Prompt Ex 1-B
Video Game - Dead by Daylight (Part 2)
(You know what that means. Blood and Horror) (Other Note: While there's only 4 vs 1, I will make it 16 v 4)

Scenario - It is a fun game day, everything looks normal, until another game starts invading this game!


"Winkamenda The Cupcake, huh..."

Days have passed since since Jason hasn't returned since. The players who layed eyes reported it to the mods. Most thinks it is a mod which this Game isn't made for, or some kind of a bug.

"Yepperu." said the mare, "This is based on the Horror Fic that Pinkie also liked. I am now on Level 15."

I return to the fun Dead by Crosslight game. Here comes the other three killer team players. Gallus, and Terramar who's playing as the Xenomorph. Looks like Smolder got him into the Alien Franchise too.

'To the players on Dead by Crosslight. Get off this game and Uninstall it completely. This is your only warning.'

I noticed a private-liike message on the Lobby Chat box. It is bold and pure red. The Killer Side Players noticed it too.

"Did you see that too, Gallus?" I asked,

"Yeah! Me too." Gallus answered,

"He thinks he can threaten us?" the player in the Winkamenda killer said, she's female of course.

'This is not a Joke, this is a warning as I said before. We do not need to tell you why, just leave Dead by Crosslight and never return.'

I snorted, and do some typing. 'I will play games like this at all cost.' and hit enter.

'So you're the kid I was told about. You should Die immediately. Please do as I say and kill yourself. No more of this Determination Crap.'

"Can we just block and mute those messages?!" Gallus said,

"Not to worry." said Terramar, who happens to be Silverstream's brother. "There is an option to block out Othergame Message. It was just installed here." and we were told how to do so, right click and the 'ignore message from this user'. I see no more of those, looks like I won't be listening to his crud.

Anyways, counting down to game. Three... Two... One... Start! Playing as the same Yeurrith.

Here's the fun Moon Colony Station, Moon Colony Crescent 5. Time to crack some bones. I meet this Cupcake Pony Girl bloodthirsty, the orange alien and the Pig Masked. After exchanging words of plan we part and begin, leaving the word "HOO-AH!"

I go to the Dining Cafeteria Room. I spot two who just saw me, turning around to run from me. I start rushing my way and do a super jump, blocking the entry and delivering a punch to that male survivor. I let fist cracking be done as it's my weapon cooldown. I then grab the downed survivor, turning north since I see a Meathook straight ahead. Running forward and jumping over to avoid them trying to rescue the survivor.

Hooking it onto the meathook and it screams of the hooky pain it received. I turned right and find a treasure chest. I just found a nice power-up. Haste! Just in time as I run to the survivor coming to the hooked survivor. I deliver a punch which didn't down him, but it got away. The Cupcake Killing Pony Girl running up with the scalpel to stab, it didn't got away and that Survivor gets dragged away. The Razor Xenomorph joins up to escort the Pony Girl to south to the next vacant meathook.

"OH S**T!" It's Terramar "HOW'D THAT JASON GET HERE?!"

"Terra! Take him and go!" Downed body dropped and Swapped. I run up to see the Xenomorph defending against the Attacking Jason wielding a Machete. I watch as the Xenomorph claws the Machete in half, but ain't enough as that Jason does a punch that sends him flying. I run up and deliver a punch only it gets stopped by that Jason. That guy must be super strong as a Zombie.

"You fail to listen to my warning. Now we're taking measures against you all." That voice belongs to the player using Jason. The hands pushes me back as my fists are caught in the blocking. To counter that I swung reversed overhead which tossed that Jason guy to the wall.

"How you like that, Dick!" I shouted,

I watch Jason get up and stared at me. I use the boxing pose to prepare for a fight.

"Dirk, the guy who believes in that Determination Crap." the Jason player said, "I've found you." and I watched Jason pulled out from the pocket a GUN?! Jason has a HANDGUN?!

In a quick reflex I rolled out of the way of it's gunshot.

"OW! THE BUCK?!" Uh ho! Terramar got shot.

"Hey Jason Player. Jasons don't use guns!"

There is a silence from the Jason player.

"IS HE EVEN LISTENING?" hissed Terramar the alien. No response still. Instead is another shot.

"Terramar! Take cover! We'll have to avoid Jason for now." I ordered,

"OKAY!" hissed Terramar's acknowledgement, we mazed around while not dealing with Survivors until Jason is repelled.

"To other Killers! Regroup! Let's take on Jason at once!" I announced to my teammate, before mazing around.

After two minutes we grouped up while Survivors were busy going after the generators. There's jason from south of the T-shaped Hall.

"CHARGE!" shouted Gallus, and we sprinted, ready to pound Jason until it is repelled. But looks like we're about to find ourself in a toughest challenge.

Tosses, Punches, and Kicks sent by the Jason Player. The Pig Mask delivers rapid thrust of the hidden blade, before Jask grabs the arm and does a boot to the chest level, repeatedly before letting the arm go and sending it flying with one more boot. Razor Alien doing a soumersault spin dash, which Jason moved out of the way. One, Two, Three shots and it is still fast. I watch it run which I know it walks only, and Jason does a leaping punch slamming the Razor Alien to the ground. Me and Winkamenda from behind, attacking from behind with Scalpel and Fist, only to be foiled by Jason Player's roundhouse kick. We were sent to the space walls for collision before sliding down.

"What kind of hacks is he using?" Gallus said, "Theres no way that Hockey-Masked freak is Strong, Fast, and knows Karate!"

"Now... Time for your ends..." The Jason player said, pulling out a Handgun. Recognizing it to be some kind of an Automag. I quicken a Super Jump just before he delivers a shot, hitting only the ground. I jump behind and do a punch, finally I hit him but only slightly effective from my strength. It only makes him stumble forward. "Now you've made me mad." it said as it aimed the Automag. I watch as ball of red energy grows from the muzzle.

"Energy Shot?" I asked, but before it can deliver a shot and me charging in for a stronger punch, everything fades to black. It seems the Survivors got out, ending the game. Match is officially lost, but at least we stalled this Jason guy so he won't do what schemes he is planning.

"You all got lucky." the voice from Jason Player echoes. "Next time, No Mercy from me. Especially to you, Dirk. I will see you killed." and looks like Jason left.

"Who does this damn guy think he is." I said glaring at the Screenshot of Jason that was on my Dead by Crosslight session. I share this to the private session on Cloudroom with my Six Classmates. Smolder, Sandbar, Gallus, and Ocellus knows this, but just need to show Silverstream and Yona.

"I know!" said Silverstream, since we're now in a Voice Chat. "He's trying to get us to uninstall Dead by Crosslight."

"No Jason tell Yona to Quit! Yona Smash back!" said Yona,

"We need a plan to make sure that Jason Player never invades our game again." I cracked my knuckles, it's time to find a Teacher who can help track that invader down and expose it to justice.

(TO BE CONTINUED! 2 SECONDS LEFT!)


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