I'm back, and this is the 4th chapter of Kidnapped
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Jack POV
"Dude get up" Jerry said shaking me awake, "were you here the entire night?"
"Uhhh, yeah I said still groggy since I just woke up, "I must have fallen asleep."
I stood up to see everyone had a look of surprise written across their face "Jack you look beat I think you should go home," Rudy told me.
"Neh I'm fine just a little tired," I headed to the boys locker room to change into my GI when I looked in the mirror.
I had tear strikes all up and down my face no wonder the guys were surprised I never let anyone see me cry.
I shook it of and got ready to spar, "Jerry, spar with me," he walked over as I got into my fighting stance.
All of a sudden I had flashes of all the different times me and Kim spared, when I got back to reality Jerry was waving his hand in front of my face.
"I lifted up my hand and felt tears pouring down my face, Rudy put his hand on my shoulder "Jack, go home."
I walked into my house and put my keys on the counter where there was a note.
Jack,
I'm sorry, but I have to work late in the office.
Dinners in the fridge just heat it up for 45 seconds.
I'll be home around 10:00pm.
Love, Mom
I sigh, my moms not home and everyone else is at the dojo so I can't invite anyone over.
I slump over to the couch and turn on the T.V. I suddenly straighten when the words "Breaking News" pop-up on the screen.
An overly spray-tanned man walks in front of the logo for the Seaford jail.
"Today at 5:00pm wanted criminal Andy C. Hunt was captured in an ally trying to kidnap a girl", I quickly press record.
I sat frozen in my seat, this was one of the guys that kidnapped Kim, "Andy Is being held at the Seaford jail while police are still trying to find relatives of Andy".
Next thing I knew I was throwing on a jacket and heading back to the dojo.
I walked in while Rudy was helping Eddie with his form and Jerry was holding one of the punching dummies up for Milton.
"Rudy, I can't explain right now but I need you to drive me to the Seaford Jail now!" I shouted, but Rudy didn't question me because he knew I wouldn't freak out like that if it wasn't important.
Everyone ended up coming with to see what was up, it was a silent car ride even Jerry understood something serious was going on.
We made to the jail parking lot around ten minutes later and I hopped out and headed to the front office without bothering to wait for anyone.
As soon as I walked through the door I ran over to the front desk.
"Hello I'm looking for Andy C. Hunt I think I may know him," I said with a straight face even though I was lying through my teeth.
"Okay, come this way I'll take you to the visiting areas," he said not even glancing at me, you'd think they'd be more careful working at a jail and all.
He took me to a long room with the visitors, and the prisoners separated by a glass wall.
"Stall nine, visiting hours end at 8:30pm" he stated finally taking a glance at my face but hr just shook his head and left.
I headed over to the stalls, 7...8...9!
I took a seat and around five minutes later he came, he still looked the same, just slightly worn.
He was bald but still tall and broad but I didn't get a good look at him in till he stepped out of the shadows.
His eyes were such a deep brown they looked almost black, and right above his right eye was a long scar that went all the way down to his chin.
I could tell that his eyebrow got slightly mis-shapen from it, as he sat down he gave me a grim look.
"Who are you?" he spat at me his voice musky like he hadn't spoken in ages "What do you want?"
"You don't remember me?" I asked even though it wasn't really a question, "I remember you, you're the guy that kidnapped my bestfriend," I said while my voice was slightly rising.
"Ah, yeah I remember you, lover boy," he started to grin and gave a slight chuckle.
By now we were the only people left in the room "Where is she?" I asked "Is she alive!" I shouted.
"Look here boy, that girl that you want is alive," I let out a sigh of relief, "But I ain't gonna tell you where she is, first you have to do me a favor and I'll tell you anything you want".
"Anything, I'll do anything you want to get her back, now what is it?" I shouted.
"I buried something awhile back at my old house just in case something like this were to happen" he explained gesturing around himself.
He grabbed my hand from the space in the glass that was open so we could hear each other talk.
Took a pen out from a pocket in his orange jumpsuit and write something down on my hand.
"I want you to bring it to me, and then I'll tell you anything you want to know," he let go of my hand.
I was about to ask him where it was buried but he got out of his chair and left before I got the chance.
I headed out the door to see the guys waiting for me in the waiting room where they all started asking me questions.
"Yo, dude what was that all about?" Jerry asked me, "I'll tell you later right now we need to go," I said heading towards the car.
"Jack, stop I'm not taking you anywhere else in till you tell us whats going on," Rudy said forcefully with a stern look on his face.
"Okay, this might be hard to believe but I saw on the news that the police captured Andy C. Hunt, it showed his picture and I think it was one of the guys that kidnapped Kim," I said fast so that we could get going
"Jack, how could you know its him after all these years its highly unlikely," Milton stated.
"I think I would remember the face of someone that captured my bestfriend," I shoot back.
I ran to the car before they could make anymore statements about the situation.
I saw Rudy's new GPS system in front and looked at the address written on my hand and quickly typed it in as the guys came into view.
As Rudy slid into the seat next to mine I begged, "Rudy please, I need you to take me to this address he hesitated for a second but started the car.
We arrived around a half hour later to a broken down old house.
It looked abandoned, still had furniture, and loads of random family pictures hanging inside.
The ugly floral wallpaper was peeling in the corners, and the white carpet almost looked brown with dirt.
It seemed as if no one had lived in it for years.
We walked out onto the brick patio but as soon as our weight hit, the bricks started to crumble under our feet.
I started to wonder where he would bury it but it only took a minute for me to notice the obvious.
There were long, gigantic weeds everywhere except in one spot where the dirt came a little bit above the ground.
I ran over and started digging, it wasn't long till I found a dirty, old box made of wood.
The box was about the size of a grown mans hand and it had mold running along the edges.
"What do you thinks in there?" Eddie asked obviously curious.
"Let's find out," I said as I started to lift the lid of the box, I reached in and out came a 6 inch knife covered with a leather case.
"Jack, you know we can't give him that ," Rudy sighed "Even if he might tell us where Kim is".
"Yo, I think I have an idea" Jerry announced, "That will be a first," Milton mumbled while Jerry lightly nudged him.
"You guys know my uncle Josh right?" Jerry asked "Anyway he owns this joke shop like an hour away from here and..."
"Jerry, how is this supposed to help" I asked slightly annoyed "Yo, not swag, let me finish, anyway for Halloween I got this ligitiment lookig metal, I put it in my locker that day they were doing a locker check and got called down to the office because of it," he explained.
"I swear I nearly got expelled, best part, it can't cut nothing, Jerry explained excitedly.
"Jerry, dude that's amazing!" I yelled "Let's go!" "Sorry dude its closed till tomorrow," Jerry slumped, "Visiting hours are over anyway its going to have to wait in till tomorrow," Rudy informed me.
I sighed and headed back towards the car its going to be a long night.
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