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monkeymouse7906 – Here we go another chapter, 2 actually.

Please don't leave me again

Chapter 9: At first you don't succeed

Elsa

"Do you want to leave?" Pitch asked smiling that crooked smile that no one liked.

"Of course I do!" I answered back

"Well if you do then you will kill Jack!" He chuckled.

"Why would I do that?" I declared

"Because he abandoned you and made you think he loved you Elsa!" he smirked. All those memories came flooding back to me on how he left me and when he left me after we kissed.

"But I forgave him." I started to say

"Hans! Will you take this pathetic young queen out and chain her up for me please!" He snarled

"No! Please don't!" but it was too late Hans had me and chained me up

"Jack is twice the man you will ever be!" I yelled trying to break free

"Oh but that is where you're wrong, He is just a silly little boy that makes snow and frost and I'm a man who creates nightmares and scares you!" he sneered

"And until you accept my offer, I will get Hans to harass you!" he shouted and it echoed into my ear and Hans started to put his hands on me and feeling me up my little ray of hope came in

"Get off my sister you jerk!" Anna protested punching Hans in his face causing him to be knocked out

"Anna! Get me out of here!" I barely whispered because my throat has hurting from all the screaming to get Hans to get of me

"Ok Elsa, its okay Jack is here to protect you!" She told me and got me out of the chains

Jack

"Pitch!" I shouted

"Ah-ha, so you have came to save your silly little queen!" He replied with a laugh

"Don't you ever talk about her in that way!" I yelled flying up to him sending ice everywhere as it was coming out of my staff like crazy as all I wanted to do was to save Elsa she is all that mattered to me and that she was the only one who I wanted to be with. "Jack I'm going to help you no matter what you say as I can't see you get hurt, I'll be fine!" Elsa yelled up shooting ice up making Pitch confused and he was getting weak and couldn't take it anymore. "No, get into the sleigh you and Anna! I have got him before I can do it again!" I yelled at her and with that she ran into the sleigh because Pitch had fallen and was on the floor. "Don't you ever come back!" I spat at Pitch.

Pitch

"I'll be back don't you worry!" I called after them as soon they left and holded Hans up "I thought you were good at this?" I asked

"I am I just do it when I have to do it by myself." Hans spoke up

"Well next time do it properly! Make her plead! Make her kill Jack for you to get off her and this time use the sister as well!" I spat making sure he understood what I meant and that will make me impossible to be defeated. "But we must leave it for a week as then she would not expect us." I told him 'I laughed as I knew she will defiantly do what I say next time I will take her because she will won't want to get her hurt or her sister!'

I know it's not that much but this is not the main part Woops Spoiler alert! But I will make sure I at least update everyday even if it is just 1 chapter a day because of school but I have been ill and I could spend my days at the moment trying to update. x