Okay guys...this is going to be the last update for a week or so, you review so fast and i cant catch up with you! Not all of this was pre-written and im trying to get it written and wondering whats going on with it, i loved all the reviews, i'm glad some people can get hooked so easily on this, i know i did :). I have a new story in mind for when this is done i might post, i'll post the summary at the end, could you tell me if you would read it?
I DONT OWN TWILIGHT OR ITS CHARACTERS!
Chapter 28
Alice's POV
A couple hours after he got back from his day actually at 3:00, Edward was out the door, slipping on his sneakers with phone in hand. I did not want to know, I mean who knows what he is doing. We are talking this Edward about not some random stranger that came into the penthouse trying to get out before I see them. My breath hitched when he was finally gone, this is the first time I have been alone for a while after my kidnapping.
They never did find the people. I do not even know if the person is, real names were Mike and Seth….well I should probably tell the police sometime about my attack. I mean…I cannot keep it a secret forever, if I keep it hidden how people will know not to harm me in the next few years. I mean I overreacted over my husband's name, freaking out, Edward was the one I could think about the time and another man's name made me just freak.
Bella and I are friends yes, and my cousin is the father of her daughter….so we have a good reason to be good friends, but….what if we are just friends because of Nessie?
Bella's POV
She wanted Edward…
"Momma?" she asked
"Renesmee…w-what did you say?" I asked
"I want daddy, momma!" she said
"Daddy?" I squeaked out
She nodded her little head,
"Daddy, my daddy?" She asked
She knows….she knows Edward is her daddy…can I call him? Can I….what…what am I supposed to do?
"Momma!" she said stomping her feet
"What?" I asked
"I want daddy!" she said
Daddy….Edward would love to hear this. I had my phone at the table and searched and searched through my contacts, he made sure I got his number back in my phone because of Nessie, I am glad he did now.
"Bella?" he asked
"Edward…" I said
"Bella what's wrong? Is it Nessie?" he asked
"No…well kind of" I said
"Bella please tell me" he said
"Nessie wants her daddy" I said
He did not speak,
"Edward?" I asked
"She….she asked that?" he asked
"Yes, her own words were 'I want daddy" I said
"I'll…I'll be right there" he said
He hung up the phone, and I hung up mine to see Nessie on the bed waiting,
"Daddy's coming" I said
She smiled her little 3-year-old smile. A few minutes later, the knock on the door got Nessie off the bed and ran for the door. Lifting her hand to open the door, I helped her knowing it was Edward, when I opened the door she placed herself on him. I smiled at Edward and he smiled back,
"Daddy!" she said
He smiled even wider hearing it in person,
"Hey baby girl" he said
He picked her up in his arms, and she put her arms around him
"Thank you" I said
"It's not a problem Bella, she's my daughter to" he said
"I know she's your daughter to…but I've been thinking about the past, that's all" I said
He took his free hand, and placed it on my cheek
"Don't….don't think about the past, just our future" he said
"Our future?" I asked
We are parents to Nessie, not a couple, what does he mean?
"We'll talk about it later" he said
He wants to talk about something….something really important later. What could he really need to talk about later? Why can't we talk about it now?
"Why not now?" I asked when we walked into the room
"Because Nessie's here" he said
"Nessie is always here" I said
"Yes I know but I don't know how you'll react" he said
"Tell me" I said
He was about to speak when our daughter rushed back to him, tugging on his pants
"Daddy come play with me" she said
He looked at me once more,
"Give me a minute okay Nessie?" he asked
"Daddy" she whined
"Renesmee" I said
She pouted but walked off, and he looked to me,
"How do you do that?" he asked
"I'm her mother, just give it a few weeks, you'll be wrapped around her finger" I said
"I bet" he said
I smiled, and he walked off to play with our daughter, now just to get it out of Edward, I really need to know what's going on in his head,
Edward took being called 'daddy' for the first time well dont you think? Here is the summary i talked about in the beginning:
Isabella Swan has been abused her whole life by none other than her father and mother. Her latest boyfriend has taken her virginity and it was rape to Bella. Now she wants to try to move to New York to be with her aunt, uncle, and cousins. Will she beable to escape her family in Forks?
Would you read it? Please tell me a simple yes or no, can we get to 200 in a week OR more? Please please review!
