Chapter 14

Raveon and Avery are on their way to catch Flim and Flam in the act. Will they prove to everypony that their bracelet is just a fake?

Late at night, the Flim Flam Brother were heading down to the docks to their ship, but they didn't notice 2 silhouette ponies following them. The scheming twin unicorns look around to make sure that they weren't followed then they went into the boat. Then when the coast was clear, Raveon turned Avery and himself back to visible ponies.

Avery: "Nice use of number 69 spell Raveon."

Raveon: "Thanks. I learn from the best."

Avery: "How are we gonna catch them?"

Raveon: "I got a camera."

Avery: "Okay! Let's get them!"

Raveon: "SHH!"

Avery: (whispering) "Oh right! Shh."

They both look through the window and saw the Flim Flam Brothers using a wire to make the blinking lights work. They took pieces of junkyard scraps and turned them into to steel-like bracelets. And each of them were spray painted on the inside to have a different color.

Avery: (whispering) "Are you getting all this?!"

Raveon: "I sure am. They are so busted. I like to hear them explain this now."

Raveon and Avery headed back to the hotel. They have all the poof they need to stop Flim and Flam's scams once and for all.

Raveon: "Okay. We have the evidence we need to prove to the ponies that Flim and Flam are con artists. But there is just one thing we are missing."

Avery: "What's that?"

Raveon: "We don't know where they are gonna strike next."

Avery: "Oh Celestia. That is a problem."

Raveon: (levitates a map of Manehatton) "Okay. It seems like they sold bracelets to these places. Central Park and Time Square. So what do those two places have in common?"

Avery: "They're popular landmarks in this town!"

Raveon: "Exactly! So if I recall correctly, those are two of the Top 10 popular landmarks in New York."

Avery: "Neigh York Raveon."

Raveon: "Whatever."

Avery: (giggles) "Go on super sleuth."

Raveon: "Being that those places are numbers one and two, they're going to the next one which is number 3."

Avery: "Which is?"

Raveon: (looks at map) "The Empire State Building."

Avery: "Of course. Ponies go there all the time. They're gonna give them those fake bracelets!"

Raveon: "The hell they are!"

Avery: "But how? They don't believe us."

Raveon: "Oh they'll believe us. I got a plan."

Avery: "Don't you always?"

Raveon and Avery made out there plan and went to bed. Now tomorrow has come and they went to the Empire State Building and like Raveon said, Flim and Flam were at the Empire State Building. Raveon and Avery winked at each other. The plan is all set!

Flim: "Step right up folks and the most amazing accessory that is out of this world!"

Flam: "Literally! From outer space"

Flam: "This mood bracelet is made from a very rare stone!"

The ponies were lining up to get the bracelet.

Flam: "This mood will change your life forever!"

Raveon: "That's a lie!"

Avery: "Those bracelets are fake!"

Ponies: (chattering "here we go again" "seriously")

Raveon: "It's true! I'm not lying!"

Flim: "I asked you this before young colt. Do you have proof they are fake?"

Flam: (evil laughing)

Raveon: (smile slyly) "Damn right I do."

Raveon used his horn and showed everypony a screen projector what the Flim Flam Brother's Mood Bracelet can really do. The ponies were shocked and furious. They took off the fake bracelets. The scheming brothers became scared and nervous now that their con has been exposed. They quickly backed away to the exit, but Avery was there with 2 police ponies.

Avery: "There they are officers! The Flim Flam Brothers!"

Police Pony #1: "Flim Flam Brothers, you are under arrest!"

The Flim Flam Brothers try to run the other way, but Raveon caught them in a net spell.

Avery: "Number 48 came in handy."

Raveon: "They're all yours officers."

Police Pony#2: "Thanks kid. Come on you two!"

Flim: "We would have gotten away with it brother!"

Flam: "Yeah if it wasn't for those meddling ponies!"

Ponies: (cheering)

Raveon: "Woah!"

Avery: "They're cheering for you Raveon. You're a hero."

Raveon: (blushing) "I'm no hero. I just stop two con artists. It's no big deal."

Photographer: "Smile you two! You're going on the Equestria Gazette!"

Raveon: "Equestria Gazette?"

Photographer: "Of course! Everypony in Equestria will read this!"

Avery: "That would be very cool! Come on Raveon!"

Raveon: "Eh, what the heck."

After they had their picture taken, Raveon and Avery headed back to the hotel. There, Raveon wrote a letter to Twilight.

Raveon:

Dear Twilight Sparkle,

Manehatton was simply incredible, but I owe all to you, Applejack, and the others. Avery and I caught Flim and Flam. They'll be behind bars for who knows how long. Don't worry. You'll see it in the newspaper tomorrow. Tomorrow we'll be leaving Manehatton and head on straight to Appleloosa. I have a lot of fun here. I'm knowing so much. It's better than sitting in the library at Ponyville. I'll write back soon. Now I gotta wash the green mark off my hoof.

Sincerely,

Raveon C. Brooks

Avery: "They're gonna be so happy when they get the news."

Raveon: "Yeah. I should thank you."

Avery: "I don't understand."

Raveon: "I never could've done this by myself in my world. My sister my brother…you. You guys help me in my world. We're a team."

Avery: "Raveon are you saying that the me in your world is a mystery solver just like you?"

Raveon: "Yeah. But here, you seem to have experience."

Avery: "No. This is my first time solving a mystery. I love it! I hope we do it again sometime."

Raveon: "You can count on it." (winks at her)

Avery: (blushing) (kisses his cheek)

Raveon: "What's that for?"

Avery: "For coming to Ponyville."

Raveon: "I'm glad I'm here too. There's nowhere else I rather be."

Raveon leaned to kiss her. Feeling his warm lips made Avery blush so red like Applejack's cutie mark. It was gentle. A mixture of sweet treats from Sugarcube Corner. Mesmerized lips press together for a long time. Their kissing felt like they were under each other's spells. Both of them breathing and dancing tongue tying brought their body to a fiery heat. The world around them become lost in a sea of lust and love. It was a magical powerful bond that sends waves of passion crashing toward them. Their lustful burning flames kissing made their blood rush. As they pull apart, Avery snuggles against him. Their intense kissing just blew away. But Raveon didn't want it to end. He leaned in and nibbled on her ear all the way down to her neck making her lustfully moan like crazy.

Avery: "Wish we could stay like this forever."

Raveon: "Same here."

Avery: "Where do we go next?"

Raveon: "Appleloosa. We're gonna meet Applejack's cousin Braeburn and some buffalos."

Avery: "Can't wait."

Raveon and Avery had another moment. They spent the whole time in Manehattan putting con artist in jail. Will they ever finish where they left off in Applelossa? Find out in Chapter 15.