Chapter 5

Raveon and Avery have arrived at Canterlot Castle. Now they are exploring the city.

Raveon: "So where shall we go first?"

Avery: "We could look at the art gallery."

Raveon: "Great ide-"

Raveon accidently bumped into a white coated unicorn stallion with blue mane wearing a fancy suit.

Fancy Pants: "I say, I'm terribly sorry. I wasn't watching where I was paying attention."

Raveon: "Dude it's okay. I was the one not watching where I was going."

Avery: "You're Fancy Pants! My father told me a lot about you!"

Raveon: (very confused) "Fancy Pants? He's not wearing pants Avery."

Avery: (shushes him) "I'm so sorry. We're from Ponyville."

Fancy Pants: "How quaint. For I know a few ponies from Ponyville myself. I do recall one of them is name Rarity."

Raveon: "You know Rarity?!"

Fancy Pants: "I do. She and her friends, one of them is Princess Twilight Sparkle, are my special friends."

Avery: "They are our friends too."

Fancy Pants: "You don't say."

Raveon: "We do say. You see I'm new here and I'm Princess Celestia's and Princess Twilight's pupil. And I'm just traveling across Equestria with my close friend here. Our first stop is Canterlot. Princess Celestia is letting us stay in the castle and-"

Fancy Pants: "You're staying at the castle?"

Avery: "Oh yes. For a day."

Fancy Pants: "Impressive. You two know both Princess Celestia and Princess Twilight Sparkle?"

Raveon: "Uh…yeah?"

Fleur Dis Lee: "Hmm, more ponies from Ponyville with expensive tastes."

Avery: "Uh…thank you. We are really sorry we bumped into you Mr. Fancy Pants."

Raveon: "Very sorry."

Fancy Pants: "I'm not. You two are obviously ponies worth bumping into. Listen, to make your visit to Canterlot such a delight, I have a VIP box reserved at the Wonderbolts Derby this afternoon. Would you two be so kind as to join me and a few of my companions there?"

Raveon and Avery: "Us?"

Fancy Pants: "But of course children."

Raveon: "Well?"

Fancy Pants: "We'd love to see you both there uh what are your names?"

Raveon: "Raveon."

Avery: "Avery."

Fancy Pants: "What fine unique names."

Back at the suite.

Raveon: "Guess we can put the art gallery on hold for a bit."

Avery: "Yeah. Maybe tomorrow before we leave."

Raveon: "We better get going. Mr. Fancy is waiting for us."

Raveon and Avery arrived at the track searching for Fancy Pants.

Raveon: "VIPs coming through! Move it, move it, move it, MOVE IT!"

Fancy Pants: "Raveon and Avery, so good to see you! Glad you two could make it."

Silver Frames: "Who let the riff raff up here?"

Raveon: (growling, green eyes)

Avery: (puts hoof on his face) "Let it go."

Fancy Pants: Everypony, this is Raveon and Avery. They are from Ponyville and are staying at Canterlot Castle until tomorrow.

Ponies: (gasps)

Raveon: "Is that a problem?"

Jet Set: "These ruffians?"

Upper Crust: "Don't be ridiculous Fancy."

Raveon: (pointing at Jet Set) "You!"

Jet Set: "I beg your pardon!"

Raveon: "You're that snooty stuck-up that bumped into me earlier!"

Jet Set: "Nonsense! You bumped into me!"

Raveon: (growling)

Avery: "Raveon please calm down."

Announcer: Fillies and gentlecolts, welcome to the Wonderbolts Derby! The competitors are taking their places at the starting line. The race will begin momentarily!

Fancy Pants: "Come now. Let's stop all this fussing. Let us enjoy the race."

(ponies agreeing)

Avery: "Mr. Fancy Pants is right. Just calm down Raveon. For me?"

Raveon: (sighs laughs a little) "I do just about everything for you."

Avery: (blushes) "Thank you." (kisses his cheek)

Fancy Pants: "I do say young fellow, is this your lover?"

Raveon: "Uh…we're just very close friends sir."

Fancy Pants: "Well go ahead chap. As you young ponies say today, "Make your move" Don't let this one slip away."

Raveon: "I'll try to remember that."

Announcer: "AND THERE OFF!"

Fancy Pants: "I'll be rooting for Fire Streak of course. He's sure to take home the grand prize."

(ponies agreeing)

Raveon: "Eh, I don't think he has a chance against Blaze."

(ponies gasp)

Raveon: "What? What did I say?"

Jet Set: "You and your riff raff lover should leave the section at once."

Raveon: "You are really pushing it pal!"

Avery: "Please don't!"

Announcer: "And it's Blaze!"

Raveon and Avery: (cheers) (high-five)

Fancy Pants: "Bravo, Raveon! I say, how did you know Blaze would be victorious?"

Raveon: "My friend Rainbow Dash talks about her all the time. She says Blaze is the 3rd fastest Wonderbolt. I'm not much of a fan, but I be listening to her about them. She's a fan."

After the Derby.

Fancy Pants: "Well you two I must say it was very impressive meeting both of you."

Raveon: "Same here sir."

Avery: "We hope to see you again."

Fancy Pants: "As am I. Until we meet again my young friends. Raveon good luck on your journey and remember what I told you."

Raveon: "I will sir. Good bye."

Avery: "What's he talking about Raveon?"

Raveon: (blushing) "Uh…nothing. Let's head back to our room."

As they enter the room, both of them collapsed on the bed all tuckered out from that walking.

Raveon: "I'm exhausted. Wow. It's 4:35pm."

Avery: "Yeah. So what were you and Mr. Fancy Pants talking about?"

Raveon: "Uh…well…Hey if we make it back down there, we could see a movie in theater."

Avery: (gets closer in his face) "Raveon Brooks you are changing the subject! I know he said something to you!"

Raveon: "He didn't Avery I swear."

Avery: "Tell me now!" (pokes him in stomach)

Raveon: (laughing) "I'M TICKLISH!"

Avery: "Oh you are, are you?" (smirking)

Raveon: I can't believe I said that! "No I'm not! Forget you heard that!"

Avery: "Too late! You're gonna get your guts spilled!"

Raveon: "Avery! Stay away!"

Avery got on top of Raveon and started tickling him like crazy and he was squirming trying to get away. But she held him down and started tickling and tickling some more. The more he got tickled, the more he laughed and laughed. Avery stopped tickling him seeing that he has had enough.

Avery: "Are you gonna tell me now or what?"

Raveon: (panting) "My ribs hurt." (chuckles)

Avery: "Raveon."

Raveon looked directly at Avery. Avery looked into those deep dark brown eyes then she started to blush looked away. Raveon turned her back towards him.

Raveon: "You're pretty cute you know that?"

Avery: "You're changing the subject again."(blushing red)

Raveon: "Not I'm not." (rubbing his hoof on her back)

Avery: (moaning)

Raveon: "You okay?" (raised one eyebrow)

Avery: (softly) "Yes.~~"

Raveon: She's so beautiful. Her short black hair, her chocolate brown eyes, and her smooth as silk body. I feel like I'm turning her on. And I feel turned on too. I could just hold her in my arms and never let her go. I really wanna make out with her now. I wonder what she is thinking about right now. Does she feel the same way about me? If only I had my mind-reading ability.

Avery: Oh my Celestia. The way he rubs my back like that is making me tingle. It's driving me crazy. He's so handsome. His spikey black mane, his dark brown sparkling eyes, his dazzling smile. That amazing smile. It makes me want to make out with him and never stop. I hope he doesn't take his arms off me. I don't want him to let go. I want him to make me tingling again.

Raveon: "Avery?"

Avery: "Yes?"

Raveon: "Do you want to have dinner with me?"

Avery: "Like a date?"

Raveon: "Uh…yes."

Avery: "I love to go out with you."

Raveon: "Why does it feel like you planned to get on me?"

Avery: "Oh it was just a coincidence."

Raveon: "Uh-huh. Can I get up please?"

Avery: "Oh! Right." (giggles)

Raveon: "I got an idea. Why don't you let Princess Celestia give you a tour of the castle?"

Avery: "Uh sure why?"

Raveon: "Got plans for us."

Avery: "Oh are you being romantic right now?"

Raveon: "Maybe."

Avery: "K. I'll go find her. See you soon."

Raveon has plans for this evening. What kind of evening is he going to plan? And why is he looking at his spell book? Find out in Chapter 6.

Note: I made it longer because it was getting good. ;-)