AN: STOP flaming! if u flam it menz ur a prep or a posr! Da only reson Peppers swor is coz he had a hedache ok an on tup of dat he wuz mad at dem 4 having sexx! PS im nut updating umtil I get five good revoiws!
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Peepers made and Hater and I follow him. He kept shouting at us angrily.
"You ludacris fools!" he shouted.
I started to cry tears of blood down my pallid face. Hater comforted me. When we went back to the castle Peepers took us to Professor Souradough and Professor Beeza who were both looking very angry.
"They were having sexual intercourse in the Forbidden Forest!" he yelled in a furious voice.
"Why did you do such a thing, you mediocre dunces?" asked Professor Beeza .
"How dare you?" demanded Professor Sourdough.
And then Hater shrieked. "BECAUSE I LOVE HIM!"
Everyone was quiet. Peepers and Professor Beeeza still looked mad but Professor Sordogh said. "Fine. Very well. You may go up to your rooms."
Hater and I went upstairs while the teachers glared at us.
"Are you okay, Wander?" Hater asked me gently.
"Yeah I guess." I lied. I went to the dorm and brushed my teeth and my fur and changed into a low-cut black floor-length dress with red lace all around it and black high heels. When I came out….
Hater was standing in front of the bathroom, and he started to sing 'I just wanna live' by Good Charlotte. I was so flattered, even though he wasn't supposed to be there. We hugged and kissed. After that, we said goodnight and he reluctantly went back into his room.
review by Who'stheuniverse'sultimateevildoerHAteR:
why is Peepers telling me what to do? why AM I listening! THIS STORY IS STUPID and why was wander crying blood? he should really get that checked out. pretty sure that isn't supposed to happen. and you still haven't told me what me and wander were doing together!
review by HaterxPeepers4ever:
Even if I did have a "hedache", I would NOT act this way. Dominator, do you understand how to write at all? It's the fifth chapter and I haven't seen anything resembling a plot or character development at all! In fact, you can hardly tell that these are characters at all!
In other news, whoever the "coolestinthegalaxy" better stop leaving reviews on my fics that just say something like "And then Hater and Peepers died because they were losers." It is rude, and I'm posting this here so everyone knows! fyi, I read your fics, and you have one twisted mind!
review by sylviathezbornak:
wait, this is what you've been freaking out about, Wander? All of you? I mean, you can tell she's joking. ha, it's alright. Better than her blowing up the galaxy, I guess.
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review by neverhurtstohelp5000000
"Uh, Dominator, is crying tears of blood a vampire thing where you're from? Cause I don't really know why vampire me was doing it…I've also never seen Beeza worked up about anything ever. But I'm still loving the outfit choices! And I'm sure this story is going somewhere great,,,"
