Hey-yo people its abx20 back with a brand new chapter in the love hina series. Hope you enjoy this brand new installment, and seeing I have uploaded a new chapter after each passing day is really something big for me and really hoping I can continue writing in this pace

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Jimmy lolol: Yea I actually noticed that to not many right about the other girls much just mainly the love interest. Hoping that you keep enjoying the story as always. And sorry I didn't reply to the first review that you had put up

Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina, it is owned by Ken Akamatsu (Please somebody kill me I want to be the owner waaaaahhhhh)

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Chapter 3: Homecoming

At the Hinata Apartments:

"Kitsune come on we have to get all of these decorations up" said an annoyed Shinobu "Ohh I am tired Shinobu can't we do it tomorrow" "Keitaro is coming tonight!" shouted Shinobu."Yea but can't we do it afterwards atleast I'm tired" said Kitsune as she laid down on the ground. "That's what you had said 10 minutes ago!" (Lets leave these two alone for a while)

At the hot springs:

Naru is sitting in the hotsprings and just too excited knowing Keitaro is coming home "I cant believe that idiot is coming home tonight" Naru thought to herself but suddenly something just clicked in her mind "But he had'nt talked to me for a while and didn't even tell me he would be coming home tonight" just thinking about this suddenly made Naru to start panicking "What if he's in love with someone else and started hating me, I have never really showed my love towards him in that 'other way', maybe that's why he would have fallen for someone else who could offer him what I couldn't" Naru started acting all crazy when suddenly Motoko came in to join her in the baths and gave a slight shrug to her friend "Naru are you ok?" Naru suddenly snapped out of her thoughts "Oh Motoko I am sorry you asked something?" Motoko realized what was wrong and asked her head on "Your worried about how Keitaro will be when he comes back right?" Naru just lowered her head and answered "Yea I mean he has been gone for a while and I hadn't heard from him for some time now, I just..." Motoko quickly cut her off "..Feel Keitaro might not feel the same way about you" Naru just nodded in reply "Look Naru I know Keitaro is a clumsy idiotic perverted no good pile of waste who doesn't deserve to live..." "Umm Motoko can you get to the point" Naru just cut her off "Ohhh sorry my bad what I am trying to say is Keitaro might be all those things but he is an honest man and his love for you will never die" Hearing this made Naru feel a lot better especially as it was said by Motoko. (Motoko defending Keitaro that's new)

Back inside:

"Yay party time" Su was jumping around in excitement "Su I am glad your happy about it but I could really use some help with this" Kitsune asked lifting a heavy juke box "Ahhh never fear my mecha tama XV can help us out" Su was about to push the controller button to activate her mechanical nightmare "No Su!" said Kitsune and Shinobu in unison and jumped on the bratty Su "Are you nuts if you activate that thing it could destroy us all" said a worried Kitsune "Ohhh c'mon you guys your over exaggerating when have my experiments gone wrong?" "Well there was the time when you had built one of your mecha tama's and it became a monster and almost killed us all if it wasn't for Motoko we'd be dead!" said Kitsune "And the time you built the pogo stick and forced Keitaro to use it we didn't see him for a week!" answered Shinobu "Or the time you built the super washer and it ended up sucking all of our clothes in and we were naked in front of Keitaro and because of you he was sent flying all the way to Sieren because of Motoko and Naru combined attack on him!" "Or the time you build a cloning machine which made clones of our selves and they threatened to take over the world!" "Or the time you..." (Lets go find out what's going on somewhere else)

Inside the tea shop:

Haruka is sweeping the shop with a cigarette in her mouth in her normal pose like always when she receives a call "Hello Hinata tea house Haruka speaking." "Oh hey Haruka how are you doing?" Haruka knew straight away who was on the phone "Ya any particular reason you called me?" asked Haruka "Yea I just wanted to inform that I will be coming to Hinata tonight" replied the voice "Ohhh great so you just called to tell me that?" "Uhhh yea I thought you'd be excited yo hear that" Haruka said nothing more, hung up the phone and took a puff of her cigarette "That idiot.."

Back inside the Hinata inn:

"Kitsune, Su what the heck have you been guys doing?!" asked an enraged Naru after looking that they had hardly done anything after wasting so many hours. "Well he is your fiancé, what have you been doing hmmm?" said Kitsune trying to weasel herself out of this "We all had agreed we are gonna do our share of the work, Motoko and I finished our bit so all that remains is you complete the small work we gave you!" "Yea Shinobu is also done with her work and Su is almost finished" added Motoko. Kitsune knew now she was in trouble and needed a way out of all his work "Owww my leg it hurts ooooohhhhh" Kitsune just fell to the ground grabbing her leg "Well too bad Kitsune hurt her leg I was keeping a special bottle of sake for everyone but she can't have it as she won't be able to climb the stairs" said Motoko (shocking right). Suddenly Kitsune's attention was diverted from her leg and only on Motoko's words "C'mon Naru lets go Kitsune won't be joining us seeing her leg is badly hurt" The vixen got up and ran straight up the stairs screamin "Sake sake sake sake!" (really?) but before she could run any further Naru grabbed her by the collar and looked at her with demonic eyes "Now that your leg is feeling better get back to work!" Kitsune knew she had just provoked the animal and got back to work (relatively quickly).

Later that night

All the preparations were done and the hina girls were anxiously awaiting the arrival of Keitaro "I hope Keitaro likes the meal I have prepared for him" Shinobu thought worried that Keitaro might not like it "He has been gone for a while and probably ate at many restaurants and my cooking can't be compared with fancy restaurants" Shinobu's thoughts started to make her more and more nervous until Kitsune asked her "Hey Shinobu you feeling ok?" "Ohhh I am fine just a bit tired" but Kitsune knew something else was wrong and whispered in her ear "Don't worry Keitaro will always have a special place in his heart for you" this made the little girl's eyes sparkle and heart fill with joy but she also knew "I might always have a small place but Naru is the one he has given his heart to" but Shinobu just smiled "But if Keitaro's happy with Naru then I am happy for him"

"I cant believe he is finally coming back it's been like forever since I had seen him" Naru lost in her thoughts that finally the love of her life was coming back and she was going to be re-united with him. "This time I am not gonna let that idiot go away anywhere." Naru kept thinking about Keitaro when the door suudenly opened and they hid away and switched of the lights, the figure entered and was greeted to an array of "SURPRISE welcome home Kei..." the girls stopped to realize who it was "Mutsumi!" said all the girls in unison "Ohh hey guys what your having a party?" said the watermelon loving clumsy girl " Huhhhh never mind Mutsumi glad you're here the more the merrier" said Naru "Wait I am still confused why there is a party?" "It's for Keitaro he's coming back tonight you idiot!" shouted Kitsune. "Ohhh my Keitaro's coming how wonderful" said an innocent Mutsumi "Huhhhhh Mutsumi just get over here" said an annoyed Naru

Just then Haruka showed up "So you guys planning a party?" before anyone could answer the ball of unlimited enery Su jumped in front of Haruka "Ya we are planning a welcome home party for Keitaro" "That is great but you do knw..." before Haruka could finish Shinobu interrupted her "Ya we have worked really hard in preparing everything for Keitaro" "I can see that but..." then Kitsune interrupted "Ya I'm just glad Keitaro's coming back cuz now I don't have to work my self dry doing all the work around here." "Very nice but you do kn..." now Haruka was interrupted by someone at the door coming inside. Everyone hid away quickly and turned the lights off. This time they made sure if it was not the wrong person (Or Mutsumi again) they saw a man carrying a bag and the shine of the glasses could be seen easily. They all got up and yelled "SURPRISE welcome Kei..."again the girls stood silent as it was not Keitaro the figure replied "Oh hello everyone, so nice to see you and my what a welcome really wasn't expecting how Haruka ignored me on the phone" the man had a smile on his face, was about in his mid 30's wore a lab coat and had a cigarette in his hand and with him a small girl with blond hair wearing a cap and boyish clothes. The girls were dumbstrucked and yelled together

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"SETA!"

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Whew this chapter got annoying I had to re write this coz the first thing I wrote suddenly didn't make me feel that vibe I get after completing a chapter. So lets hope you guys like the re write.

Yea I was hoping to add a few extra scenes maybe one between Naru and Su or Mutsumi and Shinobu but for now lets leave it be, who knows I might add think about it in the coming few chapters maybe (tiny spoilers?)

Some people might wonder why I screwed around with everyone teasing regarding Keitaro but just this re write forced me into this (Please don't hurt me :O) jk :P. Lets hope Keitaro makes an appearance soon enough because lets face it Love Hina is nothing without Keitaro (well according to me I don't know about some ppl)

Once again please read, rate and review the story coz your love is what's driving me to keep writing and continue this story (really want to continue this story badly)

This is abx20 bidding farewell.