The daughter of Kronos chapter 5
This is my fifth capter for my first fanfic I hope you like it and please review and tell me what you think I am still trying to find a freaking beta to examine my work but no such luck. I am sorry if I misspell any word's or character (not ooc's) name's PJO and TKC belong to rick riordan I own nothing but my plot and ooc's. Ps: BTW I am done with my exams so I hope I can update day to day Enjoy reading!
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Finding Ryan was easy because he always has this fear aura that everybody is afraid off except me, Angela, and Percy so technically I am Ryan's one out of three friends in Camp Half-Blood. He sat on the porch of his cabin which was decorated to look on what you fear the most in your life but I try not to concentrate on that so I then went to see Ryan. He looked alright despite the fact he has only one friend in an entire camp, his parent's are dead, and everybody is afraid of him. When he saw me he grinned at me and ask me to sit down next to him he said "hey man how's it going you dad still messing with you ?" "still the same I guess" I replied. "Listen can you do me a favor ?" I asked "sure depends on the favor" he replied "the thing is…. Do you want to go on a quest with me ?" "sure I guess I could always's use the challenge" he replied with such cockiness I thought it was going to be easy to persuade him but I warned him "don't forget about your fatal flaw Ryan" "Okay okay so what's the quest about" "Well we are going to find Kronos kid and take her back here" "sound's easy" he shrugged "with six other people to help us" I said he then lost all happiness and said gloomily "why 6 more people ?" he complained to me. I guess when you have just one person that care's about you it's not easy to be in a group especially with 8 people "don't worry Chris and Angela are coming with us so are Percy and Annabeth" I said to persuade him he always feel safe when Percy is around "Well if Angela is on the quest then maybe…" he didn't finish the thought I knew he had a big secret crush on Angela since he first saw her but I shrugged it off because almost everybody who has not have a boyfriend/girlfriend will fall in love with a child of Eros at some point ,But I can see that Ryan was desperately trying to get her attention like when he tried giving her roses when it was her birthday and (sorry getting off track).He then asked me "what about the other 2 members you said there were 8 people" "do you remember the new comers Carter and Sadie Kane ?,well they are on the quest too and BTW respect Carter because he is a king of the Egyptian's and he looks like he fears nothing maybe he does not fear you." He sighed liked he wish it did happened I then asked again "are you coming or not ?" he said in a hopeful voice "I'm going just to try to impress Angela" "thank you and I will owe you one" I said grateful at his decision. I then told him to meet at the big house at 6 pm. I checked my Rolex watch it was 5 pm enough time to tell the other's to meet at the big house at 6 and eat some snack's.
After I told everyone where we were supposed to meet I traveled there on foot (shadow-traveling is hard you know!). when I arrived I saw Carter,Sadie,Chris, and Ryan. Carter was talking to Ryan which made Ryan extremely happy ,Chris was fiddling with his Platinum/Steel Walther PP and was shooting at chiron's party ponies t-shirt . Angela,Percy, and Annabeth were not here even after I told them to be here I waited until they arrived 5 minutes later percy had lipstick on his cheek and Annabeth's hair was messy I raised my eyebrow in suspicion of this turn of events and they saw me "hi sorry we are late" percy said with no forgiveness in his words finally chiron came into the room "everyone sit down and Chris stop shooting my t-shirt" he said in a stern voice which Chris stopped shooting and everybody sit down around the ping pong table "are you aware why are you here and what you should do ?" chiron asked and everybody nodded " well then I already gave you a ride,money,and new clothes to blend in" "hold up are you saying that my N7 jacket sucks ?" Chris was asking in a sad tone "no Chris I believe not everybody knows that the leather jacket is a collection item and if it were damaged on the quest then it would be.." "right got it sorry for interrupting" he said quickly and shut up. "well then I guess the meeting is over good luck and stay alive" and he trotted back into his room.
"well that was interesting but aren't we supposed to have a prophecy ?" said Chris happily " well we do " said Annabeth and she recited the prophecy:
8 shall go on a quest to decide whether who lives who dies
Combined of Greece and Egypt and you might survive
A Son of death, daughter of love,Son of Fear, The Pharaoh, The host of Isis,Son of posiedon, Daughter of Athena and the son of fire
They must go south if they want to find the daughter of time
They will find the one they call a liar
And must beat the comfort that they desire
"Or the other prophecy that was the first we heard" I said and I recited the words:
8 shall go on a quest to decide whether who lives who dies
Combined of Greece and Egypt and you might survive
Find the doctor and he will tell the Code
And you will know the deaths road
Three shall perish by the magicians hand
But five shall prevail to go to no mans land
And when you thought you will live tomorrow
You will suffer death or sorrow
"well the one that Annabeth said describes the people going on the quest" said Carter "but the one Nico said tell's us were we can find her maybe in no mans land" said Ryan "but the one Annabeth said tells us to go south which at least is a good clue" said Percy "but the one Nico said tells us that 3 of us are going to die" said Chris "and the one Nico said tells us we need to find some sort of doctor that tells us a code of some kind" said Sadie "except the one that Annabeth told us was that there was a liar in the group" I said " "I like the one that Annabeth said" Angela said "agreed" said Chris and Ryan. We then walked out of the big house and went to the edge of border's of Camp Half-Blood where a limo was waiting at the edge of the road "Awesome man did Chiron ordered this ?" Chirs said excitedly "nope I did" said a voice coming from behind I tried to grab my sword but Chris was faster, he took out his pistols and shot at the sound of the voice but it just laughed "isn't that rude to shoot at a person who help's you" said the voice the smoke then dissipated and revealed a boy age 16 with two set's of eye colour gold and silver. "horus good timing" said Carter and gave him a fist bump "whore who?" I said and Carter just sighed "Horus is the Egyptian god of war" "oh ok" I said because I did not want to anger any more war gods for my entire lifetime"anyway thank's for the ride so if you don't mind if I drive ?" said Sadie "NO WAY !" said a protesting Anabeth she's 13 year's old for gods sake "she did had sex at 13 year's old" said Percy "What!" said Angela,Chris, and Ryan at the same time "It..It…IT WAS NOT SEX! IT WAS SOMETHING ELSE I DON'T KNOW! GAH!" Sadie shouted "Guy's stop arguing" said Chris who's hand was inch by inch getting closer to his gun.I thought this would be a full fledge fight until Chris finally he couldn't take it anymore I guess and he grab the gun and shot it in the air saying "STOP ARGUING!" then everyone went silent. " we haven't even gone out of camp half blood and we are fighting over a freaking limo come on!" "now let's go into the limo shall we?" said Ryan "and by the way I'm driving" Angela said who was already beside the limo and was waiting to enter while we were fighting "Clever girl" said Ryan with love in his eye's I just said the most reasonable thing in that situation "I call shotgun!" and I ran and everybody else followed me
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I thought a limo was never this big. I looked like a huge mansion in it with colorful Egyptian hieroglyphs,a hot tub,blu ray disc's in the back,and auto-driving."So where do we go now ?" I asked as I buckled my seat belt. "we need to go to JFK airport" Horus said while reclining in the sofa "Please not JFK" said Percy with a worried tone, I remembered that Percy hated the sky's because it was Zeus territory. "how about we ride in the limo to JFK then you can use blackjack to go wherever we need to go" I then turned on the ignition and the car purred like a cat. "And by the way don't go to fast because this thing can go about as fast as a speeding rocket which is ….." Horus never finished the sentence because I slammed my foot on the gas and everybody except Horus and me jolted to the back when I looked back Percy was holding Annabeth's hand Nico and Sadie were In the hot tub there clothes soaking wet Chris and Ryan were calmly sitting in relaxation because they actually wore seatbelt' I looked at Ryan's face his face was shining with excitement and adrenaline my heart skipped a beat when he looked at me with those blood red eye's of his. I had a crush on Ryan since I met him I thought it was just the power of Eros but the power make's people fall in love with me not the other way around so I knew I was in love with him. But I can't risk a relationship when everybody whose single wants to make out with me if they see me but my heart just couldn't take that. I then tried to focus on my driving, on the way to JFK I almost hit 10 pedestrian's almost flipped over 2 time's and almost crashed the car 15 time' then finally reached JFK airport when I looked back Chis and Ryan were talking in the back laughing like crazy Percy and Annabeth's face were priceless as they were terrified and shocked on the situation ,Nico and Sadie were still in the hot tub holding hands and trying to get out of the tub, When I saw Horus he changed his form into a white man with a grey suit and sunglasses hiding the golden and silver eye's. we then exited the limo and when we all got out Horus pressed a key from a key and it drove off by itself. "So thanks Horus for the ride and everything" I said. "So Horus why are we here exactly ?" said a curious Carter who was looking at Horus like he had something behind his sleeve. "Well it is because you need to find or as you would call him " said a boring Horus. I then remembered the part from the prophecy about a doctor and I said "wasn't there some mentioning of a doctor and him telling us a code" "good thinking Angela" said Ryan clearly impressed of what I just said I blushed and he blushed too when I looked at him or was I hallucinating but before I said anything Horus said "well off I go I can't help you from here so go find " and he turned into a falcon and disappeared into the sky "great your war god was kind of a puss Carter" said Percy "do you seriously want to meet my father" Carter said as he was taking his sword from thin air "why is he going to give us punishment for god abuse" said Nico but Sadie slapped in the face for that comment "Nope, because the god of the dead is my father" said Carter in a not so menacing tone "so let me guess, your dad is Darth Vader and your Luke Skywalker" Percy said and laughed at that comment we were laughing until we hear a voice from behind "Lord and Lady Kane I guess you brought some friends we turned around and I wanted to run for my life
That is the end for chapter five of the daughter of kronos review,favorite,and follow
