Critic AKA Guest: Thats rely mean, I want to be a painter when I get older and it sems to be my only opton because I suck at everything else, but...I must suck at painting too, I have no talent in ANYTHING! Im ugly all my friends say so, just because i have a disablility! I men I hardly have any friend ay that, but just because I sit alone at luncg, get drinms pured over my head and my mum teels me "toughen up" but its so hard, I dont have any reason to live , my sietr is like th only person who is nice to me...So thanks for putting me down, I mean I gues im used to it but it still hurts.

Its hard, I dont remember things! I act crazy when really it feels like my head is going to expolde so i haft to shke that feeling away, my parents give me pills which make me fall aslep cuz they are sick of me! So plese yor your own good, be carful who you say thing to.

Um, hers the next chapter guys...Hope you enjy I gues... I might not update anymore, I came on here to finaly have some friends...zbut between both of my storys some people aee being mean.


Its ecatloy midnit, and I am wondering around the cabin everyoene elseis aslep. Walking up the woodne dtairs I coe across 4 rooms. I walk into peek into the first one, their he is, Luke lying down on his bed silent breathing. Maybe I should, but no I mustent.

Exiting the room I go into the next one where I see Pete and Nick, sharing a bed? Okay..Leaving the rom I go into th enext with Sarah she is awake.

"What are you doing awake!?" I ask her as she look shocked.

"Reding, w-what are u doing awke?" She asked me, oh crap.

"Um...Wheres the bathroom?" NICE COVERUP!

"across from my room!" Leaving I go into the bathroom and look in the mirrir, My golden eyes are prefect and my skin is soft, I look beatuiful jutas as always. Leaving the room I make my way down stairs starin at my feet when I trip.

"Ouch!" I exclaim alittle to loud because Luke comes out without a shit on. I see is abs oh my.

"Clementine." He says, "are you k?"

I nodd at his question and he pulls me up of the grund, as he dose soi i accidnely fall onto him. Yeah aciidenetly,

"Oh sorry!" I say as I push off him, he hardly moves hes like a bloddy tank.

"its okay, whata re u still doing up?" He askes 'im restless!" I moan as we both take a shit on the couch.

"oh." se says as he goes a shade of pink. Oh my wahat is he thibking?"

"Well does this halp?" Suddenly he leanes in and planks his lips onto mine, they ae soft like cotten candy and I am shock.

Once he leanes away I stay staring at him unbleaved. "Who are you!?" I ask, the man smiled "im Carver, you new bae."

He wrapps his arms around me this is awkward, Ive only knows this guy for a minute I cant be doing this. Pushing him off I ran into the kitchen where Clementine then taks a drink of water.

What a starange emotion I had just feel.

"Clem wake up!" I open my eyes to see Nick above me smiling at me, was it all a drem?

"HI Nick." I say as nhe helps me off the couch, he is much taller then me, tallest in the group I think.

"Pete wants to know if you wanna go fishing wif me and Luke." "Just u and Luke?"

"Yep." "Okay sure," I say as I rub my eyes.'

Suddenly Nick grabsass my hands making me go a sahde of o=pink before dragging me into the kitchen. Everyones eyes turn to us where i can see Pete smiling. I contuine to go redder and redder as Nick doeesnt let go of my hand. He drags me to the tbale and sits me down infront of Luke and Nick take a seats next to Luke.

"She said she'll come." Everyone is secteley listening to our convosation.

"Only on one condition thought!" I add as everyone turns to look at me again. "I get a wepon." Everyone is scilenet even Luke. That dream was werid thought huh.

"Sure." Pete handed me a small gun as I took it greatfully, "But.." I stared " id rather something alittle les..Noisey." I said as he nodded, he handed me a knife a kitchen knife. "Sighing I rolled my eyes, got a screw driver?"

"A screw driver?"

"Mhm."

"Ill go take a look." Still holding the kinfe I start to do the knife I place it down on the tbale, but for some reason I was findong it hard totake my eyes off Rebaccs stomach. I had a bad feeklibg about that baby.

Tilting my head to the side "What are you thinking about?" Alvin asked notcing me staring at the unborn baby. "just…" Narrowing my eyes, I look away from Rebacca, "nothing that could concern you guys" I look back to the knife on the table befor one last look at Rebecca. I probly looked Like I wanted to stab her. Pushing the kinfe away I placed a hand on my stomach yet no one could see.

Did I want a child.

"Clem?"

Lee said he thought about having kids once.

"Clementine?"

First I have to inpregnate someone thought.

CLEM!"

"Who would want to with me thought." I sighed, whoops said that out loud.

"Want to what?" Luke asked as I sighed.

"Nothing, just thinking about..an old friend." I went into another tit of scilence until I relized Pete was stading next to me with a screw driver in his hand.

"Oh thanks pete." I said taking it of hem.

"Yeah, no pronlem."

Clementine stand up and leve the room, She gave a sorrowful look to Alvin before shaking my head at Rebecca, that baby wasn't his.

"What?" She asked before I could leave, I sighed, "I dont know if love exitests in this world anymore, everything has gone to shit," I turned around and looked at Rebecca and Alvin. Before looking at Luke and Nick, "well. Almost everything." Leaving I exited dramiticlly not looking back.

I Knew somthing, and they all knew too. How could Rebacca, and how did they think Clem found out? But they all looked upwaeds when their was a knock on the door.


Hop you enjoyed, Ima go and take some 'sleeping pills' now, and have anothr bad drem about my real mom. Bye.

Anyway hop u enjoyed and see u son! BTW I think I will peer Clem with Carber, cause I ned ALvin and Rebca to be together.