This may not be my best work but it is still a pretty good storyline. I hope to get some comments on my work so I know that people like my work.

I do not own DBZ

Chapter 2 goku's pov

I walked down the path that leads to the tournament we were attending, with the z-gang behind me. I stoped when I saw something that didn't sit well with me. A man about 5ft and light purple with white hair sticking up and a man about 6ft 4 and a lighter red then blood with light red hair running to the middle of his back were standing right in front of us. I thought I saw movement on the red mans back but brushed it off as me being paranoid.

" Are you kakarot?" The purple one said with a soft voice. Before I could reply a person fell off the red ones back onto their head with a loud thud. I winced as I stared at the motionless figure. Then out of no where she was back up in an instant. She stared at the purple one for a moment.

" Did you just say kakarot?" She said in a mono-tone voice. Still staring at him. " You didn't say he was going to be here."

The purple man looked sheepish at the woman. She glared at him for a second then stoped when the red one put his hand on here shoulder in warning. She shrugged it off and turned to stare at us. She was wearing a black cloak, her hair was silver and knee length. She looked like a normal human but there was some features that makes her out of the crowd, silver knee long hair, silver outlined with gold eyes, and her really high ki level.

" My names goku. My friends call me kakarot. Your not my friend as I don't know you." I said staring at the woman with keen interest. She gave me a small smirk that was similar to vegeta, then bowed mockingly.

" My names nightshade D. River. And it is good to meet you goku the super saiyan." I was taken aback by her knowing that. Then she straitened out to revel a very vegeta like smirk. I heard vegeta gasp behind me, causing River to look behind me. And in a blur of motion, that I could tell River followed, vegeta was in front of her bowing in RESPECT! Vegeta NEVER does that even to the most powerful. River looks really annoyed.

" River-sensei it's good to see you" vegeta said gruffly while straitening up. I felt my eyes go wide. River rolled her eyes then chuckled when she saw our wide eyes.

" I thought I told you, you don't need to act like that with me. I'm more of a sister to you then a sensei. Even if we aren't related by blood." She said with annoyance clear in her voice.

" Come river, the tournament will be starting soon. I hope to fight you soon, goku. Until then." The purple one said turning to leave after watching the interaction with interest. She turned a little nodded once then turned back. She looked me and vegeta over once more before turning to vegeta.

" Vegeta I want you to explain my part in all of this" vegeta looked confused. " Tell him about 'my' father." She did quotes in the air at 'my'. Then she looked behind me to look at the others. Her gaze seemed to linger on piccolo causing me to smirk inwardly.'It seems that someone is going to have an admirer.' I thought as River turned quickly only to climb onto the red ones back once they left we all turned to vegeta for answer. He looked very uncomfortable and pissed off.

"Well her fathers name is bardock." He said before looking strait at me."Kakarots father." The people around me made a noise of surprise but I just stared letting my mind process what was just reveled.

"She's my sister?" I asked my voice going higher then normal. He nodded, smirking.

"Your older sister by 12 years." He said.

Muhahahaha, cliff hanger. Ahh, this is awesome. I love givin' people cliff hangers, one it keeps people readin' and wanton' more. Gihi, if you liked it please leave a comment on how you liked it and I might give ya another. See ya!