Note: Hey fans and readers. I figure this one time that we see what's happening in Ponyville after Raveon sent them another letter. Don't worry we'll go straight to Raveon and Avery. Count on it. Sorry it took so long too.
Chapter 13
Raveon and Avery have arrived in Manehatton. When they got there, they meet none other than the con artists, the Flim Flam Brothers. They don't know that the product that they just bought is a fake just yet. But they will. Now we take a break from our favorite couple for a little bit as we see what's going on in Ponyville after Raveon sent another letter.
Tory flew by the library to see if his older brother sent another letter.
Tory: "Morning Spike."
Spike: "Morning Thomas."
Tory: "Dude you don't have to call me by my real name."
Spike: "Okay. What's up?"
Tory: "I was wandering has Raveon sent another letter."
Spike: "Well not y-" (burps up a letter) "Here it is!"
Tory: (grabs letter with his mouth) "Come on! I think everypony is at Twilight's castle!"
Spike: (hops on Tory's back) "Fly away then young Pegasus!"
Tory flew over to Twilight's kingdom. The Mane 6 and his sister were there.
Spike: "Morning girls. Raveon sent another letter."
Twilight: "Thank you Spike. I'll read it."
Twilight read the letter while the girls, Tory, and Spike listen:
Dear friends,
Avery and I have arrived safely in Manehattan. It is beautiful. It's just like the one in my home world. When we got off we saw a crowd over at Central Park. Two cool salesponies sold us a very impressive accessory. A Mood Bracelet. Avery bought it for the both of us. Those brothers are very nice I guess. I think I just got a bad feeling about them. I don't know. We arrived at our hotel. Thanks Rarity. You are the best. Write back soon
Sincerely,
Raveon C. Brooks
Rarity: (excited) "Did you hear what he said?! I'm the best!" (squeals)
Fluttershy: "I hope they're using those scarfs I knitted for them. Manehattan can be chilly there this time of year."
Rainbow Dash: "Don't worry Fluttershy. They'll remember. I wonder who those salesponies were.
Applejack: "Ah like to know that too."
Twlight: "Wait there's more to the letter!"
Pinkie: "Read it Twilight! Read it read it read it read it read it!"
Twilight read the letter again:
P.S: Now I remember! I think those ponies names were…That's it! The Flim Flam Brothers! Weird names. They sold us the Mood Bracelets! They're pretty cool...I guess.
Applejack: "THE FLIM FLAM BROTHERS!"
Rainbow Dash: "Not those rip-offs again!"
Twilight: "They're up to know good again!"
Paige and Tory looked at each other.
Paige: "Well I'm confused."
Tory: "Yeah me too. Who are the Flim Flam Brothers?"
Applejack: "The Flim Flam Brothers are a couple of con-artist that sell false profits to ponies!"
Rainbow Dash: "The Apple family almost lost their farm because of those crooks!"
Applejack: "They made some phony tonic to help cure the elderly and my poor Granny Smith! They made a liar outta me because ah said it works! Those two disappear after ah said to everypony that their tonic was a fake!"
Tory: "Those cheaters!"
Rarity: "Ruffians is what they are dear Tory."
Paige: "Oh my Celestia! They bought the products! What are we gonna do?!"
Applejack: "Spike take a letter! NOW!"
Spike: Okay okay! Geez!"
Applejack and the others tell Spike to write their warning about the scheming twin unicorns. Hopefully they're not too late.
Back in Manehattan, at the Mane Fair Hotel, Avery woke up to a beautiful morning, but Raveon is still asleep.
Avery: (kisses Raveon) "That's what you get for spending almost the whole night reading."
Raveon: (yawns) "Yeah, yeah. Whatever. Where are you going so early?"
Avery: "I'm gonna get us some breakfast. Do you love pancakes?"
Raveon: "Yeah."
Avery: "K. I'll get us some. Be right back." (blows kiss)
Raveon: (yawns cracks neck) "Avery forgot her mood bracelet. Still got mine on."
Raveon took a good look at the bracelet.
Raveon: "Strange. Something's not right about these."
That's when a letter appeared.
Raveon: "Hey it's a letter from the guys."
Raveon reads it out loud:
Dear Raveon:
This is Applejack! Whatever y'all do don't fall for the Flim Flam Brothers' tricks and schemes! Those bracelets y'all got are probably fake. You two been tricked! You got to stop them from stealing those ponies' money! They're BAD NEWS they are. This is Rarity darling. You stop those ruffians once and for all! This is Rainbow Dash! You get em' newbie! Press them into jerk cider! This is Tory. Give them the old one two bog bro! This is Twilight. You have to stop them Raveon.
Sincerely,
Twilight Sparkle and friends
Raveon: "These are fakes?!"
Raveon lifted the bracelet off his hoof. There was a green painted ring around it. He then sees a blinking light inside the bracelet.
Raveon: "Why those no good crooks! Twilight is right. I gotta stop them."
Raveon headed to the lobby and was about to go out the door until he saw Avery with a carry-out plate filled with homestyle pancakes.
Avery: "Hey you. Where are you going and what happen to your hoof?"
Raveon: "The bracelets."
Avery: "I just love mine Raveon. I must've forgot to wear it."
Raveon: "Yeah well be glad you forgot to wear it."
Avery: "What's wrong?"
Raveon: "Those bracelets are FAKE!"
Avery: "Fake?"
Raveon: "Yeah. Twilight, Applejack and the others sent me a letter back. They told me that the Flim Flam Brothers are scheming con artist that sell false items to ponies just to get their money. We have been tricked Avery. Those bracelets are just stainless steel with blinking lights."
Avery: "What are we gonna do?"
Raveon: "We're gonna stop them. In my world, me and my mystery team do something like this all the time. We catch crooks. Come on."
Avery: "What about breakfast?"
Raveon: "No time. We got swindlers to catch!"
Raveon and Avery went out to find the brothers. They finally found them selling the fake item at Time Square where they show the Good Morning Equestria news show.
Flim: "Come one! Come all!"
Flam: "Step right up Time Square if you want to buy the most amazing bracelet made from a rare stone step on up!"
Ponies: (exciting chatter)
Raveon: "Don't buy it!"
Avery: "Listen to him everypony!"
Raveon: You can't buy that bracelet, because it is a fake!"
Ponies: (gasping)
The Flim Flam got nervous for a second but they just remain calm like they have up their hooves if something like this happen.
Flim: "Do you have any proof that these are fake?"
Raveon: "Well…I…no I don't."
Avery: "Raveon, your hoof!"
Raveon: "Yeah! Those things are fake. They'll turn your hoof green!"
Flam: "Uh…that's what they do! If you buy this item today, not only will tell you your emotion, it will also turn your hoof your favorite color!"
Flim: "And what is your favorite color young colt?"
Raveon: "Green…bu-"
Flam: "Step right up everypony! Get your bracelet today! While supplies last!"
Ponies quickly pass Raveon and Avery as they lined up to buy the bracelets. After the ponies got the bracelets, Flim and Flam got ready to pack up.
Avery: "Come on Raveon. let's go back to our room."
Raveon started walking with her until suddenly, his eyes started to glow green then he hears to voices. They sounded like the Flim Flam Brothers.
Flim: That was too close! Any second, they would know that those things are just regular pieces of junk with blinking lights. How in Equestria did that colt find out?!
Flam: It doesn't matter how he found out. We have to keep this gig up. Cause there is no way we're giving them their money back!
Flim Flam Brothers: (evil laughing)
Raveon's eyes went back to dark brown. Because now he is ticked off.
Raveon: "Why those no good thieving S. !"
Avery: "What does that mean in your world? S. ?"
Raveon: "I'll tell you when we get back to the room."
Once they got back to the room, Raveon told Avery about his telepathic powers and how he heard the Flim Flam Brothers' evil scheming thoughts.
Avery: "They are lying to everypony! What are we gonna do?"
Raveon: "We have to catch them in the act. They're making that bracelet somewhere."
Avery: "So how do we catch them in the act?"
Raveon: "We're gonna do what I always do in the human world with my mystery team."
Avery: "And that would be?"
Raveon: "A stakeout."
Raveon and Avery are going to catch the scheming Flim Flam Brothers and this time, it will be the last time they scam innocent ponies. Will our favorite couple put a stop to their scheming ways? Find out in Chapter 14.
