Prompt Ex 1-B
Video Game - Dead by Daylight (Part 1)
(You know what that means. Blood and Horror) (Other Note: While there's only 4 vs 1, I will make it 16 v 4)
Scenario - It is a fun game day, everything looks normal, until another game starts invading this game!
(M Rated because it's Dead by Daylight, and that means Blood and Death in this game)
Sixteen Victims in my sight in the nights of Equestria City, separated by their choice, hoping to avoid forced sacrifice from the killer. Who is the killer you may ask? Me. A muscle-bound brute in few clothing, and a mask.
Yeurrith once lived in the Ancient Rome who is praised for amazing strength like Hercule. Feared that he would steal the spotlight, Caesar had him sealed in a deep underground cave. Thousands and Thousands of years have passed since, and now he has risen from his ancient lifeless period to take revenge on humanity.
And all I need, is my fists to punch them bones and then hook them because the dark goddess said so. I shall do so and keep generators from running.
I slid down, creating scars of the tree from the forest, before landing on the grass feet first. It's time to get to work, making my way to the open theatre where I spotted one of the generators. There they are, at least two of them working on those, and outside near the house is a hook post. Perfect timing. I walk up without making any stomping, then grabbed one of the female students, slamming her and delivering punches to knock it down. The other female student ran while I dragged the victim and place it on the sharp hook, now coated with blood. It is not dead but will soon be once the demonic beasts finds it and eats it.
I turn around and go to the generator, running to give a fierce punt with my leather boot, breaking the generator and hindering their chances to escape.
Onwards to the tall buildings. I saw two others running to rescue them but I did a super jump, stomping in front of them. They attempt to run past by but I strafed and used my muscle-bound fists, launching them back. I turn around and head to the hook I'm guarding, before delivering another punch to the one trying to free the hooked victim. It is about to lose it's unconscious, unable to get up. Luckly there should be a hook in the Warehouse place. I grabbed him and run to that place. There's a hook inside one of the warehouse. Toss and it is impaled by the hook, and it screams from the pain of the sharp hook.
I turn around and see people trying to rescue the hooked victims, making me grow annoyed. I high jump again and attempt to stomp, only to see black speed-crawling creatures leaping at the rescuers and clawing them both.
The Aliens are also known as Xenomorphs. They are the high-agressive creatures who can kill anything. They are born from a Larva hatched out of the victim's body, and can grow into a Drone if well fed enough. They are known to spread and expand Colonies they can reach.
It looks like those Aliens who are my friends. So glad I can trust them and their Queen to help get revenge on the Humans who betrayed me. Moving on, I make my way to the right, where a red barn is located. Two aliens split up. I swam over the river, and to the barn where I hear chatter.
"Wood Chuck. You're on Lookout." said one of the Victims I must hook on.
"Roger, Apples." Apple victims too, ehh? Looks Like I got four birds in one lookout stone. I hug behind the walls without the windows behind me. I saw this Yellow person with brown hair looking out. The Wood Chuck person looking sideways, but is about to be dissapointed when I dragged Wood Chuck, smashing through the window with my fist and lift it by shirt, as it panics out loud. "HELP! AN ALIEN GOT ME!"
"I'm no Alien!" I boomed, slamming Wood Chuck to the wall, "I am a Beast!" and then slamming it to the ground before launching repeated stomps to keep it from going anywhere. It is then off to one of the free hook posts. There should be one to the north, so I use super jump to jump miles to the bridge, then to the school with one here. It screams in pain as I hooked him, blood pours out of its back.
I started using High Jump. Just as I reach the school, a Hiss enters my mind by telepath.
"TAKE CARE! THEY'VE SET UP TRAPS IN CANTERLOT HIGH BUILDING!"
I nodded and look at the broken wall, a hole fit for anyone to get in. And I see spiked fences. I high jump to the roof to find one piece of the rooftop now rubble, and it's open for me to get in. I find one of the Generators where three is working on.
"CANTERLOT HIGH? COME ON! WHY NOT CRYSTAL PREP?!" another hissed,
"SCREW THAT! I'M NOT GETTING LOST IN THAT CPA!" another hissed, and the two Aliens started having an telepathic argument fight involving the CPA. I sighed and focus on them.
"It's him! It's Yeurrith!" one of them shouted when he saw me.
"Yeurrith teaming up with Xenomorphs?! This is the end of humanity!" other panicked as it ran, but I got the third one with a punch and grabbed him. Simply walking to the downstairs in one of the classrooms which had a Hook. A place of that victim to be hooked, yelling "HELP ME!" as blood leaks out of the back.
"Well done, my followers."It's the dark goddess whispering to my brain, "Only Six more to-" and just before that happens, everything fades to immediate black. I look around to find out what is going on, I run up and ran into no invisible walls. But then text appears, which says: "Too many leavers. The match will end in 10 seconds."
"WOW!" I said in my first words after discovering that those people who encountered me rage quitted. It is afterschool and my fun gaming was getting hindered with people rage-quitting just because I was playing as Yeurrith.
"What happened?" said Smolder, one of my online Buddies, "Why they left?"
"Oh they rage-quitted." replied Sandbar, "All because of how OP is Yeurrith."
"It's actually the Xenomorph Drones." corrected Ocellus, also one of my Online Buddies, "They just couldn't listen to me. We're not using OP perks."
"Actually," I said, "One of my Perk for this Killer, 'Death by Boot' is. But it's perfect, it keeps their health down unless I pick it up and hook it."
"Death by Boot? That's the perk we use too." Smolder said,
"That's too brutal." Ocellus groaned, "I like to use Acid Blast perk."
"That's gonna hurt the Xenomorph if he uses alot." Smolder said, "Just saying."
"How about another game," I asked, interrupting their argument, "I am already getting used to using Yeurrith."
"You've already know their basics, for the hundredth time!" Smolder said, "Use something new."
"I am using Yeurrith because of its bulkiness." I said to Smolder, "I want something of a brute and someone that can punch instead of using a weapon." and I can hear the fiery snort from her.
"Come on! Let's play!" Sandbar clicked followed by each of us clicking on the 'Ready' button.
I crack my bare buffy knuckles before getting ready to super leap through the space colony, about to be infested by Xenomorphs. But first we must do what the Dark Goddess say. I hid behind to find two of the sixteen running to the Hi-tech generators, trying to fix it and get it to work. One Super Leap and a punch knocks it down, it is coughing blood after I smashed it to the inside organs. I also punch the other guy and stomp it to the ground, while the Alien Drone comes up and picks up the first I downed. I grabbed the other and make my way to the first hook found at the side room. Hook impales the back as I put it on the hook, it yelps in pain, and me to make sure it gets no medical attention for the Goddess to come and eat.
"MY FAVORITE STAGE EVER!" one of them hisses in excitement, "I KNOW ALL THE TRICKS!" and what follows is a hiss of evil laugher.
Somewhere else in the Space Colony about to be infested by aliens, a person in a Hocky Mask approaches. It is big, wears brown jacket and black clothing. Wields a Steel Machete and sees a person in space outfit running up to him. Big mistake for him, as the Hockey-Masked killer swings his machete, one, two, three. It falls down, blood pouring out of the new open scars.
I look around to find new Victims to hook and even punch.
"HEY! WHICH ONE OF YOU KILLED WHEN YOU ARE SUPPOSE TO BRING TO HOOK?!" one of them that's Smolder hissed an interrogative question,
"It's not me." answered Drone Ocellus,
"I DON'T EVEN HAVE A CHARM." answered Drone Sandbar, but that question is about to be answered when I spotted a random person. It must be one of the new killers, but not in my Killer Party list.
"What's this Jason guy doing here?"
"JASON?!" hissed the three Drones at the same time. Before I can, this guy walks off. I've decided to do some sneaking while looking for survivors to punch and hook.
(Part 1 Finished. 11 Seconds Left)
(Yes, I pulled a random Plot Twist. It's time for Dead by Daylight vs Friday the 13th the Game)
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Avg. Word length: 4.4
Reading Level: 9-10th Grade
I write like: Agatha Christie
My Writing Issues (Scanned on Grammarly) (50 in Total)
Grammar (15)
5 Determiner Use
1 Incorrect Verb Forms
4 Faulty Tense Sequences
1 Misues of Quantifers
4 Faulty Subject-Verb Agreement
Punctuation (10)
6 Punctuation in Compound/Complex Sentences
2 Comma Misuse with Clauses
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10 Misspelled Words
4 Confused Words
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2 Word Choice
Style (8)
3 Passive Voice Misuse
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2 Wordy Sentences
1 Weak or Uncertain Languages
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Plagiarism was not detected. Just like my previous prompt.
