Abx20 bringing you another exciting installment in 'Love Hina I will always love you'

To Samhan: Thanks again for the support and also Happy Ramadan Mubarak to you too

To Jimmy lolol: Yea that is what I wanted out o the story no matter what happens the girls still remain stupid and idiotic as they are. As I said a couple of times before the story is not ending quickly I still have a lot to write (probably it will fit in with the story)

Disclaimer: I am not (I repeat am not) owner of Love Hina and any of its characters. It's Mr. Akamatsu, I write this story for fun filled purposes (really only for that)

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Chapter 11: Unwanted Guests

The last lines of the letter made Naru completely freeze up. "Keitaro, wants me to forget about him as well." A thousand things were going through the mind of the brunette. "Even he wants me to do that" Naru looked up at the sky. "Do you have any idea how it's easier said than done." Suddenly Naru receive a mind-slap "Wait if Keitaro wrote this, why he didn't ever give it to me." Naru asked herself.

"I'll tell you why" a voice said from behind. Naru turned around and found it was Su. "Huhh Su... what are you doing here?" asked Naru. "I came to check up on you and I see you finally went through Keitaro's stuff.. it's about time" said Su with a hand on her chin. "Su what do you know about this?" asked Naru. "Well you see it's a long story.. and I am not in the mood to tell" said Su with a cheeky smirk. Naru said nothing and looked at Su with an annoyed face, "All right I'll tell you it's a long story..."

Flashback:

Six months ago a day before Keitaro leaving for his expenditure

"Man I have written this thing a hundred times now, but I still can't get it right" Keitaro thought to himself as he scribbled a page an threw it in the corner of the room. "And she is still mad at me, I also need to try and cheer her up somehow" Keitaro thought as he started writing another letter.

"I know we have been through a lot and aside everything we got together and you turned out to be the promised girl and we are going to Tokyo U together as well..."

Keitaro just grabbed his head with both hands and threw the paper in the corner "Damn I can't get it right that one was worse than the last fifteen I wrote" Keitaro grabbed another piece of paper "Let's try it one more time"

"Naru I love you and I want to say I am gonna die someday..."

"Huhh this sucked than the last one even and I even didn't even begin writing" Keitaro thought as he ripped the paper in two. "Let's try again" Before Keitaro could start writing he received an unexpected visitor... on his head!

"Su! What are you doing here! I told everybody I wanted to be alone remember!" Keitaro said with a harsh voice (but useless as it is Su) "Hi Keitaro! What are you doing, writing a love letter for another girl" said a cheerful Su. Keitaro suddenly hid all those papers and placed a hand on Su's mouth. "Shut up Su someone might!..." Suddenly Keitaro started whispering realizing someone might hear him

"Some one might here you.. especially Nau and she will kill me" whispered Keitaro (sorry if some one doesn't like the small font all of a sudden I just kept it for whispering)

Su then saw the pile of papers in the corner of the room. "Oooohhhhh what are those?" Su said as she rolled over to the corner and picked up a bunch of papers. "Please Su don't touch those!" said Keitaro. "Why you hiding something" said Su as she looked through the papers "Why are you writing letters for Naru she is just downstairs" asked Su. Keitaro realized if he needed Su to keep her mouth shut he would need to tell her about these letters. "Huhhhh alright Su I'll tell you but ou need to keep our mouth shut about this and not tell anyone ok?" said Keitaro. Su first thought about it but finally agreed.

"Ok, you see me and Naru are really close now as you all know right, but the thing is I have seen how Naru feels about me and if something happens to me some how..." "especially what you guys do to me ear on a regular basis" "Than I don't want her to just you know..." "Quit living knowing your not gonna be there for her" Su interrupting Keitaro. Keitaro was surprised to hear such a thing from Su. "Yea, and wow Su when did you start talking like an adul..." before Keitaro could finish Su lost her one second moment and reverted back to her jolly ways, looking through the pile of papers. "Huuhhhhhh why do I even bother" Keitaro thought to himself.

Su soon jumped out of her paper mountain and came back to Keitaro "Keitaro so why don't you tell that to Naru face to face?" asked Su. "Well I will tell you if you pay attention this time" answered an annoyed Keitaro. Su nodded in agreement. "Huhhh you see I can't face Naru in that state that is why I am gonna write this letter and give it to her before I leave for the U.S, so Su if you don't mind will you please excuse me" said Keitaro turning back to writing the letter. "I can help you know" Su quickly answered. Keitaro knew he could not write this letter alone and decided to accept the help.

A few letters after:

"Ok this one is perfect, thanks Su" said Keitaro. "Ohhh you wrote that thing all on your own I just gave you the push needed" answered Su. "Well there must be some way I can repay you somehow" said Keitaro. "Well you could help me try out my new Meca T..." "Ok Su thanks for the help now good-bye" said Keitaro interrupting Su as he pushed her out of his room.

Flashback ended:

Naru was still confused wondering was this all a coincidence Keitaro dying today and she finding the letter on the same day as well, suddenly Naru realized something "Su why didn't you tell me about it you could have at least told me about the box in Keitaro's room and possibly to go through it?" asked Naru. "Yea I could but that would have been no fun" answered Su with a little chuckle. "Su sometimes you really get on my nerves"

Downstairs:

"Anything from Grandma Hina?" asked Kanako "No, nothing yet either she still doesn't know or she is still thinking what to do now" answered Haruka. Just then the phone rang "I'll get it" said Hauka as she got up to answer.

"Hello Hina residence" the voice on the other end made Haruka's expression change to an annoyed one. "Ohh hey Mrs. Urashima" Kanako got up hearing the name of the caller

"Haruka, what am I hearing they did not find Keitaro, what were you doing there you should have told them to keep looking why I ought..." just then the phone was snatched from Keitaro's mother "Hey Haruka sorry about that, so they did not find Keitaro" Mr. Urashima asked. "I am afraid not, they called off the search and now nothing certain what's gonna happen next" answered Haruka. "Huhhh well, it's gonna take us a while to get back, maybe another week so if any help is needed don't hesitate" said Mr. Urashima "Yea I'll think about it seeing your wife is half mad" answered Haruka "Hehe don't worry I'll be answering the phone from now on, ok bye Haruka" and with that the phone was hung up.

"Was that dad?" asked Kanako "Yep, you know could have just asked me to hand you the phone" answered Haruka. "Oh no, that wasn't necessary I mean it's fine" Kanako was quick to answer "Ohh alright your wish" said Haruka as she went back and sat down with the others.

"Even though, they know where I am they did not bother to talk to me even" Kanako thought to herself. "Meow why the long face Kanako" asked Kuro. "Ohh it's nothing just what happened still got me a bit gloomy" answered Kanako "You know if you miss them then why don't you call" stated the flying feline Kanako was quick to defend herself "I don't know what you are talking about" "Ohh Kanako I know how you feel and what makes you sad, just call them meow" answered Kuro. "No I couldn't I don't know how they would feel especially after what happened tonight"

Inside:

"Ummm let me ask you guys if for instance Hinata is closed down then where are all of you going to go to" asked Haruka. None of the girls were reluctant to answer and stayed silent. "I understand you guys are still against closing the dormitory and would do anything to keep it running but it's just a normal question" Haruka said as she looked acrossed the room for an answer but still to no avail. "Alright seeing you guys are still not comfortable in answering that so let's forget about it" But finally one of the girls spoke

"Well, I don't have anywhere to go, I came to Hinata because of some problems that I had with my family and seeing if Hinata is closed down then I might as well just start living on the streets" said Mitsune (Owwwww not again alright alight) said 'Kitsune'

Seeing this help the other girls build some courage to speak and up next was Shinobu

"Almost all of you remember when I first came here and what I was going through, I was already a shy and timid girl with no friends and scared to talk to anyone, but when I came here I felt happy and seeing if I have to leave then I might just move in with my mom, she has been asking me to visit her and everything but I don't think I could be the same person I am now, because I feel happy and strong because I have friends like all of you and leaving you all would just make me feel weak" said Shinobu.

"Hmmm good answers you too, really showed what this place means to you two" said Haruka "And what about you got anything say?" Haruka added as she diverted her attention towards Motoko and Mutsumi.

"Ohh goody my turn" said Mutsumi as she clamped her hands together. "Ummm, well I had spent some part of my childhood here, met friends like Keitaro and Naru, we always had fun playing together and ohh also 'the promise' even started that time so that's important. Also I became friends with all of you and I came here and finally got into Tokyo U and... and...and I forgot the remaining part I had to say" Mutsumi added as she scratched her head.

The others fell on their heads hearing that last part. "That was sweet Mutsumi, and the sweetest part was maybe the part you forgot" said Haruka "Well Motoko, you got anything to say?" Haruka added.

Suddenly Motoko started sweating "Ummm no I am not really great with this kind of stuff and I probably shouldn't.." Haruka looked at her with a blank expression, not saying a word, Motoko suddenly felt she that Haruka is giving her 'the look'

"Ok, umm well the real reason I came to Hinata mai only because when my sister got married I thought she has ruined her life letting herself get tied down by a man. So I had decided to leave and come here at Hinata for my training in swordsmanship and kendo techniques, become strong enough to prove myself so that I could one day inherit the shinmey-ryu school of martial arts and become the leader of my clan... But after I got used to living with you guys I realized what life is and how you should enjoy it. Before meeting you guys I was a strict well-trained girl who followed orders and lived according to the rules. But you guys made me have fun enjoy life on a simpler path. We had all sorts of crazy adventures at this place, so this place holds meaning for everyone because we'll cherish all those moments we spent here. From a strict disciplined harsh warrior you guys made me a more gentle elegant person as well, even if is closed down I know I can go back to the school and live there but I know it won't be the same because this place is special and you guys are irreplaceable"

All eyes were locked at Motoko, everyone was blindsided seeing a different nicer side of Motoko (I am also shocked). "What? Why are you guys looking at me like that? Did I say something wrong?" Motoko was confused and worried thinking she might have said something that was not appropriate or something that might have offended everyone

(Let's leave this silence drama alone for a while)

On the roof:

Naru and Su sitting on top of the roof, Naru still having a lot of questions regarding her new found information.

"So, pretty weird that Keitaro trusted you enough regarding that letter" said Naru "and more surprising you keeping your promise Su" Naru added with a slight giggle. "Ohh now you can say I did a really good job in pulling this job off" answered Su while rubbing her chin.

"Hehe, yea I know it must have been pretty tough to pull it off huh" Naru asked. "Yea you don't know the half of it, I usually went into Keitaro's room to perform some experiments and seeing tha.." "Wait what experiments Su?" Naru interrupted her. "Ohh that's not important right now, as I was saying seeing thast box all the time and running into you most of the days it made it really difficult" Su answered looking up in the night sky. "But everything said when I made that promise to Keitaro, I knew I had to keep it no matter what, I always thought of Keitaro's promise as an example for inspiration, if he could keep a promise and fulfill it after so long then I could at least do this now" she added. Hearing this made Naru suddenly remember how Keitaro did actually tried to keep his promise to 'the promised girl' which did turn out to be her, no matter how many times he failed he knew he had to keep the promise he made to her no matter what.

"Naru, Naru what's wrong?" said Su shrugging her brunette friend "Huhh oh I am sorry Su you were saying something?" Naru asked as she was brought out of her thoughts. "Yes I was asking.."

Back downstairs:

Silence had swept through out the room where everyone was seated. Motoko seemed to get more and more nervous as the silence continued longer. "Could you guys please say something already it's creeping me out" Motoko looked to break the silence again.

Kitsune finally got up from where she was sitting and stood right in front of Motoko and looked down at her. Then she did the unthinkable (atleast if your Motoko)

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She hugged him! (hahahaha)

Motoko didn't know whether to be afraid or just enjoy this moment. "Ohhh Motoko that was the sweetest thing I have ever heard" Kitsune said "Ohhh thankyou Kits.." before she could finish Kitsune interrupted her "Motoko I never knew you had such a soft side under all that hard coated shell" Kitsune said "Well thank you I guess but Kitsune cou.." "And all this time I thought you were a stone person who only loved her training and kendo's" Kitsune added. "Alright but can you please le.." Like before she was again strucked down by Kitsune "Motoko I just gotta say you really created a moment when you spoke like that I think it was the sweetest thing we have heard im this place"

"OK KITSUNE THANK YOU FOR THAT BUT COULD YOU PLEASE LET ME GO" Motoko quickly let that out predicting Kitsune might interrupt her again. Kitsune let her go instantly "Alright you don't have to talk in that tone" answered Kitsune with a little giggle.

"I got to say Motoko you really showed your caring and affectionate side there" said Haruka "Yea that was something really different from you Motoko" Mutsumi added "Yea Motoko you were really awesome, you really showed your feminine side" said Shinobu.

Hearing all these compliments made Motoko feel embarrassed and turn a luscious bright red "Ok everyone stop now I didn't achieve an accolade or something" said Motoko "You guys are just over exaggerating over this now, it was no big deal or anything"

Just as Motoko finished there was a man standing at the front door. He opened the door and it revealed that the man was wearing glasses, in his 20's, had a skinny build. Everyone at first were completely taken off guard as to who it might be and it was revealed to be

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Haitani! And also Shirai (please Keitaro is dead you really hoping he would walk in through that front door)

"Ohhh it's only you two" said Shinobu "Yea glad to see you too" answered Haitani "What are you guys doing here anyway?" asked Kitsune "Well we came here to.." just as Shirai was about to speak, but he was soon interrupted by the tv.

"This is Akira Shaibatsu here with the mayor of Tokyo,

Sir what is your take about this unexpected tragedy,

Mayor: Well all I can say is it is a terrible loss to see a young man, a possible future for our country die in such a tragic event, he was brave and selfless enough to rik his life for the sake of others. I wish my deepest condolences to his family for they have suffered the most from this tragic event. All I can say to them is that was a brave lad and it is because o him that so many lives were saved, unfortunately he lost hi own life in the process.

Akira: So sir, have you planned anything to help his family out in any way after what occurred tonight?

Mayor: As a matter of fact, we are willing to help them in any way possible the loss of a young man his really tragic and we have also decided that tomorrow will be a special tribute to in the city and a small monument will be carved in his honor and placed outside the city hall to remind us that this young hero's sacrifice will never be forgotten and will always remain in our hearts. That is all thank you.

Akira: So the mayor has declared tomorrow Keitaro Urashima's day for his brave and valiant sacrifice. This is Akira Shaibatsu reporting live from the scene.

"Man that loser has become a really big hero" said Shirai "Yea an idiot three year failure got an amazing hot girl, got this sweet job of an all girls dorm manager and now becomes a national hero" said Haitani. Both looked at each other and in unison "When is our luck gonna change!"

They soon realized that there were other people in the room as well. "Ok ignoring that, why did you guys say you came here?" asked Motoko

"Ohhh right we came here because of Keitaro...

Upstairs:

"Yea I was asking, whether your hungry coz I am starving" said Su. "Uhhh Su didn't you just ate a few hours ago and I saw you eat a lot" asked Naru "Yea I did but that was hours ago so now I am really hungry" answered Su "Su don't you think you eat just a little too much sometimes" asked Naru. "Yea I know but when I am hungry then I have to eat don't you eat when you are hungry" asked Su. "Ummm yea but I do not eat uncontrollably and then after a while I start eating again" answered Naru. "That is because in my country people are always great eaters and can eat at a rapid rate" said Su "But where does all that food go I mean you never get fat, your weight practically stays the same" asked Naru "Ohhh that is a long story you see..." "Uhhh you know what let's head downstairs and you can eat something ok" Naru interrupting Su (probably was to bored out to listen to Su's long tale)

Downstairs:

"And that's why" said Haitani "And we thought if he even was a loser we can at least do this favor for him" said Shirai "Well good seeing you guys take responsibility for once in your life, so you guys should..." before Haruka could finish Naru came down with Su to join the others. They were also joined by Seta (had to also bring him the guy disappeared for a while now)

"Hey what's going on down here?" asked Su "Well Shirai and Haitani have come here to..." before Shinobu could finish someone was at the door.

"Hold on I'll get it" said Haruka as she got up to see who was at the door.

Everyone was shocked to see the figure standing in the door (except Haruka and also Seta coz he's thick-skulled) and yelled in unison

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"GRANDMA HINA!"

ENDED

Well that is that finally got this chapter done had to re-write this a couple of times but inally think I have nailed it.

In this chapter I did finally got a scene involving Su and Naru (If you guys remember I had told might write a scene about those two) and also got Shirai and Haitani squeezed in there.

Some things left unquestioned in this chapter but will be answered in the next chapter.

Now about this chapter we got to see a different side of Su (wow) and also a grand memorial for Keitaro awaits. And why did Shirai and Haitani show up? Why did they came because of Keitaro? Is it possible they might have some vital information regarding Keitaro or something important? (Or is it they just wanted to see the girls) Why did Grandma Hina show u unannounced? Is Hinata going to be closed down? Why the heck am I asking so many questions? Do I have a problem? Or is it I forgot I am writing this fic?

Find the answers (maybe some of them) in the next exciting chapter of Love Hina I will always love you

As always please read, rate and review the chapter will be much loved and appreciated

This is abx20 bidding farewell