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Chapter 17: This is my fault
Anna
"Elsa?" I asked wearily with Elsa sobbing in my hair making it cold
"Anna! I'm glad you are awake." Elsa replied crying tears that turned to ice as soon as they drip off her face and smashed into pieces on the floor.
"Elsa, control yourself… hey why are we chained up?" I asked with a worried look on my face.
"Oh Anna, it's my fault! This man Pitch for some reason hates me" Elsa cried
"No, he wants Jack and wants to destroy Jack so he will hurt people he loves to get at him. Wait, what?" I reasoned
"Hans is going to hurt us and Pitch has the guardians in the other room and has all ready hurt them all they do is moan of pain every 5 minutes. And what did you say… He wants to hurt us!" Elsa whimpered trying not to move and make noise just in case Hans or Pitch come and hurt us to get at Jack and Hans is just evil anyway his charming looks make you believe everything he says.
Jack
"Hello? Anyone here?" I asked as soon as I flew in the window of North's workshop, it was like everyone left me to do this myself with no help at all. So I flew back out of the window and went to The Warren to see if they were there. But it was empty just like North's workshop so I got thinking to go and see baby tooth to see what was happening then I remembered that the guardians would only go there if there was trouble, and they would have gotten me if something was the matter. 'This is my fault; they have been taken by Pitch! I know it was Pitch because he has Elsa and Anna too!' I said to myself slowly walking out of The Warren and flew back to the castle to tell Kristoff where Elsa and Anna was and that he shouldn't worry because I have taken Pitch before and I will do it again to protect Elsa and everyone else and that I will bring them back as soon as possible before it was too late.
Elsa
"Look who is awake." Hans said coming out of the shadows with an evil grin on his face.
"No, leave us alone!" I argued
"Nope, who is going first and what are we going to do?" Hans said slyly looking at me and Anna slowly making eye contact making me feel nervous and uncomfortable it was like he was controlling us making us say what he wanted when he wanted and if not we would be killed. "Come on then, who is it going to be?" Hans laughed putting his hands together like an evil criminal mastermind.
So that's Chapter 17 and I am making the chapters shorter to bring more atmosphere and danger into the story but like I always say reviews are welcome and don't forget to follow and favorite but most of all Thanks for reading! x
