaginary audience.* AND HOLY MUSICAL B MAN! 302 reviews as of right now? Hoooollllyyyyy cow pooop. I nevereverever thought I would get THAT many reviews from this story. As I may have mentioned before, I thought this would be highly unpopular, and the story spouted out of rage anyways. SO BOTTOM LINE IS I LOVE YOU ALL.
Disclaimer: I don't own PJO, in fact, I don't even own the clichés used to make this story. (Thank gods.)
SYOC
Summarry: Submit your own character. You know the drill. Form inside. There will be awesome life changing quest involved!
A/N: Hi. I have this new SYOC, I've already done five of these, (as you can see by going through my profile) and they all have somewhat the same plot, but WITH YOUR CHARACTERS! Isn't that fun? This story is complete crud for the most part. The spelling and grammar is less than decent, but the cliché and mary-sueness of it makes it horrible. Hope you like it! xoxoxo.
Form:
Name: Melisa Sue Smith.
Parent: Aphrodiote
Style: She's really goth and wheres fishnet tights and is always listening to heavy metal with headphones. She wheres ripped skinny jeans too. If you want more clothing ideas just look up Ebony Dark'ness from My Immortal. She wheres a lot of the same cloths as my character.
Family: She is an orphan because her parents died in a burning building a long time ago and she hates everything because everyone she loves died.
Relationship?: She's originally scared to love anyone, but eventually falls for Nico. He doesn't like her back though, because him and Thalia are together.
Weapon: She has a lipstick tube that turns into a really sharp knife that she likes to stab people with.
Other: She hates her mom because she doesn't like girlyness and stuff, and the other Aphrodite campers hate her because she's goth and weird.
Story: (Using Your Characters!)
Melisa Sue was chilling in her cabin, while all her siblings stared at her hating her and things and stuff. Then Nico came in, wind sweeping behind him. "Hey Baby." Nico said.
"Oh Nico! You mean you finally realized I was the one?" Melisa said.
"No. I meant the girl behind you." Nico said.
"Oh… Oh Nico! When will you ever notice me?" Melisa asked.
"I'm noticing you right now." Nico said.
"But you're goth! And I'm goth! Lets be goth together!" Melisa said.
"But I know a girl even gothier than you." Nico said.
"WHO?" Melisa asked.
"Me." Just then, Thalia Grace stepped out from behind Melisa's bunk. "HOLY AMBROSIA. What were you doing back there?" Melisa said.
"Stealing from you. Like a bamf." Thalia said. "NOOO!" Melisa cried, running out of her cabin, and meeting another camper outside.
"Hey baby." He said, and Melisa turned and looked all around her. No one was there. "You mean me?" She asked. "No, I mean the girl behind you." Melisa started crying.
"Um, uh," The boy stuttered, "It was a joke… sarcasm… I'm goth." Melisa brightened up, before telling him all about how she was goth too because of her sad tragic past in the orphanage. He cried with her for a bit, before telling her his story about how he was left to rot in the sewers because his drunk mom left him there and he is a son of Apollo. And a really good singer. He sings like Justin Bieber. They skip off into the woods together, not noticing the authors sudden change in tenses, and an Oracle comes and tells them about a quest. She rhymes about some stuff, but isn't going to post it in the story because the author is really bad at rhyming and doesn't want to show her incompetence. *BIG WORD ALERT.* The boys name is Achilles, and they were sent on a quest. A magical quest. A demigod quest. What was the quest for? THE GOLDEN APPLE THAT CAUSED THE TROJAN WAR! Because apparently some crazy stuff happened where the goddesses started fighting about it again, because history repeats itself yadayada and now they need to find and destroy it before it causes another war. Or something like that.
"GREAT PLAN STAN" And then they run off to begin their quest. Once safely outside of camp that night, however, Achilles leans into Melisa and kisses her. *ROMANTIC TENSIONNN!* "I like you alot." he whispered.
I like you alot
I like you alot
alot
alot
alot.
"ALOT ISN"T A WORD! I FAOILED EVERYTHING TO DO WITH GRAMMAR BUT I KNOW THAT!" A random reader screamed, jumping out of the bushes. "ALOT IS TWO WORDS. TWO WORDS. A. Lot. A lot. HOW HARD IS THAT?" The demigods screamed and ran for their lives. With angry grammar Nazis, and crazy fangirls on the loose, it was going to be a loooong quest.
the end?
How it should have happened:
NOTICE: This story has been removed because it violated the guideline detailed on the upload page. Main reason for removal: "Non-story: lists, notes, polls, announcement, and etc." and "Not allowed: interactive, chat/script, real person, mst, and etc."
Fanfiction. Net has a set of guidelines for the uploading of stories and chapters.
Story ID: 8134479
A/N: Yep. True story, SYOC's aren't even allows. And just so you know, I spent about an hour digging through old emails trying to find all the ones Fanfiction Admins have sent me about deleting my stories. The above is legit info from the Admins themselves. xP I just couldn't figure out how to make a good SYOC.
So anyways, these chapters actually take me a lot longer to write than normal stories. Go figure. Off to finish homework! Love you all!
-Awesomegirl13
