Prompt Ex 1-A
Video Game A - Ponyvania (PART 1)
Video Game B - Mighty Gunvolt Burst (PART 1)
Cue prologue text...
In the A.U. where Discord isn't reformed...
Monsters increasing and infesting more...
Evil worships the Chaotic Super-God...
But not Equestria, and especially not Daku.
Who is Daku? He is...the 64th Mighty Number...
And he's packing Custom Shooting.
The portal of the VR wormhole opens below the Onyx Dark-Gray and Green Human-like Robot also known as a Reploid in MMX tongues. Falling to the new Dimension, and into the forest with Clouds darken by evil purple magic.
Daku lands on the ground feet first, and Observes his frontal view. He sees ahead a building very far from here.
"This must be my target to approach." Daku said, "Right, I'm going in."
Dirt-covered Zombies rises from the ground. Daku already readies his wrist blaster, from his normal hand now a mighty blaster, firing energy bolts at the undead. Each cracks through the skulls and bones of the Zombies. Small green tentacles rising and squiggling to try and get Daku, but foiled when Daku tosses his Cross-shaped Gyro, cutting them apart.
Daku reaches the next area and jumps over the stone-brick wall, before firing more of the Energy pellets aimed at the hostile Parasprite. Pop goes the sprite. His blaster charges up, light-blue fiery aura is surrounding him before turning yellow as he sees a giant undead bear. He jumps and two missiles comes out, flying in a cluster formation, homing at the undead bear coming forward. The undead bear swipes to deflect the missile but poor choice as it blows the undead bear's arm off. Second one knocks it down.
"This is gonna be fun!" Daku laughed, He moves on and takes care of more incoming Parasprites with killing intent. He reaches the wall taller than him. "I should be able to control my mid-air dash in any direction." He does so by jumping and using the dash boost from his robotic feet, launching upwards and then forward. He runs up to the pony-figured skeleton throwing bones, he responds with firing two laser waving to each others, and straight to the undead skeleton, which shatters apart.
Moving on, he reaches the pony-statue and just as he has reached a building, He turns around to see a shadowy pony wisp with red glowing eyes flying at him. He flies through him, then multiple times which makes him anger for each failing.
"Why! Can't! I! STEAL! YOUR! WEAP-" The last word is interrupted when Daku fired missiles, exploding and launching him back. Daku smirked at it.
"Custom Weapon, mother scrapper." Daku answered, "Looks like the power of VR blesses me. I'm Daku, Mighty Number Sixty-Four."
The Shadowy Figure prepares to charge at him, "Well then, Take this!" Daku allow his 64-Buster gun to charge up, while Jumping and mid-air dashing to dodge the attacks. It only took studies of the enemy's pattern though minimal damage has been suffered, but Daku kept his toes onto the ground, firing twin homing missiles at the shadowy pony. Blasts after blasts, the Shadowy Wisp thing fled. But not before firing twin missiles one more time, which makes it explode in pure black flakes.
"Not dead still." Daku said, "Looks like it teleported." he looked at his buster gun which turns back to his normal robotic hand. "Been awhile since I used them. That also means I need to re-master my Custom Shot technique." Daku said to himself, "Now then." He turns around and walks inside the building. There are six portraits of a pony. Two each must be Pegasi, Unicorns, and Earth Ponies. He sees a Royal Guard being a Pegasus.
"A human? Our princess's magic is suppose to turn any outworlder into that of an equine. A Robot you say?" Royal Guard said, "The princess is waiting for you on the top floor." Daku nodded and go to the next room, then meeting the blue princess.
"Who goes there?" said Luna,
"I'm Daku," he introduced, "Mighty Number Sixty-Four from another Dimension."
"Ah... Daku... She must be expecting you." said Luna, "But wiat. Dost that mean that thou art the ones chosen to..."
"I need to get going." Daku said, "I shouldn't keep anyone waiting."
He thus meets the white winged unicorn, who is also known as the Alicorn.
"Welcome, Mighty Number 64." Celestia introduced, "I summoned you here today because a great catastrophe looms over Equestria. I speak of Discord's return."
"Discord?" Daku asked,
"Discord is the God of disharmony, shaped as a chimera. He once toyed around Equestria with his evil Chaotic Magic before sealed into stone with the Elements." Celestia explained, "Just now, he is sealed in stone once again by the elements of harmony. The seal is weakening, and my magic may not be enough to hold him forever." Daku can see the red outline surrounding the statue, blinking fast as if its about to break free.
"That won't be a problem. We just need to use the Elements again." Daku said,
"Yes, but they unfortunately were stolen." Celestia said, "Thus I must charge you with a task of recovering them. You will find the first element in the Everfree Forest. Best of luck, Warrior."
"Right. I'll get to it now." Daku saluted with his right hand, before meeting Luna once again to be given a Map, and a powerful scroll of skill. It seem to work for him too. 'Celer Immutatio'.
Daku mid-air dashes out of the building and studies the primitive scroll of map, and reaches the entrance of the Everfree Forest. Zombies and Skeletons rises, and it didn't take long for Daku to arm himself and fire Energy Bolts. Each of them not fast enough to move out of the way, dirt-coated Zombies fall to the death, while Skeleton shatters apart from the bolt.
Timberwolf jumps out before Daku tosses a Gyro-merang at it, chopping the tree beast in half. He reaches the first of the caverns in Equestria. Jumping on each short pillars and using missiles to blast the group of Armored Skeletons to pieces of bones. Ghostly Armor coming to punch him, but it's alloy isn't strong enough against Daku's super titanium alloy, one uppercut sending the helmet flying before the rest falls down.
Daku thus reaches the blue door with a red eye. The red eye part fades away before the door part slides open for him to go in.
The Live Rose opens to reveal a green pony. Daku's robotic eyes is able to scan what it is. 'Alura Une'.
"Oooo. What's a handsome human like you doing here?" she said in a seductive manner, It starts by sending crawling weeds, while Daku opens his arm-blaster and fire energy bolts, doing minimal but quick and rapid damage. Daku fires like a machine gun, before moving out of the way after noticing the crawling weed, jumping to avoid the launching green Spines. One charge up and missiles fire straight at Alura. Daku returns to the ground and continue following it's pattern. Few missiles and Alura Une burns down.
"Nooooooooo. Why aren't you swaaaaaayed." she asks in her burning last breath.
"I remain Single, ma'am." Daku answered after it dissapears, before going through the stage of Everfree Forest, where everything is now snowing. He eventually finds a White Light-Brown Griffon looking death daggers at him.
"Hay!" she spoke, "What are you doing out here?"
'That must be gilda' Dirk thoughted, "I'm here for one of the Elements of Harmony." Daku answer,
"Oh, you're after the this shining trinket I found?" she said, "Well you can forget it. Finder's Keepers."
"Then." Daku arms his blaster gun, "I'll have to take it by force."
Thus Gilda flies up and fires feathers at him. Daku made sure to jump out of the way before firing energy bolts. It flies down and charges in, while Daku switches to his twin wavy lasers. Firing for each charging torpedo attack she does. Jump and Shoot, Jump and Shoot. It lands and sprints forward for a claw attack, but stopped by Daku parrying with a Gyro-merang. One swing sends her flying, before one toss, trapping her into a 12-hit Combo before returning to Daku. Daku didn't let Gilda any more chance, as he fire twin homing missiles. She is down and the Crown with pink butterfly-shaped gem drops down.
Daku runs up and grabs it. "One Down, five more to go."
"Who... the heck... are you?" Gilda asked in pain before falling to her unconscious state,
"Daku. Mighty Number Sixty-Four." he smirked, thumb-pointing at himself.
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