hey guyys ive decided to get a beta considering all of you hate my grammer (guilty as charged). im not sure how to do this but im sure one of you will help me. (right?)

any way i figured i should update today cause i left it at a sorta cliffy sooo yup now that thats outta the way on to the story.

Prieviously on Son of chaos...

I woke in the camp hospital my stomach feeling like shit, groaning i sat up" where did she g-" BOOOOM! the walls exploded i sprinted to protect Atemis on the other side of the room. Order walked in the room smiling like a crazy man and before he could react i lunged at him but he parried my strike, he slashed in a wild arc so i had to dodge and it gave him room to roam, "AHHH Percy jackson the legend Posieodons sons havnt gotten any less embarrasing have they Percy?" i growled at him " That man is not my father your brother is" My brother?! hahahahhaa oh i cant wait to squish his head under my boot" he laughed i growled again " enough talk lets- he came at me like a whirlwind slashing wildly but with accuracy i barley had time to register that he had thrown me into the dining pavvilion where the campers were before he came at me again i blocked then kicked his chest and he flew back, he snarled " im going to take away everything you love first killing your family and then that slut moon goddess then you, my eyes widened and blackened my powers surged and i charged no one calls Artemis a slut i yelled i slashed hacked and swung my arms till my sword snapped then i used my fist almost killing him he couldnt dodge and got hit by every blow, i punched and punched and puched till i took out my scyth, he was lying in a bloody pulp on the floor and as the campers watched and my family watched Artemis with tears of joy in her eyes, i 360 back flipped and just as the point of my scyth hit his temple he flashed away. I turned to the crowd exaughsted " that my friends and family was Order and then i passed out.

NOW

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Percys pov

I couldnt bieleve I let order get away! i couldve ended this war with more speed in my left arm. When I think about it I feel ashamed, thinking about all the demigods and gods that are gonna die beacause i couldnt swing faster it-it brings me to tears. I shouldnt be worrying about what fate is to give or else ill be in this bed forever.

I woke with a start, sitting up straight immediatly, smashing my head on the top bunk above me.

With a groan i hopped out of the bed and looked around the room. i gasped in shock, this wasnt the camp half blood infirmary.

"where am I" I thought to myself, I was in a beutiful room, probably 40x40 with huge pillers beside the double doors that led out, as I looked around the room I saw that the walls had live wallpapers with supernovas and beutiful colors everywhere, it was amazing. I looked at the other side of the room and saw a really comfortable master bed with gel memory fome pillows and a huge flat screen tv that comes out with a remote. Then i looked down at the small bunk beds that i was cramed into" really" i thought angirly"they put me here instead of there" I said as i drooled a little when I looked at the huge good looking bed.

Suddenly the huge castle doors opened and in walked...

CHAOS?! Chaos what are you doing here? i asked a little curious,"Perseus your not here" he stated," you are still at camp half blood lying in bed, I brought you here so i could talk to you about my brother and this war.

"Ok" i said a little scared "whats gonna happen dad" he smiled at that "Perseus this war rests completly on you and you alone" he said giving me a stern look " how do u know" i said, " you know she will not like that chaos" He looked at me and said " Percy the fates told me that order has a secret weapon now and I think its your ex.

I growled," Annabeth?! ill rip her to shredds she will pay" I said beyond angry now.

"Percy control yourself we have worse things to deal with" he said getting scared" " i have some more bad news. I groaned " of cource you do" He chuckled " No percy you see when i was created as you know everything was created by order my brother but it was all natraul disasters and monsters like the Chimera but stronger, He acted as if i was supposed to be proud of this horible world. So one day i left, never looked back and found the milky way and i made earth to see if i could acually create a race and i made the primoriadals. But with good there is always bad, Oreder felt thier precence and found me, He clamied that he owned the universe and if i didnt bow down. So we had our battle and i won but i couldnt kill him he is my brother so i locked him in the void and as you know he escaped and is back for vengence but the fates have told me what he is going to do if he loses. You see order was created for destruction but not to be evil, now I was born for creation and to be good but if we die we can choose wether or not we can let loose this bolt of our domains its like a shock wave shooting out and destroying evrything in orders case but he would fade forever".

"And thats what he wants to do" i asked scared then all that fear turned to anger and determination, I stood up abrutbly (sorry) " what can i do to stop him there must be somthing" Chaos stood up "there is" He paused " i will give you my whole essence you will be PERSEUS CHAOS JACKSON" He bellowed, my power is like a counter to orders i am to weak to face him afteer millenia of creation but he is ready and so will you be" he stated not letting me speak " you have already mastered your powers but when youre fighting if you win be ready for his destruction" he said looking down. I realized what he was saying "your right i will sacrifise myself for the saftey of other" i said determened to make him proud " good are you ready Percy my boy" Yes my father, my friend, my hero" i said sadly as a lone tear made its way down my cheek "ill make you proud" i said as i cried for my dad "you already have"he whispered as he blasted me with his power.

i woke up in the infirmary at camp, i lifted my palm and tried somthing and suddenly a piece of a star formed in my hand signaling my power over creation.

When Artemis and the others found me I was wailing for chaos's death and after i told them what happened we were all wailing for his death on the floor of the chaos cabin. but then a note poofed out of thin air and harmlessly floated like a leave down to the floor (and then exploded) I picked up and it read three simple words I AM PROUD I smiled up to the sky knowing that my father had faith in me and was proud.

Artemis pov

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We spent a few days in the chaos cabin mourning for our masters death until we decided it was time to come out. So we all went to the dining pavillion still being built beacause of orders battle with Percy, and we ate breakfast though still sad. I was worried about Percy he was still glum but the worst part was he was always eying the other gods like hermes,hephaestus,apollo it was like he wanted to attack them but uspreferred not to. I suspected somthing between them but im not sure what so i decided to do some looking.

I was eating and saw hermes sneaking off in to the woods i looked at my food and then turned back to hermes then I got up and sprinted after him into the dark woods.

i have been following him for hours now "where is he going" i thought silently to myself, Hermes suddenly stopped and pulled a bush out of the way and pushed somthing and i caught sight of a blue simbol before a huge hole just opened in the ground and hermes smiled before jumping in.

i walked catiously up to the hole and looked back the way i came and then jumped in the hole after hermes. i walked down the dark halls i saw hermes retreating shadow down a dark corner i followed him down the hall "hermes!" i called out stupidly. I suddenly saw light at the end of the hall i ran to it and saw a big room with huge computer devices working like iris messages (security cameras) to different rooms and what i saw made me throw up. i saw huge rooms filled with demigods being tortured by multiple _ (review me witch monsters i should use as orders minion) this was sick i couldnt bieleve it, "You shouldnt be here" called hermes gruff voice "Her hermes what is this?" i cried out hermes grew a huge evil smile and said two words "The Future" he said before my vision went black.

I came to in a dark room i tried to get up but quickly found that there was chains around my ankles and wrists my head felt sooooo sore " well well princess your awake!" crieda very deep voice i opened my eyes and saw hephaestus smiling coldly at me "hephaestus what is this" i said quietly "my dear this is your new home" he said as he started laughing. Huge buff men came in the room pulling down their pants and when i realized what they were doing i screamed as loud as i could before getting slapped hard by hermes. As soon as i hit the floor the walls burst inward and out came apollo raging "Hermes what is this!" apollo yelled "we agreed to leave her outta this!" apollo screamed, brot- brother? your did this with them? how could you! your not my brother" i screamed and he looked down in shame. Hermes snarled "apollo your not useful any more" and as he said that he 180 slashed his head off and apollos figure faded," no apollo im sorry!" Artemis screamed "im so sorry".

i have been here for days being tortured badly. At least they havnt ddone anything extreme, I shivered at the thought and saw my torturer walk in the room and said " im feeling a bit aroused artemis i think we should you know" hermes smiled evily as he pulled down his pants, I was screaming now struggiling in my chains trying to get away and right before he grabbed me i screamed "PERCYYYYY!" and the walls exploded and out came the pissed off eyes off percy jackson my hero.

Percys pov

I watched Artemis retreat into the woods. She was up to somthing and i wanted to know what it was.

TIME SKIP

I was severly worried about artemis now its been 4 days and we cant find hermes,hephastus or apollo. I went to think about where my *ahem* where artemis could be when suddenly i heard a scream from the woods I ran out of my cabin and saw chiron examining the woods "ill go chiron" i said, he nodded stroking his beard, i ran in to the woods for 30 minutes until i slipped over a bush and fell " what the hell" I muttered i saw the blue delta sign for the labyrynth and jumped in. I was walking down the dark halls of the labyrinth i ran into the security room looking for artemis but saw demigod bodies strewn all over and their blood saying "FOR ORDER" in bold letters, I was beyond pissed now i was going to kill order and hhis _ slaves . I sprinted down the hall way and saw a light and then i heard a scream It was artemis! i sprinted foward and exploded the walls i saw artemis chained and screaming and hermes with his pants down and hephaestus torturing her my eyes widened at the siite and i grabbed hephaestus and killed him before muttering "mutiny" i turned to hermes and grabbed him i uppercut his jaw and 180 kicked his face through a wall and then grabbed his neck "please brother" he muttered my eyes flared and i with a sickening crack i killed him.