Thank you all for the reviews. Since a few people commented on it, I wanted to make sure everyone knows that, although it did win the contest, that's largely due to the fact that it was the only entry in the multi chapter category, lol.

Now, as promised, here's part 2.


Within half an hour the four of them were in Dave's car, cruising down the highway with the top down, feeling the wind blowing through their hair. The boys sat in the back, talking excitedly about how they would spend their day, and where they might go on the new tour. Dave hummed happily along to the radio. Nothing made him quite as happy as driving his car with his boys. On his left, a large billboard proclaimed "SPLASHLAND! NEXT RIGHT". He smiled, and turned to let the boys know, but they'd seen the sign and were practically vibrating in their seats with excitement. He chuckled and took the next turn, which lead quickly to the entrance to the waterpark. He began driving up and down the rows of cars, hoping to find a parking space that would keep them from having to trek in from outer Mongolia, but it looked like that wasn't happening, so he headed for the back of the parking lot. He pulled into a space and killed the motor.

"Well, we're here, everyone out!" he told them, and opened the door and got out, the boys scrambling after him. They're all dressed similarly, each of them wearing swim shorts, sandals and brightly colored Hawaiian shirts. Alvin had left his cap at home, not wanting to risk it getting lost on a slide or in a pool or taken by someone. They each had a beach towel with them to help keep them dry, and Dave had made Alvin promise not to snap them at anyone, though they all knew before the end of the day that he would.

"Alright boys, before we head in, what are the rules?" he asked them.

"Stay together, no swimming for 20 minutes after we eat, stay out of the deep pools, and don't talk to strangers!" the boys told him, Simon and Theodore reciting them happily while Alvin rolled his eyes the whole time.

"We know the rules, can we go now?" Alvin asked, craning his neck to see around Dave. He could see the tallest water slide from here, and hear the laughter and shouts from all the kids already inside the park. Dave laughed and stepped aside.

"Alright boys, I'll be…" was as far as he got before they took off like a bullet, nearly knocking him down in their haste. He was glad he'd gotten them season passes to the park, so they wouldn't need him to get. Dave intended to spend the day relaxing in the sun while the boys had fun. He walked after them whistling happily.

"Come on Theodore! I wanna get to The Black Hole!" Alvin cried, pulling his little brother after him.

"I…I don't wanna ride The Black Hole! Can't we go on the Swisher Soaker?" the littlest chipmunk asked, digging his heels in.

"Come on Theodore, that's for little kids!" Alvin told him, struggling to pull his little brother along.

"Alvin, we are little kids," Simon reminded his brother, removing Alvin's fingers from their death lock on Theodore's wrist, "Theodore, you don't have to ride it, but Alvin and I want to. How about I wait with you while Alvin gets on, and then he can wait with you while I do it?" He asked his littlest brother. Theodore looked up at The Black hole, shuddered and nodded emphatically to his spectacled brother.

"You see Alvin, all…" he looked for his brother, but Alvin was already racing for the line for The Black Hole. Simon sighed, took Theodore's hand, and led him to the nearest pool. It looked like he would be watching Theodore while Alvin rode on whatever he wanted to…..again. He didn't mind sticking with Theodore, they always had fun, but he'd been looking forward to getting a chance to ride The Black Hole, or any of the other rides Theodore refused to ride because they were too big for him. Theodore caught site of his favorite slide, The Swisher Soaker. It was a short slide, but it had water jets shooting out along the sides as you slid down, which the chubby little chipmunk loved. He let go of Simon's hand and ran to it, climbing the ladder quickly and sliding down, giggling like crazy. The spectacled chipmunk couldn't help himself; he chuckled to see his little brother having so much fun, and quickly climbed the ladder after him, sliding down with a smile on his face.

Alvin meanwhile was quickly making his way to the top of The Black Hole, a 5 story tall water slide with flashing lights as you slid down the spiral tube. He was surprised at how short the line was. Normally it would take about 10 minutes of waiting to get to the top, but he didn't see anyone else waiting until he was almost at the top. 10 other people were waiting ahead of him, all talking excitedly. He sighed; he hated waiting, even for a line as short as this. He wasn't waiting for long, though. Before he knew it he was standing in front of the tube, waiting for the guy keeping watch to wave him into the slide. He'd barely lifted his hand when Alvin dove into the tube feet first, screaming and giggling like mad. It was pitch black inside, occasionally with flashes of light from little rings and arrows inside. He could see the end of the tunnel ahead (it always ended to quickly for him) and he flew out of the tube into bright daylight.

"WOOOOOOHOOOOOO!" he screamed at the top of his lungs as he landed in the pool the slide ended at. He swam under the water to the shallow end and climbed out and shook a little of the water from his face and hair. He looked over and could see Theodore and Simon splashing around in one of the kiddie pools. He rolled his eyes and went over to them.

"Are you two going to spend all day in the kiddie pool?" he asked, crossing his arms.

"Welcome back, nice of you to remember us," Simon replied, turning to glare at Alvin, "Do you think you can stay with Theodore for a few minutes? I was hoping I could ride The Black Hole this time too."

"All you have to do is ask Si." Alvin said with a grin and a shrug. Simon growled and made his way to the edge of the pool.

"I'll be back in little bit Theodore. You and Alvin decide what we do next, okay?" he told him as he ran off in the direction of the big slide.

"H-have fun Simon!" Theodore called after him. Alvin took a step back and leapt into the pool, sending a huge wave to splash his little brother, who burst out into a fit of giggles. Alvin surfaced next to him and gave him an evil grin before dunking Theodore under. Theodore quickly resurfaced, spluttering and coughing and thrashing his arms. Alvin let out a gale of laughter as Theodore got himself back on his feet and his breathing under control.

"T-that wasn't funny Alvin!" he cried out, glaring at his brother.

"It was from where I'm standing," Alvin replied with a grin. Theodore looked past his brother, and with a pleading look said

"Simon, tell him that wasn't funny!" he said, his lower lip quivering. Alvin whipped his head around, ready to start explaining to his brother, but no one was there. He heard Theodore's giggle and felt his little brother tackle him into the water. They both came up spluttering and laughing.

"You had me convinced he was there. Where'd you learn that lip quiver?" Alvin asked, wiping water from his eyes.

"I saw you doing it all the time," Theodore told him with a grin, "but Dave never fell for it like you did," he said, giggling some more.

"Well, it looks like you two are having fun," Simon said from behind them. He was still drenched form the slide and grinning happily, "Did you decide what we're doing next?"

"Uh…yeah, we decided to…to…" Alvin stammered, caught off guard by the question.

"We decided to get a snack!" Theodore declared, "I feel like some pizza, and maybe some popcorn and pretzels, and a soda….maybe a shake….and I could go for some…" he said, walking to the steps leading out of the pool. Alvin and Simon just looked at each other and laughed, trailing along behind their little brother.


I hope you all enjoyed that chapter. Once I get some reviews I'll post the final part, so please review, and thanks for reading!