Hair-Metal-Angel's Request: Date Night

Joe finished styling his hair and studied himself in the mirror. "Looking good as always." He flashed himself a dazzling smile.

The doorbell rang and Joe took his time to answer it. He knew any girl world gladly wait for him.

He opened the door and leaned against the frame. "Hello, Tally"

He looked her up and down. She looked stunning as always. Not that Joe expected anything less. Of course, any girl would look their best for a date with him.

"Hey, Joe." Tally's wide gold eyes sparkled as she stared up at him. "May I come in?"

"Sure." Joe stepped aside and took this opportunity to study her more.

Her waist-long black hair swayed as she walked past him and into his house. She wore it down with a gold headband in it that matched her eyes. Her tan skin glowed underneath the gold and white striped blouse she was wearing.

"So where are we going?" Tally smiled at him.

"The movies. Maybe we'll grab some pizza beforehand."

Tally tilted her head. "The movies? You finally get to go on a date with me, and you just want to go to the movies?"

Joe nodded and winked at her. "Don't worry. You're going to love it. I'll make sure of it. It's this new action movie that's supposed to be great." He threw his arm around her shoulders. "I've been looking forward to this. I'm not going to mess it up that easily."

He leaned in for a kiss, thinking she'd gladly accept.

Tally pushed him away. "What do you think you're doing? She crossed her arms stepped away.

"I just thought-"

"The date hasn't even started yet. Maybe if it's good, I'll let you have a kiss at the end."

"Fine," Joe pouted. "Let's get going. I'm starving."

He put his arm back around her and led her out the door.


The waitress came to take their orders.

Joe puffed out of his chest. "Hello, cutie."

The waitress blushed. "Hello, sir. What would you like to eat?"

"One large pepperoni, please." He winked at her. "Extra sauce if you would be so kind."

"Of course." The waitress giggled as she walked away.

Tally frowned. "Cutie?"

Joe shrugged. "What? Flirting with the waitresses is fun. They usually give you discounts and stuff. Don't worry, she's not as cute as you are."

"Okay." Tally uncertainly took a sip of her drink. "So, what did you want to talk about?"

"You." Joe leaned forward and gave her a flirty grin.

Tally smirked. "What about me?"

"Everything. What's it like being so pretty?" He threw her a wink.

"Well, I-"

"Hey, Joe!" A pair of flirtatious voices floated over to them from across the room. Two girls walked up to them. They were both gorgeous, something Joe immediately noticed.

"Hey, you two. How's it going?" Joe gave them each his full attention.

"Well, we were wanting to get some pizza, but every booth and table in here is full," they pouted. "Can we sit with you?" They amorously pushed their chests out and played with their hair. They pleaded to Joe with wide eyes.

Tally was about to point out that there were in fact several empty booths to sit at, but before she could even open her mouth, Joe told them he'd love it if they joined him.

Tally huffed. She crossed her arms and glared at the intruders.

Joe shifted so that he could have a girl on each side of him. The girl on his left had long blonde hair with bangs that framed the right side of her face. She batted her long lashes over her bright blue eyes. She ran a tan hand down Joe's arm, letting it rest on his thighs. "Thanks so much."

"Yeah, we were worried we wouldn't going to get any food," the girl on his right added. She had long, wavy brown hair and dark eyes that sparkled as she looked up at Joe. She placed a dark skinned hand on his shoulder. "We really appreciate it."

"Anytime ladies. Anything for two beautiful girls like you." He put his arms around their shoulders and they giggled in response, each continuing to toy with their hair.

Tally cleared her throat. "Excuse me?" The two girls blinked at her, as if they just now noticed she was present. "Joe and I are kind of on a date. So if you could both leave, that would be nice."

"A date?" The girls looked to Joe. "Is this true?"

"Well…" Joe scratched the back of his neck. "I don't see any harm in you two joining us for a little bit. Right, Tally?"

"As long as you don't forget which one of us you're on a date with." Tally frowned.

"Don't be upset, Tally. We can all have fun together. You're all lovely ladies."

The girls next to Joe giggled. "Oh, Joe. You're too sweet."

"And cute."

Joe had a smug grin on his face. "You two are amazing, you know that?"

They giggled again. "Not as amazing as you."

"Well, that's impossible," Joe said, his grin growing.

"Maybe this date was a bad idea." Tally got up to leave.

Joe jumped up. "No, stay. We're just having fun, right girls?"

"We can have whatever you want, Joey." The girls leaned into him.

"Really? Well, I'd love to-"

"This was definitely a bad idea." Tally gathered up her stuff. "Last chance, Joe. It's me or them."

"Um…" Joe looked between the girls. "Can't we all just-"

"Goodbye."

"Tally, wait!" But it was too late. She had already left him.


"And then she left me." Joe sighed an unhappily ate his lunch.

Fred and Sam burst out laughing.

"What? It's not funny!" Joe frowned and crossed his arms.

"Yes, it is."

"How did you not see that coming?" They continued to laugh.

"I thought she'd be cool with it. It's not like I was making out with them or anything." Joe looked around to see if Tally was going to join them. He saw her sitting with a group of girls across the room. Guess that's a no then, he thought.

"You might as well have been. You're too flirty for your own good."

"Yeah, you're lucky all Tally did was leave. One of these days a girl to going to smack you for your cockiness."

Joe grumbled, "I am not cocky." He returned to eating his lunch with a pout on his face while Sam and Fred continued to laugh at him.


A/N - this was a request given to me by Hair-Metal-Angel where her OC, Tally, goes on a date with a Joe, but he loses her due to his overly flirty/cocky behavior. If you enjoyed a favourite would be very much loved! Let me know what you thought with a review/critique! Follow me for more! Thanks for reading!

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