Hello my lovelies :D I think you must have been waiting long for this one?
Well don't worry, this one is one of the best I have written so far (I think). (Spoiler Alert: THERE IS NO SEX here)
I did take some of your advices as you will see in here :)
Just.. Happy readings, ok? Love, Eh.
It was slow at first – really gentle. His lips a little rough and her usually petal lips a little chapped, rubbing against each other, created an unusual sensation. It's like walking on the beach barefoot, it is a little lumpy, uneven, but not an uncomfortable feeling… It felt… soothing…
It wasn't her first kiss, obviously. Though, she noticed the difference. Hook's kiss was much… comfortable? It is as if his kisses were coated with honey, a taste of sweetness combined with faint cigarettes washed over Ariel's sensations. Was this some type of… drug?
Her mind was blurring. I should push him off… She really should… Her head was getting dizzy, oh she wasn't thinking straight anymore. Her fists that were originally balled up relaxed. Her knees weakened. The throbbing pain in her legs dimmed down… She closed her eyes to enjoy the moment of calm.
Hook wasn't aware of what he was doing to her. His hand snaked up the small of her back without him realizing. Tangling itself in her wild flaming hair, his fingers tugged onto her hair.
Ariel felt the pull. It was not awkward… It felt… nice. A soft silent sigh escaped her lips.
The pace suddenly changed. Hook's mind reacted on its own, her movement must have alerted him. Applying more pressure, he angled his lips in another position. Slowly, but firmly, he sucked onto her bottom lips.
! Ariel's eyes opened. Her shock caused her mouth to open a little. Using this fully to his advantage, Hook snaked his tongue in. His lips suddenly hungry for hers, he drank her in. The friction would leave bruises, but he was too caught up in the moment to care.
His hand left her hair, and went to her neck. Holding her head in place, he brought Ariel closer to him.
Hook didn't know what was going on, oh how his mind was in a daze. The moment his lips touched hers, though, he knew, that his lips, his hand, his body, his mind, ached for hers. He ached for her as if she filled out an empty part of his lonely soul at sea. Though the thin white dress he had modified for her, Hook could feel her body, oh so close to him. So smooth and perfect, like a Persian doll, delicate and easily broken. Like a red flower, awaiting to be plucked…
The red flower let her lips be bruised, touched, damaged. Ariel let Hook's hand discover the small of her back, as she enjoyed the forceful yet intimate kiss. It wasn't something she had experienced before. Hook always introduced new things to her, things she had never seen nor felt before…
Suddenly, she stopped.
Images and short clips of their first night together hit her like a falling comet. His face, now Ariel remembered, showed nothing of love nor care… It was only lust. Is that what he wants now? Again?
She tensed up. The throbbing pain returned. Her relaxed fist balled up again. How dare you, she bit hard on his lips, how dare you use me again? The metallic taste of blood crawled into her mouth. Her mouth felt murky, the honey and sweetness long gone and replaced by a salty flavor.
"Ouch!"
Flexing her arm, Ariel forced her hand to move. A quick and swift move, thought she didn't why it was so hard to do so, she slapped Hook on the cheek.
The slap brought Hook back in reality. Shit! What am I doing? He cursed himself, and searched for eyes for any signs of forgiveness.
There were none.
"Damnit," he cursed, "I don't know what came over me, and I'm sorry that I kissed you, but – " I think I love you. He wanted to say.
Ariel couldn't take it anymore. She didn't want to hear what he had to say to his defense. Would it be you didn't resist, so…
She hurriedly pressed her hands to his lips. They felt hot and warm. Ariel could still feel the sensation on her own lips. Why? She wanted to ask. Why would you do such a cruel thing? Why would you want to use me again?
I was starting to trust you.
Ariel probably didn't notice, but in the corners of her dim green eyes, salty water started to leak. And they slid down silently, to the corner of her heated sore lips.
Tell me, how did ya like it? Good? No?
I actually did some research (in kissing scenes *hides*) before writing this.
Read and REVIEW PLEASE?
and Sonia, you always reply so fast :) Cookie for you.
