Hello again. I don't like leaving a story un-updated for ages so I post regularly. I'm a bit sad that I only got one review. Oh well. Yes, but I wanted to update and there is no one stopping me. Writing a fanfic isn't just about the readers. It's about what the author wants. I'm not leaving this story unfinished no matter what it takes. This is my new baby.
This chapter is actually dedicated to maryelizfloyd for my first ever review. Next five reviews will also get dedications and thank you to all the people that added me to their alerts.
Also, every time I update, I will be suggesting a twilight fanfic for you to read or maybe more than one and I'll put in their summaries. No offence to anyone, but I only put down the ones I really like so don't be offended if your name isn't up there. It could simply be because I haven't read yours
The ones for this chapter are:
Strange scales by NemmaStar – s/10451419/1/ - I realised that half of it disappears so please remember to add the http( if I add the rest on it will delete but the http is basically the fanfiction . net website on it on it
Summary: Mere weeks before her wedding, Bella disappears. With vampires, werewolves and humans to blame, no one thinks to look to the more sinister monsters lurking just of the shore. As Bella is thrown into a frightening new world, Edward and Jacob have to put aside their differences for the girl they both love. But will it be too late?
This fanfic is just so amazing and made me cry so much.
Till death do us part by Daddy's little Cannibal
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summary:
All human. Edward and Bella meet each other at a bar. They get drunk and hit it off. Edward admits that he won't have sex until married. Bella, on a whim, asks Edward to marry her – he agrees. What a shame that Edward doesn't believe in divorce . . .
This story is just fab! I love it so much and I love Daddy's little Cannibal's writing too. I've even re-read this many times.
Umm . . . well obviously you know that I don't own Twilight, I said that in the first chapter so from now on I won't be posting it in the A/N.
I realised I didn't put a POV in chapter 1 but I will be doing that from now on!
Anyway moving swiftly on after a 500 words long authors note, here is . . . your update!
BELLA POV
Bronze. (I still know the colours, but only after my mom had explained what each and every one of them looked like) His hair was bronze! I had seen my first colour (grey isn't a colour in my world)!
I leaned against the brick wall of the building as the bell rang. I need to get my shit together. But I had seen my first colour.
Calm down Bella! You could have imagined it; you did that before and it ended badly. Your mother had her hopes in the sky until you realised you imagined it.
I shook my head and ran to Building Six. I had imagined it.
I rushed into the building, just as the teacher was coming in.
"Ah, you are the new girl, correct?" Eugh did they always have to start there 'are you the new girl?' questions with a 'ah'?
"Yes, sir."
"Well why don't you take a seat with Miss Cullen over there whilst I get you some material?"
"Yes, sir," I repeated, robotically, going to sit next to the girl I had seen in the office when the 'Edward' dude had knocked me over. She scowled, flipped her hair, which looked like a nice golden colour although I couldn't see that because of my stupid eyesight, behind her shoulder and made room for me by moving her things over. (OOH you all expected it to be Alice didn't you! But don't worry, I won't make Rosalie a complete bitch. No offence. I actually like Rosalie's attitude and your probably wondering why she's a Cullen instead of Hale. Well we know they change it all the time.) I awkwardly walked over to the desk and I saw her face soften as I shyly walked over.
"Hi, I'm Rosalie," she said
"Hi I'm Bella, Yes I'm the new girl no need to ask!" I said wearily, tired of the strange looks I had been given. In fact the whole class was staring at me . . . and Rosalie.
"Oh well I didn't even recognise you. I'm new here too along with my family who you will – have already seen today. Oh and I'm really sorry for my brother this morning, you looked kinda overwhelmed!" Oh so she's new here too. Interesting.
"So I'm not the only new kid?"
"Nope. There's me, Edward . . . the one that kind of knocked you over and is our adopted brother, Emmet, my boyfriend andour adopted brother, Alice, our adopted sister and Jasper, her boyfriend and our adopted brother. We came down from Russia with our adopted parents and now live in Forks."
"Wow so many adopts (she means it in that way when your like wow theres so many adopts in this sentence)! Are you – WOOH! You guys date each other even though you are brothers and sisters?"
"Haha," she laughed. "No it's not like that!" she exclaimed giggling.
"We are not biologically related remember! Only me and Jasper; we're twins. Anyway, since we are not biologically related by blood than we are legally allowed to date each other. My real surname is Hale, as is Jaspers, but we prefer being called Cullen. Besides, Esme is our Auntie so technically we are Cullens."
"Wow!" That's one messed up history. I didn't understand; why is this beautiful, imperfect girl opening up to me when I had seen all the death glares she had been shooting at the students that was staring at us. I voiced my thoughts,
"Why are you telling me all this? Er . . . that didn't come out how I wanted! I mean why would you tell me your family's history when we've only met today?!"
"I have a feeling we will be good friends!"
I swept my books into my bag, just as the bell rang. Eww that noise is going to be in my nightmares. I shuddered and saw Rosalie look at me from the corner of her eye but shrugged it off.
"Hey um bella . . . do you want to er sit with my family at lunch? I mean you don't have to but like you don't really have anyone to sit with so I thought –" I cut her off.
"Sure Rose, I'd love that! Wait do you mind me calling you that?"
"No not at all."
"Okay Cool, I'll see you later. Oh and you got your next class with my sister, Alice!"
"Alright, see you then I said but as I walked through the door I tripped and just as my face was going to meet the floor, two arms grabbed me and steadied me.
I looked behind me.
Rose was suddenly behind me.
Wait a minute wasn't she just at the table a few minutes ago? And the table is at the back.
How on earth did she move that fast?
Did you like it? You got to meet Rosalie. Next Chapter you will meet Alice!
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