Hi everyone I am back with another chapter and Yay! Jack is back in the story anyway thank you all for 4,900+ views and I am getting to the good parts of the story now so more stuff is going to happen and hopefully there will be longer chapters.
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Chapter 21: No, Elsa what are you doing?
Pitch
"Jack, we have been inspecting to see you here." I laughed putting my hand on Elsa's shoulder.
"No…" Jack gasped
"Oh yes…" I said, and then I turned to Elsa
"Look Elsa, the person who left you to see this other kid called Jaime and his little sister." I smiled whispering into Elsa's ear.
"No… he told me he left me to protect me." Elsa whimpered with a tear forming in her eye
"I did, I protected you from him because you were too naive!" Jack sobbed trying to explain but I had Elsa believe that Jack didn't want her and that he only wanted her for her powers.
"You liar, you lied to me!" Elsa screamed shooting ice at Jack
"No, Elsa I didn't, don't listen to him!" Jack shouted back trying to defend himself with ice shooting out from his staff
"That's it Elsa, kill him, he left you, he thinks you are naïve." I whispered in her ear making her cry even more. Oh how this was so amusing to me she believed every word I said and Jack is going to be defeated I just need to keep up this game and hopefully she will be my little servant and I will make her kiss Jack and make that bright light appear and she will live forever until her love for Jack is gone but until then she will be my protector and we will rule this earth together with ice, snow and darkness.
Jack
"I am not naive!" Elsa screamed forcing more power against me
"No, Elsa what are you doing? Why are you listening to him, he got Hans to rape you! And I am sorry for calling you naive!" I screamed back crying knowing that Pitch had Elsa wrapped around his finger. 'This is what I have been scared of, Pitch having full power over Elsa. I can't do this no more I love her too much to let him do this to her' I started to cry even more and I could see through the blizzard in the room that Elsa was crying too but was trying to hide it "Jack, I fell for you… why would you do this to me? But oh I remember very clearly you did it to me when I was little! You build up my hopes then knock me down on my face. Well this time it isn't going to work!" Elsa shouted
"Elsa stop, he is controlling you, don't become the monster you have been frightened of becoming!" I said back and with that she stopped shooting ice and collapsed on the floor crying. 'Oh no, what have I done? Why did I have to say that for?'
So there is chapter 21 and Yay we finally know a little bit more on that bright light thing! But like I always say reviews are welcome and don't forget to follow and favorite but most of all Thanks for reading! x
