Im trying hard to make this a really good fanfic and I hope Im succeeding…please tell me if I am….or if I need to try harder….

I don't not own any characters except Madison Greer and her mother(who is coming up very soon)(I think)

So go on! Go! Read!

As I was falling through the air, it felt as if time slowed.

I barely heard both Percy and Annabeth yell my name above me.

I heard the air whistling in my ears as I gained speed. I felt my wavy red velvet hair in the air above me.

As I neared the ground I tensed up, and got ready for the impact, but then I remembered that I was suppose to relax. As hard as it was to relax I managed it before I hit the ground.

I landed on my feet and rolled, doing a summersault. I stood up quickly. The adrenaline in my body was in over drive, and I bolted as the buildings front doors opened.

I ran down the empty road. There was not a car or house or building or anything in sight. It would be another mile before I would see anything, and I didn't think I would make a mile more.

I felt the adrenaline draining from my body. I was getting tired from running for so long. I looked behind me and saw that they were still chasing me. I started slowing down without wanting to, but my body was tired as hell.

After about a minute pain shot up my right leg.

It hurt so much, it slowed me down, a lot, but I pushed through it. I made it to a patch of trees, and hid behind a huge oak.

I sat down panting and pulled up my pant leg to look at my ankle.

It was swollen, and purple and blue. I touched it softly.

The slightest touch made pain shoot through my leg.

I tried moving my ankle but it hurt to much and it wouldn't move.

I think I might have broken it.

How I ran on it while it was broken I have no clue. The only reasonable answer I had was the adrenaline helped.

I felt my arm hurting and my cheek.

I touched my left upper arm and found a piece of glass sticking out, and blood running down my arm.

The blood stained my white t-shirt.

I touched my cheek and found the cut was deeper than I thought, and it felt about two inches wide.

I started to get light headed. The pain from my ankle and all the blood that came out of both wounds was getting to me.

The edge of my vision started blurring and turning black.

I faintly heard Percy and Annabeth running through the trees getting closer. I tried to get up to move, but I failed and ended up laying on my side hearing them approach.

"Found her!" I heard Annabeth yell.

"Maddie?" I heard Percy said quietly.

I managed to move my fingers and whisper something inaudible.

I heard them talking to each other quickly, but I was too out of it to understand any of it.

That's when I blacked out completely.

Sorry that was kind of short, but I thought that would be a good place to stop.

Please tell me what you think of it so far, and if you have any questions don't be afraid to ask.

I'll try to answer all and any questions you may have.

I'm starting another chapter right now so it'll be up tonight!