Prompt 5
Generic Scenario - "What would happen if I'm a Mobius Character ending up in the world of MLP?"


The sun dawns for the next morning in the world of Ponies, known as Equestria. Birds are chirping, trees are blooming, skies are breezing. Then Bushes are rustling. The bushes from one of the forest patch is rustling. Out comes a head of a human. His blackish metallic helmet shaped of any robot head is rusty and has holes. He looks like a teenager, pale blue eyes scouting the ponies.

No other way to hide the brighter red scar given by his Brother after his sparring with the brother over 3 thousand years ago. With his parents gone missing and his brother striking out on his own, denying Dirk's request to help and be his companion. Crushed by Rejection and Banishment by his Brother Brand, but at least he's given a proper life as a new Gizoid.

Now, he finds himself walking out of the bushes so he can explore the Ponyville.

Not so good at first. As he looks around to find a job. To earn funds so he can buy a house to live. His appliance unfortunately gets turned down for being too young, suggested to go to school. Dirk refused to give up however. He showed his refusal against someone getting him to stop being a special one. That's something he thinked.

Every night he goes to one of the Ponyville's Alley to sleep every night. At least he is able to dream about the memories, but unknown to him is a watcher undetected.

This is the 4th day, he's able to meet the Cutie Mark Crusaders. He's given a good home at the Clubhouse. Being half-human means he needs to eat. But on the 5th day destiny decides to remove the homeless status.

After heading to one of the Kindergartens, Cheerilee denies him, since he's not of the age. He tries to sneak in so he can learn, but stopped by a Voice.

"What do you think you're doing?"

Behind the window outside the Building, Dirk looks up to see the Purple Unicorn with Wings. Alicorn? Is what Dirk's thinking. That must be the Alicorn. It has wings and a horn.

Dirk decides to give a random answer. "Doing nothing?"

"I know you're trying to sneak in. You should know better." Twilight scolded, "Where are your parents?"

"I don't know. Probably missing." I answered,

"I know you are lying." she said, not buying it.

"Then my answer will remain the same, no matter how much harsh you get with the Interrogation." Dirk stated, which shocked her,

"Well in that case." Twilight glared as she charged up the spell, firing the memory spell beam. It only took half an hour, going through to find the truth.

"Twiiiii-liiiiiight!" Another female voice as Twilight used the Memory Spell. Here comes the Pink Pony, the Rainbow-Maned Pony, and a Baby Walking Dragon who has wings.

"Hey! Isn't that the one Scootaloo's with?!" said the Rainbow Pony, pointing her hoof of accusement. The flash of spell where Twilight's eyes goes from pure white to normal purple. "Did you find that monster's Parents?" asked Rainbow.

"That's the Bad news." Twilight replied, "His parents were no where to be found after being sent here." Which saddens the two. "I'll explain about his memories later."

She asked Rainbow to gather friends for the meeting after school to explain all about Dirk's memories while Dirk himself sleeps in the Quarters.

During that, the rest of the Mane Six were not happy about Dirk the Gizoid's older brother, who's pure human and expert in swords.

"What a poor human." said Fluttershy,

"That Bran's a big meanie." said Pinkie Pie,

"I can't believe that Jerk!" Rainbow was angry, "That's no way to treat a little brother!"

"You're not the only one with that Grudge." Applejack agreed, "This Brand Creature prevented him from finding their family. If I see him, I wanna buck his head off. That's no way to treat a little brother."

"Isn't that too Extreme?" Twilight Sparkle asked, "But I do agree against someone who treated him poorly." She turned to Rarity, "Have you spoken with Miss Cheerilee?"

"Yes, but she said no." Rarity sighed, "Saying her School is full and doesn't accept anymore students. But I can clearly see three empty seats of the 25"

"No it's not that." Applejack said, "He wanted to go to that School, but he's not young enough to enroll here."

"Applejack's right." Twilight agreed, "He is appropriate enough for our School, but he's very new to our World. I'd like to see him get up to speed."

Thus comes with Door slammed opening, where Spike runs in with a look that's about to barf.

"Spike. We're still in the Meeting." Twilight said, before Spike burped green fire which shapeshifts into a scroll. "A letter from Celestia?" she starts reading, "She wants us to Enroll him in our School to teach friendship. Then it's settled. Me and Starlight will take charge getting him up to speed, then I will enroll him. It is our job as teachers to teach." and thus they agreed.

And another thus, Dirk the Gizoid finds himself as the fresh new student in the school of Friendship. He met the Princesses on the second day, though disturbing them two for the truth Dirk spoke out, which Applejack laughed.

Afterwards, he becomes the Student's new Classmate. He met the light-blue Changeling Ocellus, the orange dragon Smolder, a Yak named Yona, Blue Griffon Gallus who tried to sneak claw but miserably failed because of the robotic parts, as Twilight said, "His parts are made of Titanium, and your Claws are pitiful against such metal.". Then there's Silverstream who he met only to get hugged, and called cute. Then Sandbar. It was very sooner Dirk and Ocellus became study duos, and Ocellus growing a bit overprotective of Dirk, which Twilight reminded of Rainbow Dash overprotective of everything.

Dirk has found a growing life at last, learning to fight against anything that's dishonest, and not even his big brother will force a terrible fate upon him.

(FINISHED! 20 Seconds)


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Reading Level: 9-10th Grade.

I write like: Arthur Clarke