For anyone who is still interested in this story after all this time:
I guess I'll put this in the bluntest way possible: There's a rewrite. It's called "Percivelly." You can find it on my profile or by searching for it. It's not the same as before, so consider it it's own thing for the most part, though the idea is pretty much the same. The threads left hanging here will be resolved there, eventually, as will everything else, and there's a bunch of new stuff too.
So why? Well, I was reading through this story, I guess just to see what I was up to three years ago, and well... I legit couldn't get past the first few chapters. I don't think it's horrible; this isn't not the kind of rewrite that gets made because I hate my past writing so much that I have to start it over or anything. The main problem is that my own self-consciousness when writing this story became very clear to me. I was, in short, a brat at the time, and I cared way too much about things that weren't important while not caring enough about things that were. I'm no sage now or anything, but I do want to try my hand at it again and see where that takes me.
If you're into that, great! If not, that's fine too. If you're mad, well, I don't know what to say. Sorry?
