Salutations readers abx20 reporting back with another installment of Love Hina I will always love you. This chapter is mainly going to concentrate on
A little blunder I made when I posted the last chapter it should have been 'chapter 4' but I wrote 'chapter 3' sorry my bad for causing any problems. Rookie mistake won't happen again
Jimmy lolol: Yup just delayed it to keep the readers interested. Thank you for finnfing the mini Keitaro adventure 'interesting'. And yea tried to mix the tough love and softer lovey side of Naru together so that it actually looks like it is actually Naru and not some creepy person nor a person full of pure hatred.
Sahman: Thanks glad you enjoyed it and also for the advice will try to keep up the writing style because I am still relatively new in writing. Thanks again for the support
Disclaimer: As always Ken Akamatsu is the owner of Love Hina, no one else (I wish it was me ) what yea nobody owns it except Mr. Akamatsu
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"Thinking"
(Me talking)
Chapter 5: Something's wrong
(Continuing from the last scene)
She was anxious, her eyes teared up in joy for the man she loves, ""Keitaro where ever you are I hope you come back soon I just can't wait to see you" was the only think she thought and then she fell asleep and soon fell in a dream.
Dream of Naru:
"Hurry up Kitsune, close the zipper on this thing already" Naru said to her best friend "You are getting stressed out everything is already set and besides there's still plenty of time left" replied Kitsune "I know I know it's just I am really worried that's all" said Naru. Kitsune just stopped and came in front of Naru "What are you worried 'bout now? Everything is already in order" asked Kitsune looking straight into her friend's eyes. At first Naru wasn't reluctant to answer but then replied "It's just what if after all this he doesn't feel the same way about me? You know how people can change" asked Naru with a nervous look plastered all over her face. Kitsune tried to keep a serious face but bursted out in laughter "Hahahahahahahaha" this made Naru mad and she turned away from her friend "I'm sorry hahahaha really hahahahaha sorry" Naru started breathing heavily and asked "And what is so funny?" with a look that would terrify anyone (especially Keitaro) "You are, girl you need to relax Keitaro loves you more than anything and no matter how much tough you are on him you have the exact feelings for him" said Kitsune "There is no way he will ever do that to you, you have to understand that k?" This made Naru feel a lot better and brought a face on her smile "Thanks Kitsune now help me with this zipper"
Outside near the Hinata front door:
Su and Sara are planning to cause some mischief (nothing new) but with the one person that strikes fear into everyone's heart just by her stare (No not Motoko) Haruka! "I'll show her, making my daddy fall for her, she just wants to take him away from me" thought the little blonde headed devil "Ok Su here's what we're gonna do we are gonna take these firecrackers and blow them right behing Haruka ok?" Su was excited (When is she not) to hear that "Sounds fun but why are we planning on doing this to Haruka?" asked Su. "Because it will be fun now c'mon help me" commanded Sara. Su just nodded and then they planted the fireworks just behind Haruka. "Get ready to be blown away evil lady" the sinister Sara thought. As she was about to lit Seta showed up outside to join her "Ohh no daddy I gotta stop these things" Seta came close and stood beside her "Ohhh Haruka nice to see you out here" Haruka just kept looking up and asked "What are doing here Seta shouldn't you be enjoying the party?" Seta then got closer "Yea but you know parties are not really my thing I just like nights like these so beautiful don't you think" Haruka closed her eyes and smiled a little "Yea it is nice" Seta looked at her then back at the sky "Remember when I used to come here and teach Naru and the last time we met then it was a night similar to this one" Haruka just opened her eyes "Yea pretty much the same" Seta just looked at her "You know Haruka I really didn't wanted to go that time you know that" Haruka just turned away from him "Yea but you still did" taking a puff of her cigarette. Seta again stood close to her "Haruka..you know how I always felt about you" answered an emotional Seta "All that time I was away I kept thinking about you" Haruka then quickly replied "Really that's why you never even called me once" Seta had nothing else to say then (Wow this guy can shut up) "And after so long when you finally come back you didn't care to meet me..." as she was about to finish fireworks flew into the sky just a few paces away from them and dazzled the sky in their beautiful colors. "You did this?" asked Haruka dashing her cigarette "No it wasn't me" replied Seta. Suddenly the remaining girls inside came out to see the marvelous scenery formed in the sky and bask in it's beauty. Sara on the other hand was just blowing a gasket. "Can't believe my plan failed I'll have to do something else to stop her" Sara looked to sneak away "C'mon Su" but to her dismay Su was standing with the rest of them enjoying this beautiful sight "Who do you suppose did this?" asked Motoko "I don't know it wasn't me" answered Kitsune "Me neither" added Shinobu "Ohhh it was Sara and me, she was trying to blow these on Haruka but in instead she did this" said Su laughing. Hearing this made Sara freeze right where she was standing and received 'the look' from Haruka and she ran away inside.
Back to Naru's dream:
"Naru your looking like an angel" said Shinobu "Thanks Shinobu that means a lot I just hope Keitaro likes it" Shinobu replied "Ohhh I'm sure he will after all he loves you" Naru then at herself in the mirror one more time "Shinobu do you think Keitaro and I will live happily together?" Shinobu answered "Ofcourse you will you're the luckiest person in the world to have someone like Keitaro by your side, he will never let anyting happen to you ever" Naru then walked across the room "Really?" Shinobu went beside Naru "Really, Keitaro would put you first over himself. If to save you it would mean he has to sacrifice his own life he will do it in a heart beat" Naru then hugged the little blue haired girl "Thanks Shinobu"
Back in the real life:
Everyone had gone back inside after witnessing a beautiful sight. Sara on the other hand had some plans going through her mind how to keep Haruka away from her daddy. "That did not work at all I need to try something else" thought Sara when suddenly she wandered into Su's room and saw the controller of Mecha Tama XV "Ooohhh this could work" Sara then laughed maniacally (I know weird)
In the main lobby:
Everyone had an amazing time enjoying the 'not for Keitaro party' or the 'practice party before Keitaro party' and were sitting in the main lobby "Tonight was a great night" said Motoko who sat down at one of the chairs "Yup and the best part is we get to do it all over again tomorrow for Keitaro this time" said Kitsune "I just hope he comes around this time or else you guys would be having another useless party for no reason" said Haruka "Ya I... I mean WE all miss Keitaro" said Shinobu "Ya I still haven't tried my Mecha Tama XV he needs to go for a test run" said Su. Above them in the stairs was standing a mischievous little girl "Ha you won't need to make a test run on that loser coz Haruka is the perfect practice target" (Man how does kid's minds work these days) "Why you worried it might kill Keitaro" said Kitsune "No I know it won't be able to Keitaro is invincible, I'm worried coz of some faulty wiring I made it might attack the one controlling the thing" Sara had already pressed the button that activated the machine and hearing that just made a shiver go down her spine "Di-did she just say attack the one controlling it?" suddenly a turtle shaped bot about the size of Sara came out of Su's room and loaded with a huge arsenal of weaponry and started firing at Sara "Helppppp meeeeeee!" screamed the little girl running in every direction to avoid the mechanical beast. As she ran passed everyone they saw the machine chasing Sara. "Su! Your machine got out of your room!" shouted Shinobu "And why is it attacking Sara?" asked Mutsumi "Hmmmm interesting question, I think Sara might be waging war against the me and joined Tama' side and has announced a battle with Mecha Tama XV" said Su while others looked at her with a weird out look "How can we stop it?" asked Kitsune (Really Seta the father is not a bit worried about Sara, this guy is really thick) as the robot blew one side of the wall of the main entrance.
Back to Naru's dream:
"Wow Naru can't believe it's finally here" said Mutsumi "Yea never thought you'd be with that perverted waste of a man" said Motoko. Naru quickly interjected "Motoko, stop insulting Keitaro he is my fiancé" while sticking out her tongue. Motoko just let out a sigh "Ya that's what worries me" Naru pretended to not hear that last part and started to walk down a hall. "Naru remember the day when you, me and Keitaro were little and the promise was made" Naru quickly replied "Ya we were still confused who that girl actually was hehe" while a sweat rolled down her forehead "Naru you should be glad you and Keitaro are finally fulfilling that promise" Naru just blushed and hesitated to answer "T-t-thanks Mutsumi" and added "But aren't you sad Keitaro isn't with you?" Mutsumi replied with a smile "No, he is with the one he made the promise to so I can't come between that now can I?" Naru just smiled and looked at Motoko "And what about you Motoko you'r not upset about all of this?" Motoko answered "A little bit not only you'r with a..." Naru looked at her with a serious face and said "Motoko answer me properly" Motoko sighed and said "A little bit but you are my friend and I can't come between you and your happiness" Naru just teared up and hugged both of them "Thank you guys" Mutsumi and Motoko returned the hug and Mutsumi said first "Hey you can't cry now that comes later on" Motoko then said "Yea save the tears for later come on"
Back in reality:
"Su how do you stop this thing?" shouted Kitsune while Motoko was also running around crazy because of her phobia "TURTLE STAY AWAW FROM ME AAAAHHHHHHH" then she used one of her kendo art techniques and blasted half of the furniture in the kitchen here and there. "Su stop that thing before it hurts Sara! Or Motoko blows up the entire dormitory!" shouted Shinobu "Ohhh my this looks like a fun game we're playing" said Mutsumi. While Haruka and Seta were still sitting in the lobby watching tv "Shouldn't you be helping them stop that thing before it kills Sara?" asked Haruka "Naahhh there just playing no one's gonna get hurt" said Seta. Haruka looked at him with pity "No matter how smart he is, he's still a thick skull" Haruka then spoke "Alright whatever you say" Haruka said while flipping through the channels.
(Meanwhile)
"Hmmm the only it will stop is when it destroys it's target" said Su before she received a shouting Kitsune at her face "Then think of something else!" "Ohhh I know know you just have to press the off button behind the controller" said Su. Sara heard this and quickly did just that making the mechanical killer fall to the ground motionless. All of the other girls saw the mecha tama fall to the ground and locked their gaze at Su with a shocked look (Except Mutsumi who was wondering still what they were playing) "That's all you had to do?!" said Motoko "Well yea easy isn't it?" answered Su. Motoko and Sara were about to come and strangle Su before they heard Haruka call them inside. As they came in Haruka directed their attention towards the tv
"BREAKING NEWS"
Back in Naru's dream:
Naru is nervous but builds up courage and the door opens to reveal an aisle and on the sides are people sitting looking straight at her, beside her was her father holding her arm in his "Are you ready?" said . Naru just nodded and walked forward she didn't pay much attention to the details as her eyes were fixed on the man standing at the end of the room in front of an alter. "I can't believe I am finally getting married" Naru thought before walking all the way beside the man of her dreams. All the vows were read and she was about to kiss the man of her dreams when suddenly Keitaro started floating and slowly started moving further away from Naru, she tried to rach out and grab him but then he disappeared into thin air. "KEITAAROOOOOOOO!" Naru kept screaming but received no response.
Back in reality:
Suddenly Naru woke up from her sleep and the first words that came out of her mouth were "Keitaro" then she realized that she was dreaming "Ohhh it was just a dream thank God" when suddenly Motoko came running out "Naru you have to come inside. Naru quickly got up and they both ran inside. Motoko showed Naru what was on the tv while others were already glued to the screen
"A bus carrying 20 passengers went out of control and fell down a cliff. All the passengers were able to get off the bus and climb to safety as the bus was stuck between a few old boulders and branches. Majority of the people have suffered from minor injuries and some are in critical state. The bus itself after dangling in the middle finally gave in and fell crashing down. The driver had been retrieved and he told the authorities that the front tires burst and the bus got out of control, we will keep you updated with any further information"
As they were looking at the tv Seta noticed something behind the news reporter and spoke up "Hey that is Keitaro's bike" said Seta "What!?" everyone said in unison "When did he get a bike anyway?" asked Haruka "Ohhh he actually had ordered in when we were in the U.S and when we landed in Tokyo he went to pick it up" answered Seta "So this was the surprise he had to show?" asked Kitsune "No actually he didn't even tell me about that" replied Seta "But he said it is not the bike it's something else he's planned" he added "Well even if it is his 'bike' then what is he actually doing there?" asked Motoko "I'll call him up and ask him" said Naru.
She got up and went running to upto the phone and called up Keitaro's no. with a worried expression on her face. "The no you have dialed is powered off" said the operator "Huhh that's weird his no's off" Naru came back in and sat down when she heard something that just mentally destroyed her
We have just received word that one missing and possibly casualty has been reported of a boy in his early 20's." This suddenly made everyone's hearts pound rapidly "Ohhh we have just received word that the possible casualty has been reported to be a Tokyo U Student named Keitaro Urashima"
Suddenly a cold silence swept through the room and all eyes were locked towards Naru who had no emotion on her face with the shock she had just received. She wasn't buiding the will to speak, she felt as if a thousand ice cold daggers had just stabbed her heart and not killing her but destroying her soul completely But she build the courage to just utter out one word.
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"K-Ke-Keit-Keitaro...
Ended
Ohhh no what have I just done. You guys might be thinking I am some evil psycho. (Muwahahahaha). Some extra bits added that you might not find in the actual series but hey it's a story anything is possible. Well Keitaro technically forced to leave the Hinata inn here as you can see. I might probably make the next chapter about someone really unexpected so be sure to chech in when the next chapter is posted
Well Keitaro's dead, wow how is this news going to affect the lives of everyone and especially of Naru? Did that dream that Naru saw meant about Keitaro passing away? What does the future hold for everyone now? Will Seta ever do something about his thick skulled brain? Will Mutsumi ever concentrate at what's at hand? Will Motoko ever overcome her fear of turtles? Will Su ever stop making Mecha Tama's? And why am I asking so many questions? Will I ever stop? Apparently not though. Find out the answers (some of them) next time on Love Hina I will always love you.
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Quick note: I mean to apologize in advance coz I might not be able to upload chapters frequently in the coming days, so please bear with me on this thank you
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